[No system, no gold fingers, no harem, mortal flow] Zong Dan was adopted by his master since he was a child, and has been living with his master in the mountains. Until one day, I followed my master's orders and went down the mountain. I entered the world of mortals and my fate entered the whirlpool.
Reader comments
At first I felt that the flaw of this book was that the prices were outrageous and the author had no common sense. But after the author slowly unfolded the map, I felt that the author's writing was good. It must be a patch that he realized that his prices were outrageous? Because in other places on the map, prices sometimes suddenly become a little outrageous. For example, every time I return to the city, I will give 100 taels to the old servant, and it only costs 300 taels a night to stay in a better hotel. From this point of view, the author is indeed lacking in this aspect, but it is much better than before.
The character of the protagonist in this book is not very outstanding, because there are relatively few descriptions of the protagonist's interactions with people, and most of them are on the road to killing monsters and beasts.
There is a plot and it is not too abrupt. The fate and hard work of the protagonist who embarks on the road of cultivating immortality are really wonderful. They are all told in a eloquent way. I personally think it is pretty good.
Recommend.
Very good! ! ! The protagonist breaks the scene step by step, the plot is smooth and very good
There is no brainless fun, logic is online.
The plot is very smooth, and every character is vividly and vividly portrayed. Except for the protagonist who is a bit stupid, the villains are all smarter than the protagonist, which made me feel very frustrated.
It's pretty good. Cultivation of immortality is done step by step, both in terms of resources and practice. The world pattern is certain, skills are rare and will not come from heaven, resources are rare and will not come from heaven, and practice is difficult.
The writing is very good and the plot is exciting
More realistic and objective
Strategy is the main line, Kungfu is the main line,
It's my type
In the beginning, people's feelings were relatively real. This is common, and the author is relatively sober.
A good book worth reading seriously, rare and wonderful.
It's really well written, with good writing style and plot, not mindless writing.
I hope you can keep it up. This seems to be the most satisfying article about cultivating immortality that I have seen in Tomato.
What's the situation? It's over immediately? Don't you want to write it?
At first I felt that the flaw of this book was that the prices were outrageous and the author had no common sense. But after the author slowly unfolded the map, I felt that the author's writing was good. It must be a patch that he realized that his prices were outrageous? Because in other places on the map, prices sometimes suddenly become a little outrageous. For example, every time I return to the city, I will give 100 taels to the old servant, and it only costs 300 taels a night to stay in a better hotel. From this point of view, the author is indeed lacking in this aspect, but it is much better than before. The character of the protagonist in this book is not very outstanding, because there are relatively few descriptions of the protagonist's interactions with people, and most of them are on the road to killing monsters and beasts. There is a plot and it is not too abrupt. The fate and hard work of the protagonist who embarks on the road of cultivating immortality are really wonderful. They are all told in a eloquent way. I personally think it is pretty good. Recommend. Very good! ! ! The protagonist breaks the scene step by step, the plot is smooth and very good
There is no brainless fun, logic is online.
The plot is very smooth, and every character is vividly and vividly portrayed. Except for the protagonist who is a bit stupid, the villains are all smarter than the protagonist, which made me feel very frustrated.
It's pretty good. Cultivation of immortality is done step by step, both in terms of resources and practice. The world pattern is certain, skills are rare and will not come from heaven, resources are rare and will not come from heaven, and practice is difficult.
The writing is very good and the plot is exciting
More realistic and objective
Strategy is the main line, Kungfu is the main line,
It's my type
In the beginning, people's feelings were relatively real. This is common, and the author is relatively sober.
A good book worth reading seriously, rare and wonderful.
It's really well written, with good writing style and plot, not mindless writing.
I hope you can keep it up. This seems to be the most satisfying article about cultivating immortality that I have seen in Tomato. What's the situation? It's over immediately? Don't you want to write it?