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Let's just say that the child in my cousin's family feels like he was reborn. My cousin is from Wuhan. She has been married for 7 years and has always wanted to have a child. Both of them have had physical examinations and both of them are fine. They have tried all kinds of local methods but nothing works and they are not pregnant. I found an old Taoist priest behind me. The Taoist priest looked at me and said that I am destined to have a son, so just wait. Then last fall, I finally got pregnant. My family was happy and taking good care of me. Two days ago, I did a color ultrasound and found that the baby was abnormal. The mouth and nose kept moving. I did all kinds of examinations, but couldn't find the cause. Then I went to see an old Chinese medicine doctor. The old Chinese medicine doctor said that this child had something on his mind in his previous life, and his mouth actually kept talking. Later, I found a professional to watch the color Doppler ultrasound video and record the mouth movements, and then I realized that what the child was saying was "Update quickly. When will it be updated? Hurry up. Hurry up."

It looks good, but you can consider introducing some of the Eight Wonders. Compared with Tongtianlu, it doesn't show much power in one person, but it is quite fun in the Zhuxian world. The protagonist can throw talismans like crazy in future fights.

The writing style of the book is pretty good, and the logic of the writing is not too problematic. Except for the fact that at the beginning, the protagonist heard about the Qingyun Hehuan Sect, which seemed a bit familiar to him, giving him the feeling that he knew Zhu Xian. Later, when he saw Zhou Yixian and Lu Xueqi when he was a child, there was no reaction, which gave people a feeling that they did not know the plot. It was a bit unclear. I hope that the information before the protagonist's time travel could be written out so that it would be more immersive. I don't know where the plot will go after defeating the mountain god.

This book definitely won't be a ten, but giving it an eight is too chilling, so I'll give it a ten. All the perspectives in the book are given to the supporting characters who have suffered bad experiences, and very little is given to the perspective of the protagonist, so it always felt weird when reading it, and there was a feeling of anger in my heart that I couldn't clear out.

A book about the reunion of two worlds is quite profound. I hope the big questions will not be messed up, because it feels bad if the big questions are messed up [smile]

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Author, before you leave, tell us where to write next!

Why was it removed from the shelves @Guanyu

This book has changed its location. In Qidian, the prefix of the book title has been changed to Zhu Xian, but the rest remains unchanged.

The writing is very good. It can be seen that the author's writing style is very good and has a solid foundation. Although it is short but precise, there is no nonsense and no verbosity. The protagonist has a clear character and is not artificial. If it continues to be written according to this trend, it will definitely be a fairy tale. What happened, it suddenly disappeared.

Come, the author reads with me: From today on, I will never update. I will not travel, watch dramas, get sick, or play games. I will be strict with myself, cherish time like gold, be unyielding, strive hard, advocate first-class, strive for brilliance, and take pleasure in coding. , Worthy of my readers, worthy of my youth, and worthy of the future, I solemnly swear: I am an excellent author, and I will take coding as my mission. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship. I will evolve into a four-shift beast and dedicate my life to the cause of coding! [Sinister smile]

Overall, it is very good. It is considered a high-quality article on Tomato. There are basically no poisonous points in all aspects, and it is generally understandable. The only drawback is that the author may be polishing the plot in pursuit of quality, so the updates are really too slow. I hope the author can succeed

It feels pretty good, but I still want to ask if it will turn into some kind of stud novel in the end.

Everyone has their own opinions, but judging from these dozens of chapters, it's not much different from survival. Anyway, in my opinion, it's just ordinary. This cultivation level is also too low to be in a remote valley, and it is understandable that he is cowardly. Let's wait and see later. The emotional scenes are not good, but everything else is fine.

The main character has upright views and is in line with the core values ​​of socialism. The writing is good and there are no flaws. The writing is very good. I look forward to the update.

It's beautiful, come on, don't be a eunuch (Beep a few words in a low voice, damn, I've basically sent all the books I've said this to, I hope you stick with it) [laughing evilly]

I knew you could come out of the dark room. Come on, you look great.

Five stars, I like to see something with positive energy, something without grand narrative, and something that doesn't take a stand every day.

In my opinion, the writing quality of your novel is good, but no one recommends it, so the rating is relatively low, and not many people read it. However, you have a good grasp of the plot. Although you are not very good at writing fighting scenes, your description of the character's personality and emotions are also relatively delicate. If you can stick with it, it's a good book (›´ω`‹ )

It's pretty good to watch, but it doesn't explain the ending of Qu Niang, although I know it may not be a good one.

The author of another Zhu Xian fan has not been mentioned before. Recently, the copyright of Zhu Xian fan has been severely suppressed.

It's a good new book, but the updates are too slow. I finished reading it in one go. The author should update quickly. I'm so impatient [crying]

What's going on? Why are well-written books disappearing?

Update more soon. I really like Daying Immortal. I hope the protagonist can succeed him.

I've seen chapter 48. Well, the author is too slow to update. There are only 48 chapters. It's not bad. I hope it won't be unfinished in the future. Not bad, pretty good

What's going on? Why has the book been removed from the shelves?

The writing is so good, why should Tomato block it?

Hold on to the young master, the plot is flowing smoothly at the moment. Except for the Qingyun Gate being blocked, there is no movement yet. It is a weak point and the rest of the logic is self-consistent. I don't like many books on Tomato. Your side is absolutely at the forefront. When will you create a group?

It's a good book. It's a rare good book. I've also read your last book and liked it very much. I like the character of the protagonist of this book even more. Good luck to the author. [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love]