Souls from other worlds come across time and space and enter the world of immortality where the weak eat the strong. Can they survive in the bloody and cruel world of immortality after losing the protection of their parents? Is it to ascend to immortality or to be inactive?
Reader comments
It's very well written. I originally gave you five stars, but it was too few, so I'll deduct one for one chapter [rolls eyes][rolls eyes][rolls eyes]
Overall, I would say it's okay, but the emotional aspect is too simple. (The female nun who is in contact with the male protagonist fantasizes about getting married the first time they meet. When you make a brother, you will know it's you after checking their eyes)
It's very well written. I originally gave you five stars, but it was too few, so I'll deduct one for one chapter [rolls eyes][rolls eyes][rolls eyes]
Overall, I would say it's okay, but the emotional aspect is too simple. (The female nun who is in contact with the male protagonist fantasizes about getting married the first time they meet. When you make a brother, you will know it's you after checking their eyes)
So far, it's pretty good. It's pretty.