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The super universe is invincible and beautiful! ! Before I read it, I thought it was just a novel that claimed to be an assist but actually turned me into a heartthrob. The protagonist of "Tiantian Shura Field" is a straight man who doesn't understand the style. I didn't expect that the protagonist really only concentrates on training. Although there are some single-arrow male protagonists (and the protagonist is not a single-arrow hero who is more beautiful than the original male protagonist. The protagonist actually does not have a particularly top-notch appearance), but there is no Shura Field plot. The protagonist Zundu loves only cultivation. Most of the plot is about the protagonist's cultivation and growth. Zundu looks good! !

I picked up this book by accident. The protagonist is the real fisherman, right? I like Xiao Xie very much. It's beautiful. I love reading it.

To be honest, the early stage is really amazing, the plot is fast and ups and downs, and the emotional lines between Xiao He and others are delicate, but in the later stage, the plot feels dragging and the main line is slow. Hundreds of chapters have been written for a sea clan line, and many characters have not even appeared in hundreds of chapters. I really like what the teacher wrote, but can the plot rhythm be faster? I really like the interaction between Xiao He and others [Sending Hearts]

The early part was really good, especially the Gulan Secret Realm and Baihua City. It was so good that I watched it no more than three times. However, I started to procrastinate when I got to the Sea Tribe. At that time, I even thought I wouldn't read this book. Later, because I really wanted to see Xiao Xie explode the vest, I continued reading it, but the vest hasn't exploded yet. How can I put it, it's too exciting. I really feel that the plot is very slow, and Qixing has not appeared for too long, which is really disappointing. In some places, the descriptions are too detailed and watery, and the plot cannot continue. It is boring. Only when a relatively interesting plot point suddenly appears can people continue to watch. The protagonist is also a bit too silly, but everyone in the comment section said it was cute, and some characters were also OOC, with too much psychological description. I really like Xiaohe, I hope he is more important in the plot

It's good to watch, and there's nothing toxic about it yet. I'm looking forward to the next plot. The author's writing style is very good, and the protagonist's character is also very good. It hasn't been updated to the emotional line yet, but the previous article has good foreshadowing, but it's a bit short [eating melon]

It's really good, the plot is novel, and the most important thing is that it's not the kind of invincible beauty that makes everyone obsessed with beauty. God knows what it feels like when the protagonist appears and everyone is obsessed with beauty. Most of the book is about the beauty of the protagonist. The person he likes has no soul at all, and the protagonist is also a delicate vase. The protagonist of this book is handsome and handsome. It's really good. He is handsome without exaggeration. He also has a small halo of being a heartthrob and my favorite fantasy theme. The only drawback is that it is too short and not enough to read! ! ! Why don't you let me meet him later, so early in the morning? Halfway through the fun, he saw the shit-yellow Anjian.

MC: I have seen more than 100 pictures so far. Generally speaking, it is okay. The protagonist is well portrayed. He is considered a genius in the article and a kind of double strength. There are not many awkward moments and the characters are vivid. Disadvantages: The writing style needs to be improved, the plot is too protracted, and some details are too focused on, which can easily make people feel bored. Generally speaking, it is still recommended The writing became worse in the later period, and the plot was too protracted. One secret realm required more than 100 chapters. There were many secret realms, but the progress of the main line was slow. The group portrait marginalized the protagonist. The protagonist was slightly OOC and a bit stupid. When describing the group portrait, the protagonist was like an NPC. Only one or two sentences are spoken in order to highlight the kindness of the protagonist. Group portraits are not bad, but ignoring the protagonist for the sake of group portraits often results in losses. After hundreds of photos, the protagonist's cultivation is still stuck in place. Only focusing on describing the supporting characters makes the protagonist's character one-sided and inconsistent with the early stage. The most difficult thing is that in the comment section, stupid, bad, and good things are described as cute. There is still a difference between stupidity and cuteness.

It's very interesting, and it doesn't just tell a love story (to be honest, many of the stories I read before were about two people who just met and then immediately became disgusted with it, which made me feel uncomfortable, and it took several chapters to grind on). I really like the way Xiao Xie works hard. The cold Xiao Xie portrayed by the author is really lifelike and showed up in my mind (drooling). It makes me look handsome. I hope Xiao Xie will be stronger and more sassy! I really, really love it QAQ! ! ! The intricate emotional lines are also awesome, okay? The heartthrob is none other than Xiao Xie~ Looking forward to the author's successive updates❤❤❤

This book really shocked me It is my current spiritual food, and everyone in it has a unique personality. Really, what this author writes is very good. I really felt that Xiao Xie was so beautiful and cool that time in Baihua City, and she poked me like crazy. Really highly recommended

It's okay. The details are perfect and the setting is novel. It's a very relaxing article, but there are many places where the word count is suspected, and the impression is not good. For example, the inexplicable walking around the pillars, every turn of the character's psychological activities must be written out, and every time someone talks about it, I have to sneeze and think to myself why I still catch a cold since I am a monk. In fact, it's not necessary, just be detailed and strategic. And as we get to the back, everyone's characters feel integrated together, and they look alike. There is no clear sense of character design in the early stage. I feel that the most obvious one is Ling Jiaojiao. Her character in the early stages was clearly that of a passionate and domineering young lady, but Ling in the latest chapters. . . . It doesn't feel like her anymore, she just changed her gender. The protagonist Xie is also a very silly and well-behaved kid, but some of the plots don't look innocent and seem silly. I feel that the early plot arrangements are okay, Spider Lady, City of Flowers, are relatively comfortable, but the later ones start to drag out the pace, too slow, many unnecessary details pass through the brain without a trace, which does not help much in shaping the characters but seems very dragging [crying] I will wait and see, if Xiao Xie continues to be stupid, I will forget it. . I like this setting very much

It's a very good book. I was attracted by the heart-throb copywriting at first. Later, I found out that the basic plot was too much and I couldn't bear to give it up. The plot is really interesting, but it's too little. I also hope that there will be more emotional lines later on. Please give it a try.

Baby Crane is really gentle and warm [shy][shy] Those with a face value of 80 and above have golden settings that are great! ! It avoids the influence of the protagonists on He Bao, and instead allows it to show a real feeling, which is different from other books and very attractive. And He Bao's female costume is very beautiful [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Shy][Shy] I wonder if she will lose her vest in front of the protagonists (I hope not). And the female characters in it are usually very friendly. Well, He Bao has never given up on going home, and it can be seen that he is very good to his sister (I envy having a brother who can help with the plot of Paper Man and is considerate [send heart] [send heart]) I hope there will be no cp later, Dumei (if there is cp, there is a high probability that the author will choose a male character, or it may be a female character because He Bao is difficult to bend, but it is possible, because the author did not say) The system is very useless, but sometimes it is unexpectedly useful [thinking] [thinking] Don't be! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I really like this book. I have also read this kind of time travel, and then I said that the protagonist is a straight man, but it turned out that he was bent later, and he said that he was a straight man, but his behavior was all the same. Only this book is not, and each character is well portrayed. In my eyes, it is a little, a little bit group portrait, which pokes my XP even more And don't be trapped in love, focus on career and cultivation, it's really attractive, and I laugh every time I see that holy light, hahahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

The plot of the story is very attractive and very interesting. It didn't skip a beat, and it was a three-hour speed play. It always made me laugh out loud. The people I was most interested in were the protagonist and Li Ye. Jiang Jiu's writing could make me laugh to death.

It looks good. I look forward to the women's clothing. The author should work hard and write it quickly. The shortcoming is that it is a new book and I don't like it. Other than that, I don't think there are many advantages. It is very funny. I look forward to the emotional line of the protagonist.

The protagonist has a very good personality and is really straight-minded, but other people feel confused. For example, Ling Jiaojiao mistakenly thought that the protagonist likes "her" because of a paragraph of the protagonist's words. Huang Zibu almost made the protagonist Huang Yao all over the world. After saving a lot of money, the bodyguard started to say that the protagonist was his fiancée. Is this repayment of gratitude or revenge? The future master misunderstood that the protagonist had a cross-dressing fetish. Even though the protagonist explained that he was entrusted by others, the master did not believe it at all. It feels like the protagonist only believes in what they imagine and what they say and do, and then they fall in love with the imaginary protagonist, feeling aggrieved and forced to be "dumb"

It looks good. Judging from the current plot and the author's introduction, it is indeed a heartthrob protagonist without CP. It is indeed covered in single arrows, although it is not obvious now. The plot is quite interesting. It's just that the author is a bit short. [Sending Hearts]

First of all, it is really beautiful, the logic is very clear, the story is coherent, and there is no sense of fragmentation. The characters are also very good, the protagonist is really straight, everyone's EQ and IQ are very online, and the supporting characters are also very interesting to watch, they are all flesh and blood people. It's just that there are too few for the time being. I feel like there isn't much interaction between the protagonists, and it doesn't stick to the theme (referring to the heartthrob aspect). I hope the author can continue to write more. It is really an excellent article. For me, the setting of the protagonist and the setting of the article are also quite rare. Come on, author.

The details are very clear, very suitable for those who like to watch plots. The protagonist has a very unique style, but I don't know the protagonist's feelings╮（╯＿╰）╭ It was fine in the early stage, but in the later stage, I don't know where my feelings went.

At present, it seems that there is no loss in investment. The protagonist is upright and not overly pitiful, and can be a bit lovable at times. Straight men are hard-hearted, this setting suits my interests. I am looking forward to more interactions between the characters and Xiao Xie in the future. However, I also hope that Xiao Xie can become stronger in the future. In fact, when Senior Sister Ling Jiaojiao slapped him, I muttered in a low voice, was she really ignorant? However, it also shows that the protagonist is pure and kind in nature, and he subconsciously takes action when he sees people in need of help. But, I've seen it... Sometimes, it's better not to meddle in other people's business. This incident may have also allowed Xiao Xie to grow mentally. I myself also learned about moral kidnapping under the influence of moral kidnapping. There was also a person like Senior Sister Ling who made me realize - when the other party doesn't let you help, don't be sentimental. Take care of yourself.

It's quite good to watch. The character of the protagonist is very good, but the plot is very slow. I've written almost 5.60 Chapters in the secret realm. It's very tiring to watch and a bit boring, but overall it's good. Please give it a try. I have written more than 100 chapters of Secret Realm, and the plot is too long and feels very boring.

It's good-looking, super good-looking, I really like the protagonist [OK] Isn't this a CP-free novel? 😱💅Why are you labeled as a double boy? You just tricked me into killing me. Damn it, the protagonist in Chapter 290 is only slightly ambiguous with other people. Girls, don't come here🙄💅 (If you can bear to read the training plot in Chapter 290, just pretend I didn't say anything) Summary: This is actually a cool novel about cultivating immortals with a male protagonist😘Anyone you like can read it😘😘😘

It looks good. Thank you. I like it very much. But why do I feel so obsessed with the main plot? Qin is supposed to be an important character in this article, but he hasn't appeared many times, and none of the supporting characters have appeared prominently. I feel a little strange I like Xie very much I feel like the main plot is so confusing. Chapter 100 has passed. Shengguang and Xie have no relationship yet. They are just from the same school. They don't have much contact. What about the previous main plot of finding a partner? Why is it gone? I'm really looking forward to that plot. Moreover, I felt that the plot was a bit dragged out and I couldn't get to the point. I was a bit hasty in reading it. I almost had to read ten lines at a glance to see what I was looking forward to.

It's really great. I've watched a lot of it. Well, here are some of the key plots in it. 1. There is a plot about women dressing up at the end. The plot is very novel and worth watching. 2. My junior brother feels like a millionaire. And he also has a very good personality, which makes me feel very cute. 3. The only thing I feel is not very good is that I still haven't found out who the real attacker is until now.

The following plot is very interesting, but it feels too long... Too long... I have been following it for almost a year and I really like it. I just hope that the author will not have a hasty ending like others. ... It's almost 600 chapters. What do you want to do, author? Guess why I came to read this book. The title and introduction both say that this is a heartthrob. Indeed, it is true that many people like the protagonist, but may I ask how to express my love? Does the protagonist still remember that he is a time traveler? It's too procrastinating If you want to write a male protagonist who is tall or straight, can you just say it in the introduction? [Smile] If the male protagonist doesn't end up with anyone, can you just write "no cp"? …I can't understand the author's behavior now. I've written almost sixty chapters in the secret realm, and a complete secret realm plot has only started in one hundred chapters. Especially when the protagonist and others are brought into the black dragon and live again, this plot is really worthless. And were Chen Qixing, Li Ye (that's probably their name) and others eaten by you? ? Let me ask you, is it possible that you haven't appeared in more than a hundred chapters? ? ? ? Seriously? ? I really can't just write a clip and just say that they are all missing the protagonist, can't I? I really beg the author to take a look [face covering] If you are new readers who want to read the love story of Shura Field, run away quickly. The first three to four hundred chapters are there, but they are all ambiguous. Now I'm just curious about how the author can write the ending. In fact, it's now the third edition... It's actually nothing to talk about my current feelings. I started following this novel when it only had 90 chapters. It can be said that I witnessed Xiao Xie's growth and every progress of the author. In the process, I gradually became emotionally infected by everyone in the story. It was both painful and joyful for me to follow this novel. While I was talking about the author's procrastination, I couldn't help but be attracted by the content. I haven't read more than a hundred chapters so far. I always wanted to read it but I was afraid that most of it would be filled with the author's incompetence. Obviously I have always loved this novel, and the author's hard work in coding and not giving up. I have obviously chased it in the middle of the night until dawn, but why does it make me feel painful now? Why has the main plot not been updated for a long time? Why not let the old characters appear? Why do I keep writing about things about the Sea Clan? I was looking forward to new content from the beginning, but now my expectations are just the changes in my heart within a month. I will also try to read the next hundred chapters. I want to see the author's progress, and I also want to see Xiao Xie's progress.

[Laughs] It's very beautiful. In a sense, Junior Brother Xie and the male protagonist are a good match! Both of them are crazy cultivators! It feels so good [crying] but not enough! ! There's simply not enough to watch [crying] [crying] I plan to save some until summer vacation! ! Looking forward to Junior Brother Xie's later women's clothing! My favorite is women's clothing, hey hey hey hey hey I have been following the update. It is really my favorite book recently [crying] [crying] Modo Modo————

There are shortcomings but also advantages. Some plots are a little awkward because you can't empathize with them. There are indeed shortcomings in the emotional line, but you can see that the author is very careful. The plot and many daily parts are written very vividly. It really feels like you have been accompanying the protagonist to read his story. It's amazing how mastered the daily chapters are... It's really awesome to be able to make people read so many chapters without getting bored without even realizing it. Every time I read it, I keep thinking about who Xiaohe meets and what happens next... It's a really complete world story, very rich and interesting... It's very suitable to catch up on during the long vacation. It just happens to catch up with the progress after the long vacation and start school, or catch up on the series in the scattered days after starting work... (Although I personally prefer to save it and read it) It's really hurtful to have no meal replacement... Where can I find another book with a coherent main plot and emotional lines that blend into Xiao Xie's career plot like butter? In the early years, I didn't know how good Xiao Xie was, and I only found out what I had eaten when I looked back... Using desserts as a book, it is probably sweet but not greasy to the point of being super awesome... What exactly was added to it...! The second series of follow-up reviews has progressed to over 900 chapters. It's really good to read. I have read it three times... Every time I read it, I can see from some details that the author really writes very clearly, and the details are also carefully thought out. I really like it... A very good episode with a complete world view. Unlike other books that focus on a few people to advance the plot, this one really writes about a real world of cultivating immortals... I even saw a considerable space for creativity in it... If you like to watch fast-paced and just want to see the emotional plot of a heartthrob cultivating immortality in this setting, you may find it dragging. But my evaluation is that this article is not cliché but has soul, so I will not keep writing about these labels and these dumplings with vinegar... Vinegar is just an introduction. The dumplings in this article are very delicious and delicious. Even without vinegar, I still think they are delicious. So far, there is no meal replacement... The article that lightly advances the career line, advances the plot, and advances according to the timeline is like a daily instant noodle show, and it has an audience like me...! There are some people who will not feel bored and feel comfortable if the very long instant noodle unit drama is mixed with the main plot...!

It's so cool to have money flowing smoothly... I've been hoarding it for a long time, and finally I dared to start reading it, and I finished it in one go. I had a great time watching it, it was a pure and refreshing article and I thought it was very interesting. Crane is absolutely fascinating, it's so right, and it feels like a pure fishing style! Everyone who hooks it will get it for free! ! ! I think the emotional line, how should I put it, is actually a bit superficial. The writing is quite good. I'm not saying it's not good. Maybe it's because after reading the whole article, I felt that there were no descriptions of desire like "a dark light flashed under the eyes" and "a low voice in the throat"? Perhaps it should be called staring. All in all, I felt quite happy watching it, as if I was seeing elementary school students holding hands and pulling hooks, I felt a knowing smile! Very comfortable description hahahaha, although I also like to stare, but this young one tastes better to me~ In the latest Qianli Pavilion period, I feel that Crane is the little Shota, and Mr. Wen's complete priest personality explodes (bushi). Crane is very cute! Does anyone understand? Maybe it's not the personality explosion of Father Wen but me... Hehe... Wen Lingze got it completely for free (meaning it's a joke. He also has to be very charming, so he can win it with just one basic attack. I feel like every one of them is very tasty... It's so cool if there is no CP in this book... He feels so good at cultivating immortality.

Very well written It's just that the pace is too slow, the scenes are described in detail, and I can feel that the author wants to write about the feeling of seeing it from multiple angles. It means that a scene is told back and forth, and the time is constantly rewinded, which makes it very verbose. Take the plot "Heavenly Soldiers" as an example. The protagonist describes a teleportation from the perspective of the protagonist. (The description of blue bubbles makes me a little nervous, but the author's writing style has become accustomed to me after reading it for so long) Then Chen Laodao fought and began to recall the past, and waited for reinforcements. Then I thought it was over here, but the timeline jumped back again, and began to describe the fight between the disciples and the demons (?), And described this man from the sky from the perspective of a supporting character... There is nothing wrong with repeatedly emphasizing that big scenes should be exaggerated. But every time I do it like this, I feel like we are transforming into Soju in Mahou and the enemy is standing there obediently. The sense of oppression is gone, and I am almost suffocated by the progress of the plot. (Both the emotional line and the main line are progressing too slowly. Now that I think about it, not much happened before, but the number of chapters has come up.) It can be seen that the author's writing style is very down-to-earth and delicate, but sometimes the supporting characters have too much inner drama. The teacher does not need to say (think) something about every character. Also (how to describe it) when I was reading the article, I felt like someone was constantly talking to me... I think it may be caused by too much inner drama (possibly) Eliminate the above elements The teacher's writing is definitely very good, the setting is very interesting, the writing is also very delicate, and the breath of life comes to my face. The teacher writes very well. I praise the excellent ones first, so I won't show my disgrace. I will give a five-star to show my attitude. In short, the teacher's writing is beautiful and I love to read [Sending heartfelt wishes]

I like Xiao Xie very much. The protagonist of this book by the author is really to my liking. I like it in every aspect. It can be said that it is the only heartthrob novel I like (because there is another one that is finished, and I have been following this one. I really like it and will keep following it). I like the character of the protagonist (Ahe) very much. He is diligent, gentle and has a cold personality (for other protagonists). I really empathize with him. He works hard to cultivate immortality in the world of immortality and is the king of the genius echelon. Each character has a vivid image, such as Li Ye, Chu Yuanzhou, Ling Jiaojiao, Chen Qixing, Jiang Hanji, Mingzhou, Mei Liang, Sang Qinghua, Qinglian. The characters are very vivid, but the character of Qin Yu, the original protagonist, is still lacking in writing (I really can't figure out what his character traits are like). But the plot is really attractive, I really like this book🥰