"My name is Bai Shu, and I'm an ordinary senior at Shuguang High School."
The young man stood atop the mountain. A bitter wind tugged at his clothes, while below him the city burned, its flames turning half the night sky red.
"And I also do a little work on the side, saving the world."
He chuckled, spread his arms, and stepped off the cliff.
In an instant, howling winds surged around him, and silver streams of light poured down like a river of stars, coiling around his body.
His short black hair became long, silver-blue locks amid the radiance, while an ornate gown wrapped around him;
its fabric shimmered like the aurora, woven from silver threads and icy blue silk.
At the same time, a huge silver wing unfurled behind him.
With a beat of his wings, he soared into the sky, a streak of light racing toward the city engulfed in flames.
I, Bai Shu, an eight-foot-tall tough guy, am also a magical girl who protects the world!
I thought it was gold toilet paper. Nothing more than that.
Not bad, I like it
It's pretty good, but could there be more scenes with the protagonist? Try to make titles and sentences as easy to understand as possible The language is a bit wordy (personal opinion)