Conferring the God: the Bones Become the Dao, I Am the Great Emperor of Fengdu!

Yes. ٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎThe author wrote it very well. I finished reading it in one breath. Wow, is there anything else?

It writes about the prehistoric era in a fantasy way, but it does not bring down the prehistoric pattern, but it is too exaggerated. To become a golden immortal, you still need to understand the five laws. But this is not the point. After all, everyone has their own prehistoric thoughts, and it is impossible for the author to write in line with everyone's expectations. What made me unable to read on was that the protagonist understood one percent of the Law of the Underworld before he became an immortal. Then after looking at the catalog Ghost ~ Void ~ the protagonist understood a little more of the Law of Creation. However, in the author's construction of the prehistoric world, the combat power is not too collapsed. Except for the protagonist's name, Li Xuan, which feels fragmented, and almost every chapter mentions the protagonist's talents too much. After all, the author's setting of prehistoric times is already very high, and the protagonist has various understandings. Readers already know that the protagonist's talent is very strong, so there is no need to mention the protagonist's talent too much. It's a very good novel, with clear logic and not forgetting the characteristics of the protagonist. As for whether the price of Bones will drop in the prehistoric era, I can only say that after reading the title of the book, isn't it just for the Bones? (Yeah, but it's all the above. I've read less than ten chapters of the review. Just take it as a joke. After all, I've only read the tip of the iceberg of this book! Please don't bully me online. I'm still a 216-month-old baby [laughs].!!!)

Come, the author reads with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words, day by day and night by day.

Not bad, the content is clear and rich. It is best to recover the three clans of Longhan and Lich.

The angle is unique, the writing is smooth, the characters are vividly described, the literary talent is high-flying, the content is unexpected, and it is worth reading.

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy, gradually, It started to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know if it was because I was crying or because it was raining harder. It could be both. My mood became even more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted loudly outside the window. Who am I looking down on?

There's really no problem with it. It's very beautiful.

I gave it five stars, but I didn't finish it. This book is not a traditional prehistoric novel, it is a fantasy novel set in the prehistoric times. The protagonist has a very high level of understanding and can understand everything he reads. Then there is the kind of content where the protagonist has an epiphany and everyone around him is amazed. Because I wanted to read a traditional prehistoric novel, so I didn't finish it. If the author wants to write better, he can develop the plot more later. I have been having an epiphany after reading the previous part. The plot line has basically not moved at all, but the low strength in the early stage is understandable. There is also the issue of time. It does not matter if the cultivation level is low in the beginning. The cultivation level will increase in a few years. Later, I hope the author can pay more attention to the time rules of the ancient times when writing. Although the protagonist has a high understanding and can achieve enlightenment, don't go up in a short time. You must know that it is possible to cultivate immortals for as long as a hundred years or as many as a few guilds. If you are afraid that time will not catch up with the development of the plot later, you can write down the rules of time, or have time magic treasures to control the development of the plot. Of course, I didn't see the back part. These are just some of my suggestions. If the author has already written these, just pretend I didn't say it. Finally, I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more!

Hello author, I have copied your book and published it on other platforms. The feedback from readers is very good, the profit is good, and there are a lot of rebates. I dare to order the 699 package. In the past few months, I want to buy a new car. I hope the author will write more chapters, so as not to affect my profit. Hope to know

The writing is very good, the only thing is that the realm is a bit unevenly planned. Just re-plan your realm and organize it neatly from low to high. .

The article written is quite good, and it is highly readable in the Fengshenwen in this time period. There is currently no realm collapse, data confusion, etc. Recommended reading.

The logic is smooth, but they are all time travellers, so their imagination can be bigger, such as viruses, microorganisms, Ten Thousand Soul Banners, and magic weapon networks.

Finished reading "Feng Shen: The White Bones Become the Dao, I am the Great Emperor of Fengdu at 07:38 on October 13, 2024!" "The author [Mu Xiaodao who loves red date milkshake], this book currently has a score of 8.8.

The prehistoric world is written in a nondescript manner. He manages the three thousand great avenues of the prehistoric world. He writes quite well about the comfortable daily enlightenment and Taoist profession, blessing and advancement. Although I just scrapped it halfway through the writing, it's not my cup of tea so it's nothing. It's not easy to write with a full star, support and encouragement [sending heartfelt wishes]

Okay okay. Very nice. Just like that, it still hasn't transformed, and the skeleton frame is really not very beautiful. If I don't change my look from now on, I will have no choice but to come back and change my look ⭐⭐⭐⭐. It looks very cool, but this clone of the Guixu Demon Lord really loses points. It's a bit overwhelming. Also, this Guixu Demon Lord is really not suitable for the Water Goddess, so he might as well let him go to the underworld. Anyway, there is still a chance in the underworld.

A very good Honghuangliu novel that makes people feel bright.

I like this book very much, but I recommend writing it as a long novel rather than finishing it in a short time. In the follow-up, you can introduce the Three Thousand Fantasy World and the Resurrection of the Chaos Demon God, and further write about the Sixth Patriarch of Hongmeng, the Three Beginnings of Taichu, and the Original Emperor. Step by step, the content will be expanded to make the whole novel better. I hope the author can take my suggestions into consideration

The story is vivid and vivid. He has become an immortal, why can't he transform into a human body? How can he still walk like a skeleton?

Old bookworm, although the author's writing is not particularly outstanding in literary talent and the plot is particularly attractive, it is definitely at a readable level. Here at Tomato, it is already considered a delicacy that can be put on the table.

Why not go to Wuyi Mountain, where there is treasure money and the Dahongpao mother tree

It's okay, but the hang-up is too big. I'm afraid it won't be easy to write in the later stage. Or the book will be hundreds of thousands of words. Can the author tell me how many words he will write?

Can the author update it soon? A bit short╰（‵□′）╯ It's still a decent prehistoric novel [I learned it]

It's a good book, I recommend it!

A very good book. How could there be so many good people in an era where the weak eat the strong?

The writing is very nice, the concept is novel, and the outline is very attractive, but the details are not enough. If more battles could be written, the adventure would be even more perfect. Invincible all the way to the end, without any obstacles.

It's quite cool, pretty good-looking, but a little lacking.

This book is more in line with my taste. It is systematic but not invincible. It is very good, 👍

The characters are good, the character is good, the system is good, and the plot is good [Tip: The language expression is not very good, and the author still has some words. When used horizontally, it just sounds like "you should know", "can ××", "Wow", "that's it"... Re-reading found that these words appear too frequently in the first hundred chapters. Even if the article has new ideas, it is not very comfortable to read through. There are several unreasonable writings that I will not mention one by one. The realm can be defined by oneself. The author made the realm a bit confusing, but most of the people in the Ancient Gods know it, so it doesn't matter if they mention it or not. It has both advantages and disadvantages, and the update was too fast when I was catching up on it. The author was so frustrated that he only discovered the problem after re-uploading it. , I don't know if friends who have just joined the game in 25 years will decide based on new ideas or based on slots. It's not easy to decide, so I'd say it's about 7.5 Or 8 points. Gone

I watched it all in one day and it was really enjoyable. I basically didn't feel any discomfort at all.

It's very good. The sentence patterns written in this book are okay and not too outrageous. It's very good. This is a very good book. Anchor, anchor, please don't open the hook too much and it will easily lead to collapse.