Nominal: I Asked You If I Could Give Instructions

The book is good, but do you still want to make progress without getting married?

If the Han Gang wants to survive, it must have the strength to compete with the Shajia Gang. The Han Gang in the original novel is incomparable to the Shajia Gang in terms of backers and members, so the Han Gang must be strengthened [shy][shy][shy]

This is the first time I have seen a book written by an author. The subject matter is quite new, and the writing is good so far. However, judging from the current chapters, I feel that there are a bit too many narrations. Several of them are memories, narrations, etc. I hope this can be reduced in the subsequent plots. Then I'm curious, does the author have any thoughts on the plot behind it? Also, who is the heroine of this book? I hope the author will continue to update it, keep this pace, and don't write too fast.

Come on, author, you can intersperse some officialdom from other movies and TV shows

The logical thinking of the book is quite good, the style is also good, and the pace is relatively cheerful. However, the protagonist is too short, and the promotion is a little slow. After all, the setting has been changed. Jingzhou is positioned as the main hall, so the protagonist is almost 40 years old before he becomes a deputy, and his future development is very limited.

Yes, from the perspective of writing, it is indeed unique.

This book is really good. In fact, when I first read it, the rating was very low. But at the beginning, it looked really good. I wanted to keep it. However, judging from the author's age, I left a message and felt that if I kept it, I would have to stop updating it. The book would not survive. Later, the author said that he would write it down, but even though I saved it, I still read it every day and occasionally reminded it. Now I suddenly found that the rating is quite good. It seems that good things will eventually shine. (I don't remember if I have evaluated it, but I generally don't have the habit of evaluating it)

To be honest, the quality on Tomato is already excellent. After all, it is a free novel. Author, do you have any ideas for the future? It is not easy to find a book that suits your needs these days.

The writing is good. The heroine is not like Zhong Xiaoai or something like other authors. She has ideas and new ideas.

If the brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the sister so casually? It seems that the sister is being sentimental. The brother is weak and needs more rest. The sister is urging the brother so much. It is the sister's fault. It hurts the brother's body and makes the sister feel distressed. Unfortunately, whether the brother hurts the body or not has nothing to do with the sister? Hurry up and update, brother.

This novel is so beautiful! The plot of the story is twists and turns and the characters are vivid and vivid, making people feel like they are immersed in it. The author's grasp of details is also very good, making the whole novel more real and touching. I highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys reading.

I have read too many Qi Tongwei novels. This novel starts with a level. It is very novel, and the design of every part is very reasonable, and the writing style is also very interesting. A rare good book.

Looking at your comments, I just want to say something, but people are stupid and don't know what to say. Director Qi, please update it quickly! You're not good enough

Brother, the writing is very good. Five-star praise. Can you make a cameo? Hahahaha. Later in the plot, you can add the crime-fighting and ice-breaking. Come on, update three times a day. I'm optimistic about you [like][like][like][like][face covering]

I really like the author's sketch-like writing style, which allows a person who has never watched the original drama to roughly know what's going on.

It is very consistent with the struggle of a small person who is born again, and it is closely related to the original movie and TV series. It is equivalent to watching it again.

What's going on? Why did you enter the dark room?

It's very beautiful, but someone has bad intentions

OK OK! Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good!

After reading it for a week, I feel really good. The official positions are very detailed and professional (I personally feel that this is the most basic thing). Otherwise, the article cannot be included. It is not like some messy writing. It seems that it is within the system. Although there are more jokes, (I like it😊), it is very relaxing at the moment, not tiring, not holy (very good). The emotional line is also good, very worth watching.

The author's writing is very good, but it's a pity that Xiaodu and classmate Xiaoai are not together, so the melon is not cooked enough.

Well, there were times when I wanted to complain in the middle. The language interspersed in it a bit affected the reading, but there was a lot less at the end. But overall, it is still good, and in total, I would like to give Qi Wangcai a five-star encouragement.

The angle is novel and bizarre, with a convulsive atmosphere

All in all, it's pretty good-looking and interesting. Who wouldn't want to join the club?

The entry point is very novel and the writing is good.

The article is written from a novel angle, interspersed with descriptions of characters and deeds, and the plot is related to the original work, but is separated from the original development plot, allowing readers to guess the follow-up but giving it a sense of freshness.

The plot is detailed and compact, and the characters are very relatable. Highly recommended.

It's a really good book. Although not many people have read it, the writing is beautiful and the whole article is eloquent. It has both the interest of the story and a certain sense of reality. I feel that it is a good fanfic work. [Laughing]

It's well written and must be read by more people to pollute their eyes.

It's pretty cool. 7.6 Is a protective score [laughing][laughing]