Re: Fang Yuan's Life in Another World from Scratch

It's really beautiful and the writing is very good. This story tells us that no matter how powerful or smart you are, you can't prevent your teammates' stupid ideas. Genko will probably regret it a little. They are a bunch of gods, and the enemy has not come over yet. The inside has become like this, and they can only be forced. Happy reunion, yes 😂 I have been trapped to the bottom of the trap, and I can only go all the way to the dark side. Whenever I feel that I am ruthless and CS enough, I find that the actions my teammates perform make me look like a normal person, and the author's appearance description is really nice. It is not a loss to join the trap.

Not good! This is the real Fang Yuan, and the author really created it very well. The first thirty chapters were very tolerant, but in the end, the model worker's ruthlessness and consideration of the situation were fully demonstrated. In the mansion chapter, Ram was dealt with by taking advantage of the situation, and the part where he defeated Sloth after his death was particularly comfortable and very enjoyable to watch. The model worker's IQ occupied the high ground, and after getting the information, he was plotted by Sloth. So far, I think Sanctuary is very comfortable to watch, but it has not been updated yet. The author will update it quickly!

It's a very good novel, but it also has some shortcomings. Fangyuan's character is more in line with it. After entering the mansion, he first pretends to be sweet and then tricks others. The plot is okay. At first, I even thought that the protagonist could not return after death, but I felt that Fangyuan was a bit too exposed in some minor characters.

It's very interesting to watch, especially in the back part where the protagonist plots against everyone and seeks the best interests for himself. Those who should be silenced are basically silenced. Unfortunately, it still feels like it lacks some flavor. In fact, the author can pass on people's ancestors, [Similar stories can be interspersed with the nodes of the story to polish the plot. At the same time, they can also shape the protagonist or block people. It is also possible to directly localize and change the world view from scratch] And the protagonist, [in the previous life of 500 years, there were flying masters, insect masters, and similar skill realms], it is completely possible to learn similar magic in advance, explaining that it is also possible to directly let the protagonist adapt. If the protagonist also has experience in fighting magic, he can add his own magic to the protagonist's practice. Of course, it would be better to add some insect attributes. Or when you are about to die, you have an epiphany, and you can understand your own magic system by improving the realm of skills. After all, these realms of skills are rooted in the soul, and soul travel can bring them over logically. It does not affect the combat power system of the world view. You can also add a little bit of your own characteristics. I think you can try it in this aspect.

A rare fan of Fang Yuan, quite good. The people in the village thought that the little maid would die, but they didn't expect such a coincidence😃 It's really weird to listen to a book. Can't it be changed to Fang Yuan of an ape? [Like][Like][Like][Like]

Just the character design without OOC is already better than most fan fiction, but it's not a cool article, so not many people read it, come on, author [like] I was a little disappointed. I came to see this because I wanted to see how Yuanzi operated it, but after seeing so many pictures, I kept being led by the nose. I felt that it was no different from the original work. So what is the difference between Fang Yuan and 486...

It's authentic, the model worker is still cruel and black-hearted [face cover] [face cover] I originally thought it was another kind of script with bad intentions and good deeds, and everyone was having fun, but I didn't expect it to have the flavor of an immortal. The part about killing with memories was really well written. As a person who belongs to the devil outside the world in both worlds, Lao Yuan has such a strong feeling of not belonging and having to rely only on himself.

Fang Yuan's character design is in line with the original work. It may be a bit abrupt in the early stage, but the author's writing power increased later in the writing, and the more he wrote, the more like Fang Yuan he became. Secondly, I have never read re0. I always thought that 486, who can be infinitely reborn, is too useless. It wasn't until I read this book that I realized that 486's teammates are so amazing. All in all, pretty good.

It looks good. I finally woke up. Fang Yuan also has super power. The rest of the plot can be done as he wants, instead of being manipulated by the god or being tricked by the god's teammates. Maybe it's because I watched the original show. There are so many people who died here. Many people who were still alive in the original show are dead here. Although it is said that he has no information and does not use death to return, the immortal's handling of Minato and other incidents is indeed not as perfect as the original. Let's go to the Tower of Sage. The dialog box still affects the look and feel too much. I've been following the plot, haven't you done anything that deviates from the main plot? A little aesthetic fatigue The subjective initiative is too bad, don't follow the plot, Mr. Hu Yuan It's okay for people to die in the original plot, and I can accept Fangyuan's character, but don't keep following the original plot, let's have some original plot

The logic makes sense, there is a hint of Fang Yuan, and the characters are consistent with the original work.

Very well written, not bad! I want to give credit to the author here. The character of the protagonist Fang Yuan is not OOC, which is very suitable, I think it is good. However, Fangyuan was still a little weak in the early stage. It doesn't feel any better at the moment, not even a little bit better. If I really want to say it is better, it is that before the first death return, the two gods Rem and Ram were tricked to death. I think the author can add a little more fun points, just like in the original novel, Fangyuan got the wine bug in the early stage, gambled on stones and got the rough stones, and robbed his classmates. These are actually good little fun points. If you keep reading it, to be honest, it will kill your interest in reading. If possible, I hope the author can add a certain amount of excitement. All in all, all in all, the author's writing is still very good. Come on [like][like][like]

Although it has a bunch of small shortcomings, it is very beautiful. What I said may not be objective enough, but to me it is indeed very beautiful. The biggest problem at present is that it is not beautiful enough. Although there are no bugs in the characters and settings, the protagonist's operation is okay. The author must write it down [staring]

The comment area is full of comments. I think the author's writing is very exciting and has his own ideas. I can't wait to watch the plot of Sage's Tower, so can the author update it 10 times a day, please?

The IQs of both the good and the bad guys are online throughout the whole process, there are no cheats on the protagonist team, and the plot is clean and neat without being watered down. It is a rare re0 fanfic that can be read through.

The writing is surprisingly good, and the character design of the old devil is also very restored. I hope it won't be too unfinished in the future.

I have never read Gu Zhenren, but I really like this kind of evil protagonist with a high IQ. There are too few novels of the same type, and I have been attracted to it since the first three chapters. The plot is compact, with twists coming one after another. There is almost no word count. The battle descriptions are also very exciting. The author is obviously planning the layout carefully and is definitely not here to gain popularity. It is highly recommended to watch [Love]

This book refreshed my stereotype of re0. I always thought that the protagonist of re0 was like a fake person and ran away when he saw this kind of subject matter. I didn't expect that the author could write the immortal so well.

It's pretty cool. Apart from the tracebacks that the original version has, the plug-in for Genko only has a few strength traces, which ensures that Genko has room to game when faced with crushing low-end combat power and outsmarting high-end combat power. It doesn't give the protagonist a chance to learn magic like other re0 fanfics. Genko can become stronger and stronger as he learns. It's a good fanfic.

I haven't watched the original anime, but I came here for Fang Yuan, so I suggest that people with a bad memory like me check out other character sketches when watching, so that they can remember the characters more easily. The writing style of this book is good, there are no bad points, there are just a lot of gods and people, and it seems to be the same in the original work, so the number of times the Immortal Lord curses people is relatively high. Many, personally I feel that the level of deflation is not high. As long as you can read "Insects", then this book is completely enjoyable. The main point of enjoyment is Fang Yuan's clever design of Amomum villosum and his extreme use of others. The degree of restoration of the Immortal Lord is very high. For example, although the first time he died, he was deflated but very happy. I was too lazy to rate it originally, but seeing the ratings rising so slowly, I felt a bit sad.

I've caught up on the latest chapter, so I'll leave a comment. 1. In terms of character: I haven't watched the original drama, so I won't talk about it, but the model worker is absolutely the same as the CS we are familiar with. 2. In terms of combat power: There is nothing you can do in the early stage, but it starts to feel better after the Sanctuary Chapter. Current death progress: Nan Liang and his gang of kings were swallowed by a white whale, and the kitten died. Some negative reviews I saw in the rating section: 1. The plot remains the same, and anyone can replace Fang Yuan: Too lazy to complain, benevolent people have different opinions, and wise people have different opinions. 2. Saying that there are no Gu insects, Fang Yuan is a waste: Isn't this inexplicable? Are you looking at Yuanzi or Gu, where does the empty orifice come from? Where did the bugs come from? And it's too late, Fang Yuan has been improving his strength Anyway, I am speechless due to some inexplicable low-scoring comments in the rating area. The author should update it carefully and don't be affected by the comments of gods. 9.0 Is definitely there.

It's rare to see niche subject matter, but it's well written. Come on, author, it doesn't matter if you go slower, just don't be a bad eunuch.

It's very realistic. Although I haven't watched Gu in its entirety, this is what I remember about Fangyuan, and the depiction is also very three-dimensional. It's a pity that the Crusch camp is gone. I personally like this character quite a bit. If you discard it directly, a lot of plot will be missing [Thinking]

The writing is really good, and the author's understanding of the original characters in re0 is quite good and not OOC. The plot development is also very reasonable. It does not always follow the outline of the original work, and many plots are quite innovative. . . Although several of my favorite characters have been discontinued, because it is based on Yuanzi, I feel that it is completely normal for him to do these things, otherwise it would be OOC. The writing is really authentic, and the yin of Fang Laomo is really well written. It is so beautiful that I will go. The author has really naturally integrated Genko into the world view of re0. I am really looking forward to the follow-up plot, it is really exciting!

It's okay, but the motivation of the model workers is not very obvious, because the benefits are not big enough. I suggest the author make the benefits bigger, otherwise the model workers will not be willing to be with this group of gods. For me, the most enjoyable part of watching is watching the model workers cheating the gods, and the gods cheating the model workers.

I have read the latest chapter. It is one of the few books that fits the characteristics of Lao Mo. I wonder if the author can read my comments? There are a few points I want to talk about. Why doesn't Lao Mo have the unique poetry recitation? [Smile][Smile][Smile] Although I know that the plot is very tight and there is no time to improve, it is a bit frustrating to see the protagonist without power.

It's good-looking and quite fresh. I want to see Hu Yuan travel through time to offer blessings to a beautiful world. I have already started writing

The sky hangs down like images and texts appear, and the earth contains forms and principles exist. The sun and the moon are brighter, reflecting the traces of the past and the present; the mountains and rivers are eternal, maintaining the essence of heaven and earth. A gentleman observes things and writes great theories. Burning ointment and following the sundial, how can you be afraid of the dark night? When you come to the pond, you should seek your true heart. Words are like pearls, strung together into a brocade; sentences are like gold and stone, forming the universe. Don't stop when the road is far away, don't fall because of weakness. The tiller is diligent and diligent, and the craftsman is diligent and agile. If you keep tiring the earth, you can build a tower of nine feet; if you keep converging, you will eventually run thousands of miles. If you persist in keeping oneness, can it be engraved in gold and stone? Chastity and self-motivation, no matter the frost or snow! The day the book was written, it shone brightly in the morning and dusk.

I just started reading a few chapters, and I was not used to this style of light novel. However, the author restored Fang Yuan's character to 90% in just a few chapters, which gave me the motivation to continue reading. No matter what novel I read, as long as the protagonist's character is Fang Yuan's, it will always make people feel at ease, and I am not afraid that there will be virgin or lustful plots in the middle. I watched this Japanese comic in 2017, and I have forgotten all the plot after such a long time. Personally, I think it is more friendly to people who have never seen this Japanese comic, so that it will not feel awkward to assume the role of the original protagonist. When a new character appeared and I didn't know who it was, I checked the pictures on DOU and continued reading once I knew what they looked like. In the book, Fang Yuan is not invincible, on the contrary, he is often held back because of how many times his divine teammates have eaten. The plot has ups and downs, and the plot is compact and smooth. The author also restored Fang Yuan's character to a very similar character, which is very consistent with the character design. So far, I haven't found any bad points in the latest chapter. It is a very high-quality fan novel, and it is worth reading.

The plot is not brainless, the protagonist is decisive in killing, and it is considered a good fic, but the two-thorned monkey probably won't be able to watch this.

This is a fan with better writing skills, especially when designing Rem, I really feel like a model worker.