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It's good to watch. The original text of "The Fall of the Mermaid" has not been changed. It looks at Chu Nian and Rimbaud's love from a third perspective. The author would like to make more updates [Adoration]

This is the most respectful book I have ever read. It has no official dubbing and no OOC. I really don't understand what those trolls think. Give me my only source of happiness! Spray! Without! Got it! ! ! ! Bright! Bright! This! What! Good! Look! ! ! ! For! Varied! What! ! ! Big! Big! Without! Have! Copy! Attack! ! ! This is the same article (take a deep breath)! ! ! People! ! ! Arts! ! !

Damn you, why do you write so beautifully? It's so good for me. Five stars, five stars. Come on, keep updating. [Adoration][Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Send heart][Send heart]

I support it very much. It is really rare to write a Mermaid Down novel like this. I've never searched for Mermaid Down fanfics before. It's really good.

It's so beautiful that you can keep it on your bookshelf! Author, please update!

I've only seen a little bit, but there's a lot of room for improvement. I always feel that the protagonist's emotional line is too fast, and he has a child before he understands it, so the emotional line can be richer. Then the protagonist doesn't seem to fit in, and it always feels a bit weird. He doesn't have his own story, 70% of it is the story of Rimbaud and Xiaobai. Finally, the writing is pretty good, but there are still some bugs. Generally speaking, the subject matter is very rare, but the writing style is not that good yet (but it's not bad), so keep up the good work! I don't mean to criticize, I just point out some shortcomings. If you don't agree with my views, just skip it.

(First of all, let me say that I am also a fan of Mermaid Falls, although my main recommendation is Xiao Mushroom) Such a beautiful fanfic, why is it... Woo woo woo! Why is it... Like this? OMG! Damn, you write so well, I don't want those people to do this to you! Why did God do this to me again! Let me know this news today! Oh my god, I'm so sad! It's really hard to find a good fanfic, especially Mermaid Has Fallen! This is the first one I've encountered! And it's such a good book! Woooooooooooo! Oh My God! I hate them! ! Woooooooooooooo!

I like it very much, I like this plot very much, but I also wrote it, but I haven't tried posting it online, so I prefer the ones written by other authors.

This book written by the author Da Da is really my favorite Mermaid Down fanfic I have read so far. I originally wanted to fatten up this book before reading it. Who knew that one day when I came back and flipped through it, I found that it was no longer updated. It was really a pity when I saw that it was no longer updated, but I have to respect the author Da Da. Good luck Da Da. I hope you will have better works in the future.

The writing style is very good, and it is created based on respecting the original text. The characters are not OOC. It is a very good fanfic. But there are only 34 chapters now, I have to keep it for a while [blowing kiss][love]

The author writes very well, I will keep following it, come on [love]

This is the most interesting Mermaid Down fanfic I've read on Tomato so far. It's a bit regretful that it ended like this. Finally, I hope that the author will continue to write and have a bright future in the third dimension.

It looks good, but it's a pity it's too short. Author, can you make another extra chapter? I'd like to see lemon and lime come back.

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The author wrote this book very well, I like it very much, and it really touched my point. The writing style is also quite good, not as bad as the author said, except for a few typos. However, among the better fanfics about Mermaid Falls, these are the better ones. Even if this one is good, even minor typos can be ignored. My feeling about this book is that I keep reading it. I wish I could break it into half and read it slowly. I still want to know the follow-up, is he awake? What should the original owner do if he wakes up? What would Gong do if Shou didn't wake up? I wish the author a bright future! ! !

It's not easy to see the real fish. Please give me more support. It's not enough. It's not enough. It's not enough. [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] (Say important things three times)

No, I don't want to push it down at all. The author has a very good attitude, and besides, this is fan fiction! Fanfiction! Fanfiction! Say important things three times! ! ! Fanfiction! Fanfiction! Fanfiction! ! !

Big cheers for the author! I love watching it so much, I have to keep watching it. It looks great. Can it be faster? Come on, author! Wait until you finish.

This book is really good, but the author doesn't update it anymore... I'm really sad... [Crying] I still don't know what happened to Xiao Ning in the end... I was so disappointed and sad that I just chopped bricks with my bare hands [almost crying]

It's really, really good-looking! ! ! ! Author, if you don't update, I will go crazy. Are you reading updates every day? [Pause face] But it's really good to watch, highly recommended! ! ! ! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

I think the author's writing is pretty good. I really like reading it. What a pity [sad] (it sounds like a broken heart)

It's super good-looking. It's really super good-looking. The image and characteristics of each character are very distinctive and unique. And I really like this fanfic. It's so good-looking! ! !

Why did Madam end? It can be said that I found one that I particularly like. I am also a fan of the original work, and the author did not make any major changes.

It's quite good-looking, and it doesn't break the cp. Their story is also very good.

Although I'm a fan, I can't tell whether the writing is good or not, but I still think it's okay. Your reviews online aren't very good. I just came here to read it. I'm sorry first.

It's really beautiful! ! ! Suitable for my taste, broad enough to [shy][shy][shy]

It's really beautiful, I'm waiting for updates every day. Xie Li, this couple, I really want to be so sweet to death [Adored][Admired][Admired]

The writing is really good, it looks really good, I like it very much.

I really want to, it's so good to watch, if you can't get enough of "Mermaid Down", come and give it a try [Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

I really like it, keep working hard [love] [love] [love]