The Pokémon World Is a Utopia

The writing is good. There are no messy systems or divisions of various qualification levels. It restores the bond between humans and elves. The utopian world view is a plus. The description of battles is also relatively good. The soothing writing has a naughty rhythm. It is very good as a leisure read. Let's talk about the shortcomings: the dull feeling makes the sense of substitution not strong, the excitement of the battle is still lacking, the choices in the Padia region are relatively niche, and there are problems with the timeline (the theater is not easy to unfold).

Not bad, the author made it clear from the beginning that it is a utopian world view to establish Oita [Like] After all, because it is a utopian world view, some operations are very reasonable, but when will the protagonist's emotions return? I want to see the protagonist being divided among the five sisters [laughing] To be honest, many books make the background too complicated, but they are not capable enough to control it, which leads to various problems and even poisonous points. A simple utopian worldview is fine as long as the whole thing is relaxed and upward

It looks good so far. I'm so touched that there is finally a Pokémon world that is system-free and not dark.

I read the book reviews, and I wanted to complain, but they already did, and to be honest, when I first saw this book, I felt pretty good, I liked it very much, and then the confusing behavior started. Let's not talk about school bullying. The protagonist's emotional intelligence is also because of the mythical beast problem and time travel. In my opinion, the heroine of this book is a strange tree, right? To be honest, for you who suppress your emotional intelligence and pretend not to understand the bad behavior of a scumbag, the real heroine is Qishu, but what should I say? Are you still engaging in a ball of ambiguity and a harem? Yes, it's normal to have a harem. After all, it's also found in other novels. But what I'm mainly angry about is that the protagonist's emotional intelligence is incredible. Because of this, can you just engage in ambiguity? Having a harem? And what can I say, when I look at the protagonist, he always smells like a scumbag. Also, are you letting the mythical beast mess up the protagonist's emotional intelligence just to open up a harem? What bullshit reason is this? To be honest, I feel really uncomfortable after seeing these 60 pictures of yours. I will continue to read the questions after that.

I hope you all can comment more when you have time. It's okay even if it's good or not, and I can also know where my shortcomings are.

I'm so, so happy😋so cool As for Utopia Pokémon, it doesn't work if you don't watch it. It's just a utopia. Conspiracy theories and the like don't work at all.

Black Disability is outdated, this one is pretty good

Pokémon is indeed a perfect match for Utopia! And the grading is just right, there is no talent or anything like that! It won't be annoying!

It's actually pretty good. Although it may be weird in the early stages, and there are some things about Yu-Gi-Oh that I can't understand, but it's actually pretty good👌🏻. Later, about Sakaki and his Stand Power (it's not), it's actually quite reasonable. Regarding what happened to them before... Forget it, I won't spoil it for others. Mainly because I've read too many black doujins, so I'm actually not too surprised when I read other parallel worlds (and I'm still a Moon Chronicler), but the part about Akalon is pretty good, and I actually quite agree with the fact that the protagonist didn't die (actually, he did) ~ It seems that the number of Pokémon that Lin Song has will change. Will there be more unexpected partners joining in the future? After all... No, this should be regarded as a spoiler, but from the point of view of 6 changing to 13, it is completely possible. But the author doesn't have to force himself. After all, it can be seen from the author's words that the author is usually very busy. I just hope that the ending of this book can be revealed before one of the author and me dies.

Finally there is a dark style urban parallel world story

Sure enough, Pokémon is a utopia full of love and hope, a phantom that I am obsessed with.

I think it's quite interesting [Sending my heart] Xiaoye is cute, I hope to see more interactions between Xiaoye and Asong www (PS: It incorporates a lot of memes, but it doesn't make people feel annoying, and the author's composition is super complicated)

To be honest, I should have read more before giving a rating, but due to my personal selfishness, I want to give a score first. However, despite my selfishness, I have read 42 chapters so far. Five stars is enough for Pokémon fan fiction, and it is worth at least 4.5 Stars. Let me explain why I selfishly give points in advance. Because this book is very interesting to me, I even learned a lot. After all, I personally plan to write a Pokémon fanfic, and I am currently reading other people's books to collect inspiration. But I will talk about this later. Let me first talk about the reasons why I give the current high score. First of all, the most outstanding thing about this book is that it has many small details. It can be seen that the author is a true fan of the entire Pokémon series. For example, anyone who has played Zhuzi knows that when you replace the censorship leader later, you will find that thaumaturgy is a bit scary but also kind. This book has its own settings for the reasons. And there are a lot of settings in terms of setting. If the time in the borrowed book is set much earlier than when Xiaozhi starts the adventure, the system of setting the three families of the Three Kingdoms has not been completely perfected, so the Pokémon received by Thaumaturgy will be a dream monster. Personally, I think these settings based on the original work are really eye-catching. Although the timeline may be slightly different, more than 90% of the settings so far have prototypes that can be found in Pokémon-related works, and the rest can be explained even if they are added to the original work. Although it may be a little strange to say this, it is honestly rare. Although they are all Pokémon fanfics, this book is the first one I have seen that can do this. In fact, the author also knows how to use his own settings to develop events. For example, the current bullying incident in the college is still very reasonable in all aspects from the perspective of Zhu Zi's original work. He is what should have happened at this time. Let me describe it with a more abstract description. Most people in Pokémon fandom only write about Pokémon. Even so, there are very few people who can write the word "Pokémon". And while the author did this, he also took into account the word fanfiction. This is the first Pokémon fanfic I have seen. Of course, I'm not saying there are no shortcomings at all. First of all, the author of the first few chapters is very naive in terms of expression and in all aspects. In short, I feel that it is too naive. In fact, I can probably understand the author's thinking. After all, in the first few chapters of the novel, the protagonist and the people around him are in the kindergarten stage. This is fine for the people around him, and it is in line with their age group. However, it is a bit too much for the protagonist himself to have someone with an adult soul to be childish with them. At the same time, I guess the author is the same as me in the novel I conceived. I don't want to write an overly mature protagonist, but based on the characteristics of Pokémon fans, it is better to have someone who understands the Pokémon world. I used a more cunning method here, but the author did not have him, it was a very simple reincarnation. This leads to the beginning. Since the behavior of a protagonist with an adult soul is too childish, what about the first few shots? Because since the protagonist has passed the infant stage, the author seems to have realized this and restrained himself. Generally speaking, it is indeed gradually improving, but in my humble opinion, it would be better to add a protagonist who considers himself a mature adult but is more or less affected by his physical age and whose mental level is more in line with the age group he is currently in. On the other hand, the author has incorporated a lot of memes from other works, which is acceptable to me. After all, I am an old two-dimensional person, and my acceptance of this aspect and my recognition of memes are very high, but for some people, they may not think so. Then there is another point. Of course, this is my personal opinion, because I have not seen that part, so I am just talking about my opinions based on the works I have seen. Important statement, this is just because I feel that this work has inspired me a lot in various aspects, so I want to see why the rating of this work is so low. The reason is that, at least in my opinion, the advantages of this book are obvious enough. Although it may be a bit immature in other places, I personally feel that it is one of the better ones among Pokémon articles, and I also want to write a similar article myself. If the score is so low, it would be a shame. Therefore, when I read the comments, I didn't see that part of my opinions on some of them. There was an element of my imagination here. First of all, the only long review and many negative reviews of this book are all about the relationship between men and women. I wonder if the author has this idea? I feel that there is, but it is the same as my idea. Since I want to write a Pokémon novel, I should follow the most important sentence of Pokémon, the encounter between people and Pokémon, and the encounter between people. Since people are going to meet people, they must be in contact with other characters, whether they are men or women. This is based on the current mainstream of novels. When the protagonist has too much contact with female characters, it will default to CP. Then on this basis, when the protagonist comes into contact with other female characters, it will default to having a harem. This may not be obvious if it is placed in original novels, but there is a very serious problem in fan novels, that is, fan novels will have character chefs. Readers may not be disgusted with the protagonist coming into contact with other than their own characters, but other than that, they may be more disgusted if they come into contact with other female characters. But when I read the reply to that long comment, the author didn't intend to have a harem, so this is part of what I learned from this novel. In fact, I still haven't given up on adhering to the main theme of the Pokémon world, which is the encounter between people and between people and Pokémon. How to deal with it in the novel I want to write may be a long-term problem that will bother me later. Ok, that's all I want to talk about. Generally speaking, my rating time is actually a bit premature. But at least so far, I am very optimistic about this work. This book does have its own uniqueness, and you can also see the improvement of the author's writing style. If it can be stable in the future, it will be a good book in my book. But I also admit that in the comments I read, apart from the subsequent relationship between men and women, there seems to be some problems with the rhythm being out of control, so I will follow up when I read a certain amount. But at least so far, my evaluation is that it is very Pokémon and fanlike. If you are a fan, it is definitely worth watching. We reached the 2,000-word mark while chatting. After all, it's rare to encounter such a radio-friendly work, so I'm quite excited personally. Well, let's get back to the topic. Although I wanted to talk about the pros and cons first, and then my personal reflections, as we chatted, I seemed to merge the shortcomings and personal reflections. So before I add one more advantage, it is the Pokémon in it. The setting of the Pokémon is quite interesting. First of all, the setting of New Leaf is that the Pokémon is very jealous, and then the author added a little tsundere attribute. Although Tsundere is an outdated version, but with the original character of Xinye Miao, it is quite cute. Then there is the bean cricket, the bean cricket looking for a hero. Isn't it interesting to see the final evolution of its fighting cricket? There is also Dolphinman, a hero that is popularized in Pokémon. From the current point of view, the author has done a good job of combining the setting of Pokémon itself with its performance in the article. Of course, the three evil dragons of the ten thousand-year villain cannot be forgotten. -Separating line- Okay, what follows is my follow-up review after reading for a certain period of time. Well, first of all, it's a bit clownish to not make judgments after only reading part of it. This does not refer to the book, but to the emotional aspect. The author clearly describes it emotionally. There are not only strange trees but also strange fans. I can probably understand those reviews that make negative comments about relationships, and in this case, the author has two choices: Dan or Hou. But no matter which one it is, it's quite difficult to answer. I mentioned the single issue in my initial comment, but the last question is also related to some character chefs. If this character has a character chef, does that character not have a character chef? Personally, I feel that if a fan novel has a clear description of love, then it should be signed. If you have already written it, then don't say that you are going to sign it, just write it and forget it. There are two issues involved here. One is that you have already made this description, and then you turn around and say that you want to write an order. It will always feel a bit confusing, right? The second is that it is very difficult to control the relationship later. Among the friends I know, including me, I don't care if you either write the order or leave. But you don't want to think about the ending of the order and there are options, because if this is the case, you will face the problem of choosing one, and the description of the other characters who have not been selected is quite sad, and I don't like it.

Very nice looking, very Pokémon-like

If nothing else, it looks good.

Great book! It's a pity that it's not popular Good book. Disadvantages: Fighting fanatic

It's in line with my expectations for the Pokémon world. Not sure why the rating is so low

I saw it well in the front, but the front was very suitable for me, and the back suddenly accepted it. What Millerton, Breton? Give it to me.

It's currently Chapter 51. It looks pretty good and the writing is okay. I'll comment again after reading it.

Like a toy protagonist, it is for everyone's entertainment. It is said to be daily, but I don't see anything warm about it, which makes me uncomfortable.

Will the protagonist have a mythical beast?

Beautiful, top-notch Pokémon novel. Read it all at once

Very nice, I don't know why the rating is low

It's quite good, but there are a lot of typos and the number of words is too few. Come on! 😘

I've been looking at it for a long time, and the quality is very good. If you have nothing to do, you can take a look.

Nice looking, but a bit weird

Very beautiful, very happy

This is really beautiful

Looks great, come on

Is there any Xiaozhi here? So how many time-travelers are there? Please answer.