
Yinghuan: Stars Shimmer Across the Universe
瀛寰:寰宇繁星闪烁
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 288k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi & Apocalypse
- Updated
- 3d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
108Chapters
3Reads
2Listens
204Reads · all time
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Obviously, the author has insufficient experience in multi-threaded operations. Personally, I think it was the first time I wrote a book that I chose the first-person perspective and multi-line narrative. Coincidentally, both methods tested my writing skills. Using the first person requires creating an "authority-obsessed" atmosphere, and whether this can be achieved remains to be seen. As for group portraits and multi-line narratives, it is particularly important to grasp the three-dimensional character creation. Does the article achieve this? I think there is still room for improvement. In addition, the mosaic processing of multiple story lines is not good, and each line feels unrelated to each other. You must understand that the "different paths lead to the same destination" for each line, and the plot points need to be shown. The simplest example is that Chapter 17 reflects the impact of other story lines in the form of news. You need to always remember what you said in your introduction: "This is the story of a group of people." In short, as the cover page of the book says, this is a "potentially good book." 🍉 Brothers, yes, remember to write an outline, remember to back up your outline and settings, don't ask why [star]
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