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I am a new author~ I may not have enough skills, but I will try my best to write better works~ If you enjoy reading it, please give it a five-star rating~ Please be merciful if you are not happy with it. A few words from my heart (I don't expect you to read it all, but I still solemnly request you to accept my apology) First of all, I would like to shamelessly ask everyone. If it doesn't look good or you are not satisfied with it, please be merciful and don't hit me⊙ω⊙. I would like to apologize to some friends who feel uncomfortable watching it and say I'm sorry. Many friends have given feedback, saying that the names of people are mixed up... In fact, I originally planned to make Zhang the protagonist, but later I realized that naming the protagonist this way might be a bit hasty and inconsistent with the identity of the protagonist, so I changed the character design, but due to my carelessness, I did not modify it completely. I apologize again to all those who feel uncomfortable watching this. This is my problem. Writing novels requires patience. A story of 100,000 words and a story of 1 million words build two completely different frameworks. Some readers commented that the world view I wrote was too big (and the combat power was too strong). However, there was no way. The first novel was to lay the foundation. Only after the world view was established can there be room for further development. In order to leave room for mistakes, there would be no lines to write later. I am also self-aware and know that my skills and experience are nothing. I can only be called a writing enthusiast. The first book may be more about hobbies and practice than making money. I have read all the paragraph reviews and book reviews. I can clearly tell my friends that the verification period was basically a few cents at the beginning, occasionally 1 yuan, and there were very few comments and reminders. Even now, there are still very few hahaha. Moreover, more friends like finished novels. Even when I read books, I rarely read serialized ones for fear of ending. Therefore, I am actually very, very grateful to those friends who are willing to read the series and give me comments and suggestions. Really, they are angels! Most of the comments section are friendly, probably because I have tried my best to write. Writing a book is a process of accompanying each other, a communication between the author and the characters. Maybe I am a newbie, so I will gain more knowledge from writing books, and see the qualities I hope and like in the characters. In addition, readers who want to make a guest appearance can put their 2-4 character name in the comment area, and we will arrange it after seeing it. Finally, thank you everyone for liking my work~ I... I have replied to all the messages since I was bored on the toilet that day. I have OCD and now I feel like I have to reply when I see new messages. It is very painful... I suggest everyone be careful when leaving messages, it is not good for me.

This book is good. It is much better than the demon world consciousness. The only bad thing is the Sea of Chaos. The Sea of Chaos should be understood in this way. Beyond the world is the Sea of Chaos. There are many worlds in the Sea of Chaos. You can only go to the world of the auction house by sending an invitation. Counting levels one to five. Miscellaneous soldiers are considered strong in small-level worlds, and masters at levels six to nine. In the Chaos Sea, generally only the top experts or high-level forces in their own world know about it, or people with high luck have read about it in books. Otherwise, some miscellaneous soldiers break the space to go to the auction house to auction items. Is this reasonable? The auction house sends an invitation letter to the soldiers, and the soldiers can come to the auction house through the Sea of ​​Chaos. Isn't this very reasonable? Everything else is fine. The auction house in the Sea of ​​Chaos is a little messy. There are no poisonous points in the others, but there are too few.

To be honest, the imagination is good, but the writing style is very average, but the author's temper is really good. I really can't bear to give low stars. I'd better support the new author DaDa with five stars. 1V1~

This book has its own characteristics. Everyone's name is changing [laughing evilly]. After a while, Ye Ji becomes Ye 14, and Zhang Shisi becomes Ye Ji.

Very good. But I suspect the author is wearing a vest.

At first I thought it was behind the scenes, but later on I didn't expect that it was all about the people who entered the copy.

Sit on the toilet and reply to me [thinking]

My words were rather unpleasant, so I stopped talking and left. 4 Stars to encourage new authors

Why haven't I rated it yet? Give it five stars, at least you can eat it like melon seeds.

Come on, author, it's very beautiful [Admiration]

Imagination is fine, come on

The writing in this book is so awesome.

The character of the protagonist is good, but why does this novel look so similar to the one in the abyss chat group?

When to go to Digimon

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very good, let's raise it first.

Very good, quite novel!

Okay, I finished reading it all at once

Can be pretty and full of stars

It feels like it could be pretty good-looking