After unexpectedly entering the world of Hogwarts, Lin Jihan (Gavin Cold) wants to use his knowledge to change some of the things that went wrong. But he discovers that everything seems confined within a set framework: everything Rowling wrote appears to be the laws of Heaven governing this world, and he is determined to challenge them. Along the way, he discovers that there may be someone else from the same world as him...
The segments are a bit too long, it would be nice if each segment was shorter. ٩(♡㉨♡ )۶
The content is good and the writing is good. Books that are pro-era are rare (most of them are original characters who travel to a new era), and the author is always updating. It's just that the segments are a bit too long, so I recommend shortening them. Give 5 points as encouragement.
The segments are a bit too long, it would be nice if each segment was shorter. ٩(♡㉨♡ )۶
The content is good and the writing is good. Books that are pro-era are rare (most of them are original characters who travel to a new era), and the author is always updating. It's just that the segments are a bit too long, so I recommend shortening them. Give 5 points as encouragement.
It's so pretty! Author, you are a god!
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