When Ji Juechen looked at the evil-looking little Tusu in front of him, he realized that he had really traveled to the world of ancient swords. He was just happy that he could change Baili Tusu's ending when he realized that the way little Tusu looked at him was wrong. (Basically, I write according to the original plot. I can't write the plot I don't like. It's very slow for newcomers to write for the first time)
Reader comments
It's good-looking, good-looking, and the content is naturally described. The characters are real and flesh-and-blood. The protagonist doesn't interfere too much in the plot. Anyway, this is probably the best-looking one of its kind that I have ever seen.
The writing is good but there are too few scenes for the protagonist. Since the protagonist has traveled through time, we have to write something different around the protagonist. Otherwise it wouldn't be interesting to watch.
I hope the author will change it in the future.
But the writing is still very good, keep up the good work✊
It's good-looking, good-looking, and the content is naturally described. The characters are real and flesh-and-blood. The protagonist doesn't interfere too much in the plot. Anyway, this is probably the best-looking one of its kind that I have ever seen.
The writing is good but there are too few scenes for the protagonist. Since the protagonist has traveled through time, we have to write something different around the protagonist. Otherwise it wouldn't be interesting to watch. I hope the author will change it in the future. But the writing is still very good, keep up the good work✊