Under One Person: I Am the Owner of the Small Mountain in Maoshan

The writing is okay. I would like to give the author some advice. Can the protagonist stop having tears in his eyes all the time? The protagonist has traveled to the past, right? After so many years of chicken soup and PUA, the manager shouldn't be callous, but he should at least be able to control his emotions, right? And you have been cultivating Taoism for so many years, but you still haven't cultivated your mind? Be more mature [eat melon] [eat melon] [think]

So far so good. I read a similar book a few days ago, the protagonist is. Jade items from the Jia family. Giant grenade. With flying swords. Where are the bombs and aerial bombs put? Consider yourself. Bomber. And found Ma Bensai in Tiangong Hall. Help practice. Gas. The exercises in the artist are added. Science and technology. Not too much gameplay. It's a pity that the book has not been updated recently. I hope you will read it. More exciting than that one. Looking forward to it. Come on.

The writing is okay, but aliens are like nuclear weapons. You have them, and I have them, so I don't dare to use them casually. It forms a subtle check and balance, so please keep working hard.

Give yourself a five-star review

The writing is good. I don't have those messy abilities. Keep at it.

Looks good, don't be lousy

Maoshan is destroyed, when will Uncle Jiu return?

It's very beautiful, the combination of one person and a bright sword, I hope it won't be a eunuch

Although there are some small flaws, the overall flaws are not concealed. Um! Great book!

Very good book, makes the devil spin

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Does she look good enough to enter the palace?

It's kind of interesting. It would be better to make up for all the regrets in the anime, hahaha!

I like this style. I feel it's novel and beautiful.

Very good, I hope I can keep writing