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The rhythm is just right, and I really like the interaction between people described. It's not the kind of cool, assembly-line protagonist, but someone who gets along with people attentively and truly lives in the world of hunters. Anyway, I like it very much. After reading other comments, the author can just write according to his own decision, and it is difficult to agree with others. I'm looking forward to your story about a hunter with the protagonist involved.

The writing is very good. Many authors just pursue the plot quickly and ignore the most important core friendship among hunters. By the way, I would like to ask if there are any novels in which the protagonist is a survivor of the Kuluta tribe. Please, please. I gave it wrong, it should have been five stars.

It's a super good book. I don't know why the rating is so low. I feel like someone is maliciously trying to pull the score. One by one they say this is not good and that is not good. Please read other fan fictions before commenting. Other novels either have inconsistent characters, are full of foreign language, or are written randomly. This is the only one I read in full. Although some of them may be really poorly written, such as the ones where the protagonist is in Lin Hai, they are a bit boring, but overall they are quite good. If it weren't for the fact that hunters are so unpopular, the rating would definitely not be so low. Cheers to the author [Blow kiss]

This is really, really super, super good-looking, but to keep the score low, I'll give it 4 stars. Don't be fooled by the score. Moreover, the friendship between the little boys is also gay, which is particularly easy to admire! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Blowing a kiss][Blowing a kiss][Blowing a kiss][Blowing a kiss][Blowing a kiss][Blowing a kiss][Blowing a kiss][Blowing a kiss]

It's good-looking, although I seem to recommend the protagonist's enemy, and there's no room for redemption () It's okay, it's okay, after all, there aren't many good-looking Hunter fans. I wish the protagonist will recognize Kurapika as soon as possible!

The plot is smooth, the characters have distinct personalities, and the friendship line between the protagonist and Xiaojie is fascinating. The key is that there is no CP and it is so awesome! At present, every plot has something to watch, and it is one of the few good-looking hunter fanfics!

Write a review, after all, you've finished reading it. It's a very special article. The author's emotional line is more delicate, and his writing style is more relaxed and humorous. From a content point of view, I think the first part is better than Greed Island. In the middle, I feel that Kaia is the protagonist after all and should have more of her own journey. However, the author focuses on describing the three people's daily compliance with the original work, which seems a little less exciting. Overall, it's good, but it's very difficult to write the Dark Continent chapter later. I'm probably going to skip the draft. I hope that the main character, the Dark Continent chapter, can refer to the Food Hunter. I think this is a very well-written story in the novel.

This book is really good to read. Without OOC, it feels like watching the original movie. The content is really novel. It has its own separate plot and bonds. The protagonist's character is also very good, the arrogant cat, I feel so good! I use my more than 1,000 hours of reading time to swear that this book is so good.

The writing is quite good, but I don't know why it is so cold. I feel that there are very few comments and not many people urging updates. Is it because of the subject matter? Hunters are also quite popular. However, I almost gave up on the article when I faced Bokuer's naughty behavior at the beginning. Fortunately, there was no internet on the plane at the time, so this was the only book I didn't read after getting off the plane. Thanks to fate, I just read it =w= After the three people traveled together as a team, Kaiya (this name) Having played the original version, I still feel that it is a little bit weird. The interaction with Killua Gon makes people smile wildly. The other characters are also well created, and their combat power is not too low. The protagonist is very strong but not invincible. I hope you don't get fooled! ! ! I'm kind of looking forward to the follow-up episode where Killua and Alluga will meet up with everyone. When will Killua know about the immoral things he did to beat up the enemy Hakka? If this is the end of it, I always feel so unwilling to do so QAQ

A very nice book [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] This is the best hunter fanfic I have seen so far. The plot is very interesting and exciting, and it is very engaging. The plot makes people want to know the follow-up, [snicker][snicker][snicker][smirk][shy][shy]. The book perfectly expresses the personalities of each character in the original work, paying attention to the performance of character details. The protagonist's time travel is not abrupt at all. The logical plot is designed very well, and it also makes up for many regrets in the original work. The self-created plot is very consistent with the style of the hunter. The plot in the book is so exciting that people can't help but want to know the follow-up. Before, I was always procrastinating when reading a similar book, but this book was the only one that kept me reading. The only regret is that the ending felt very sudden and was not handled well. In addition, I really really want to read the follow-up of the book Dark Road. I can't sleep now, [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [face covering] In short, this book is highly recommended, it will definitely make people's eyes brighter, [like][like][like][like]

I finally finished reading it recently, and I think this book is really good. [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] The characters are very delicately created and have their own adaptations, but they are basically in line with the characters' personalities. The changes to some characters compared to the original works are not easy, such as Xiaoku's state of mind. Compared with the invincible flow, the combat power here has not collapsed, and the plot transition is very natural in this type of novel. Although some small details that have nothing to do with the main plot are a bit inconsistent with the chronic growth here, they are all in line with the inner vision of the author and readers and spread positive energy, such as Roy's growth. But I don't think this is criticism. The whole book is rich in daily life, allowing people to relive their own childhood and accompany the childhood of these characters again. Moreover, the daily life of teenagers also brings us a lot of joy, which can be said to be full of emotional value. The overall look is very good, and the most important core of friendship among hunters is also highlighted. If I have a regret about this book, it's that I didn't get to read The Adventures of a Young Man in the Dark Continent and the author. What's the name of your new book? ! @Pay's little secret [crying][crying][crying] Overall, I highly recommend this book!

This can be said to be a very good Hunter fanfic. Anyway, I have never read a better fanfic than his. I think what he writes is really in line with my taste, and Kaiya is not too high in combat power, and it still follows the main line, and has its own plot. The characters are not too disgusting, and it is not a cheating invincible style. Moreover, this book is relatively free. (I personally think Qikai is the eternal god) I can knock against whichever CP pair I want. Yes, the most important thing is that the teacher really reads every comment very seriously. I think the character of Kaiya is very lovable. He is very serious when he should be serious. Too serious atmosphere will be disruptive. The protagonist has no OOC, and I feel that many descriptions are also well written. The most important thing is that the author really does not delay updates. He will update every day, and even if he needs to ask for leave, he will say it in advance. The author is brave enough to fly, and his little brother will always be with you. NBrush the divine book, my father

I've been following it for a long time, but there have been no comments, and I finally remembered it today. The logic of this novel is very clear, and the character of the protagonist gave me the impression that he is lively, naughty, cute, and mean-tongued. The plot is also quite interesting. It does not always follow the original work, but also has some original plots and characters created by the author. In addition, what impressed me the most was the plot of "The Frog Prince". The protagonist turns into a frog and needs a kiss to change back, and Killua takes over. Who knew the earth-shattering ghosts and gods in my heart at that time [twitched my lips]. But this novel has no cp. Finally, I would like to say, come on, teacher [please update]

Yes, the group's favorite Kaiya, Jie Jie Jie, a cute little boy with a vicious tongue, Xiaojie tut tut tut tut, although friendly, but in the bottom of my heart, cough cough cough cough, it's okay, the author, the writing is very good [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile]

The combat power is normal, the talent is high, but the story is great, the battle scenes are also very good, the protagonist has a distinct personality, kills people but does not kill innocent people randomly, is lively but also very righteous, and saves Kate from Catwoman regardless of danger. The knights here are also well portrayed. They don't like to owe favors and put the troupe first, but they help the protagonist in every way (provided that the interests of the troupe are not harmed). I sincerely recommend

I feel like this is a top-notch fanfic. It doesn't have a very dramatic name. It doesn't have super invincible abilities right from the beginning (or anything later). The combat power is not too broken. The original character's personality is well written and appropriate, and the interaction with the protagonist is very good. It's very interesting. The protagonist is a young lady with a delicate appearance and a sharp tongue. She may not be doing things properly, but considering she is still a child, she doesn't care too much (I feel that this article has gradually got on the right track since meeting Xiaojie and is watchable) Give Kurapika a link to maintain reason and cherish life, and because he is the male protagonist, he will fight with Kurapika and no longer be alone. The attitude towards the brigade seems to be relatively reasonable, there is revenge, but in terms of combat power, there is no such thing as total annihilation. The great significance of fan fiction is to make up for regrets. This book is well written and has a very cute protagonist.

The content is really close to the original work! ! I really can't imagine the development of the protagonist's plot later! ! Just like teaming up with Hisoka! ! I originally thought that the protagonist would replace Dongba and join the protagonist group! What a surprise! ! And the interaction between the protagonist and Killua Gon really poked me! ! Recommend! ! ! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love]

Omg,, holy book! ! Every time I watch some of the clips, I always roll over. I can really relate to every one of them, and the characters are also very well created. It feels like a hot-blooded boy manga!

It's great, it's great, it's the best Quan Hunter fanfic I've ever seen [Adoration][Adoration]

Super pretty! ! ! I have been reading it for a long time and I like the setting of the protagonist. I also like to see how the protagonist gets along with other people, but I feel it is a bit lacking and not enough to read. It is finished after just reading. However, the author has written quite a lot. I have been reading books before and I have forgotten to review the book. I will wait for the author's next book! (*´◐∀◐`*)♥

One of the few novels in which the protagonist's strength improves with Gon Killua. The description of the friendship between the protagonist and Gon Killua is quite delicate. It is one of the few hunter novels with a relatively comfortable pace.

I have played the old version of Hunter + the new version of Hunter ten times in total. After watching it for a while, I feel that the style is quite similar to the original work, youthful and free. The only uncomfortable thing I see now (not out of the island yet) is deliberately suppressing the protagonist's combat power [face covering] There is no pressure on the strength later, but! ! ! Why do we have to separate again? [Crying] [Crying] I was very sad when we separated in the original novel. I can't stay together forever even though the main character follows me. [Crying]

The author has his own ideas based on the original plot, and there is not much sense of dissonance in adding the protagonist. Being able to have its own plot and reasonable strength growth process, and adding an invincible or system-enabled protagonist without any thoughtlessness is simply a breath of fresh air in this software. Great support from the author [Top post][Top post][Top post]

I read it for a few days. I personally think this is a very good Hunter Hunter fan novel. It is well adapted. The main character's Nian has been guessed and will not overlap with the original four protagonists. Kaia's name with Nian ability can show that he is a person who cares about his partners and friends. Some of them are quite funny. For example, Killua's Thunderbolt: was changed to "Kaia's Electrotherapist" [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]. I don't know what other people think, but I think this is a good novel to recommend. In the original version, Kaia changed the fate of some people who died and saved several people: Fei Jie, a female sniper in the hunter exam, Bakuul... The protagonist Kaia is a survivor of the Kuluta clan. This setting is good. Gon has a sharp tongue and lively personality, Killua is naughty and likes to tease and quarrel with the protagonist, simple Arlo, calm and composed Kurapika, violent Leorio, Bakuol, Hisoka... Form a perfect plot. I just saw the ant chapter. The author seems to have written a new chapter. Come on. Love the recommendation from a full-time hunter! [Learned]

The author's writing is very good. I almost read it in one breath. The characters have distinct personalities, but I still like the early and middle stages. It's not as difficult as the later stages. There are cute things, cute things, and I think Killua and Kaia are the two I like more. . Can you make another extra episode when you have time? Or do you have a wife? . Mommies are hungry for food👁️👄👁️

It's pretty good. I've never been able to find a story about a hunter who follows the protagonist. It's also to my liking [Blow kiss]

The teacher's writing is really good😭😭❤️❤️ The plot is smooth and there is no problem with the logic👍👍 I can't stop watching it. It feels like the protagonist has always been in the original work‼ ️ I also like the protagonist's character very much. I especially like watching their exchanges. It's so heart-warming🥰I just can't let it end🥹 The author's writing is so great. I will always support you🤓🤓

The author really carefully describes a new and different hunter story in Kaia's existence. Many fan works completely deviate from the original setting as soon as they are created, but the author can firmly control it within the framework of the original work. This alone can be regarded as an excellent fan work. It's a pity that the original content is still lacking. If it could be expanded and enriched, it would definitely be a first-class fan work. I hope the author can write more wonderful hunter works like this. There are really too few good hunter fanfics.

The bond is really attractive😍, and the characters are also very charming. I hope the three of them can grow up together and become more delicious, sweet and attractive.

Very beautiful! The most exciting and emotionally sensitive hunter fanfic I found this year. It's good to end at the beginning of a new journey, although I still feel reluctant to let it go... I really hope to see the continuation of the story after this chapter really ends in a certain year. Anyway, thanks for the treat!