Is It Normal for the Mate to Have the Power of the Captain?

It's good after reading it Single heroine (Robin), the character of the protagonist is very comfortable No system, following the boat, the protagonist's dream (everyone has hope for tomorrow) Suggestions: 1. The protagonist's peaceful personality seems to be very suitable for a helpless sugar daddy (tired like a spy playing house) 2. The protagonist's presence is a bit low and could be strengthened It's hard to tell the heroine's emotional line yet, but the writing should be good. Request: Don't use Momonosuke's puppet and let him die directly

I think the heroine could be Robin. I feel that it matches the protagonist [cool]. The protagonist has a perfect temperament. It will definitely be interesting to work with Robin. I hope the author can adopt it. I actually don't want to rush for more updates, but the writing is very good and not enough to read👀. Can the author write more at once? The premise is to pay attention to your body😜😜

Hee hee, give your book review a five-star rating

2024.7.4 (End) The writing is pretty good, but when I get excited about it, the result is gone [angry][angry][angry] Author, where is your home? Don't get me wrong. I just want to visit you and bring you some gifts.

Could it be that Kyle doesn't have a domineering look? Who is the heroine?

In your setting, the ability of one wing should be light and darkness, and the ability of two-winged angel should be purification and desire. For example, if Sauron is hungry earlier, and then use purification, it should reduce his hunger, but he will not be hungry yet. Desire will amplify his malice and make him want to eat everything. Three-winged angel, light field and dark field, four-winged angel, light king or dark back or desire to lose all emotions, the two abilities are merged

I hope the heroine is Robin and the Empress

Who is the heroine? The author will reveal it in advance [laughing]

It's pretty good, and the characters' personalities respect the original work.

Don't stop when I go. I managed to stay up until get off work. When I come back to see you, tell me it's gone [angry]

Well written, I like it

Please hurry up, hurry up and pump the code [eating melon]

I forgot to rate Dada. Come on Dada, it looks great\(//∇//)\

Is the heroine Robin?

Never embarrass the author

Very good, still an angel.

Don't worry, the book is very good

All I can say is that I like it very much

Come on come on come on come on

Oh, why do you want it to be so bad? It's pretty good.

Not bad, I just hope the heroine will appear soon

But it's really beautiful. I really like it. Please can you continue writing?

Just write according to this rhythm

I hope there will be no more water in the future

Well written, don't be a eunuch

I really like it. What a pity.

Very nice, hope to see the sequel

I hope to keep writing and look forward to the follow-up (I hope the protagonist can take down Hancock)

Brother, keep up the good work. I still like it very much [blowing kiss] so far.

A very good fanfic.