I relied on online loans to support my three children, and my final suicide note read: I have a writer account on Tomato, which is my only chance to make a comeback. But I can't wait to see that day. I really can't live anymore. I just took a look. What if someone rewards me?
Reader comments
It's worth appreciating. When I first read the introduction, I thought it was from a wealthy family, but I didn't expect that after reading it, I felt completely comfortable.
1. Tell us about the protagonist in the book! Let's call the protagonist 'Lao Dao' because that was his nickname when he was a child.
How did this nickname come about? Let's read a book.
The author writes in the first person "I", so when I first started reading, it was me, not "I" who took me as a reader, to travel through the book. Outside the book, I looked at my phone, my brain turned to mush, and I was confused!
All I can say is, author, can you write better?
2. Now that I've said "I", let's talk about the content in the book. Apart from "I", the content is very substantial and rich, the plot is very compact, and the coherence is very good.
However, when the main plot is not finished, the side plot emerges. What does this mean?
Author, you are not only a branch line, but also open three lines at the same time. Is this making my CPU burn out?
What do you mean you still have to dig a hole?
3. Forget it, don't talk about this, let's talk about other things!
There is just a little too much dialogue and less narration, so I couldn't tell where the protagonist was for a lot of time.
4. I also like the scenes in the book. The descriptions are very good, but when describing the characteristics of the times, the author did not grasp it well and failed to write something more representative.
This author needs to work harder and write more in the future. It's my personal responsibility!
The dialogue in the novel is secondary, less is better. This is not watching TV, let alone a movie.
TV is all about dialogue, movies are all about shadows, novels? It relies on the author's imagination, expressed through words, to bring readers into the book.
5. Finally, let me summarize this book, okay! Very nice? No, I'm the reader, I have the final say, and all I can say is that it's not bad.
Because the author made me unable to read any more. Why?
Why! Author! Author! Just hurry up and type! Would you please stop fishing for two days and drying the nets for three days?
Come on, boy! ! !
The first person is really difficult to write. The author has great writing skills and a strong sense of immersion. I highly recommend it.
The plot is really fascinating! The plot is compact, the characters are vivid, and each character has a unique charm. The author's delicate writing style brings readers into a rich world of characters. Not only is it exciting, it's also thought-provoking. Definitely a masterpiece not to be missed!
The author helped me recall interesting things about my childhood in the countryside, which is really good! Sure enough, our generation is the same all over the country, the difference is just different customs, hahaha!
This book made me feel like I was on the scene. The author's writing style is smooth, the rhythm is tight, and it is very beautiful.
Good. I like watching it very much
Great writing, please encourage me♥
- The plot of this novel is full of ups and downs and gripping, making people unable to put it down as soon as they read it.
- The characters have distinct images and different personalities, leaving a deep impression on people. The theme of the novel is profound and thought-provoking, and it conducts an in-depth discussion of human nature and social issues.
The writing is very good and the plot is very enjoyable. I read it in one sitting and couldn't put it down. It is a novel worth reading.
The writing is very good, the writing is smooth, the story has exciting twists and turns, and the first-person perspective makes it immersive to read. It is very enjoyable to watch. Come on, author!
There are still many interesting things in the countryside
Why does it feel like every chapter has a ghost story [laughing]
The writing is good and the plot is enjoyable.
The writing is smooth and the story is engaging.
Seeing that in the end the workers could not get their wages, I remembered that I had asked my boss for wages in the past, and I felt the same way...
The story is a good one, but the author's naming is a bit too casual. The plot is very exciting. Come on [Adore][Adore]
I saw it now in one breath, and my thinking is very clear. I hope the author can hold on, come on!
It's really cool to dare to write a book in the first person. The novel describes the hardships of people in contemporary social reality. The author's writing style is smooth, his words are simple and precise, and his rhythm is appropriate. Great book with potential.
It describes the rural story vividly and well.
How did you come up with the mosaic-like face? [Hold face] [Hold face] This is the first time I have seen such an opening.
The plot of the story is interesting and the author's narration is vivid, like it 👍
I actually found this type of book. The content is very good and worth reading. It's very enjoyable to read.
The writing is good. From the introduction, it attracted me and made me interested in reading. Good job, author!
Great writing, it feels like I'm back in time, keep up the good work
The writing is very good, the writing style is very delicate, and the plot is not procrastinating. It's good [like]
I've watched more than half of it, I think it's very good, it's worth watching, come on 666
The author tells the story eloquently, the plot is fascinating, and the characters are vivid. I can't get enough of it. I highly recommend it! !
The recorded narrative is very comfortable to read.
The writing is concise, the story is delicate, the plot has a strong sense of substitution, and the description perspective is fascinating. I feel like I can't stop. Add a bookshelf and read slowly.
The story is wonderful, the writing is very good, the humor is humorous, and it has five stars.
It's beautiful and exciting haha
I feel the same way, it's well written, I'll give it a thumbs up.
It's worth appreciating. When I first read the introduction, I thought it was from a wealthy family, but I didn't expect that after reading it, I felt completely comfortable. 1. Tell us about the protagonist in the book! Let's call the protagonist 'Lao Dao' because that was his nickname when he was a child. How did this nickname come about? Let's read a book. The author writes in the first person "I", so when I first started reading, it was me, not "I" who took me as a reader, to travel through the book. Outside the book, I looked at my phone, my brain turned to mush, and I was confused! All I can say is, author, can you write better? 2. Now that I've said "I", let's talk about the content in the book. Apart from "I", the content is very substantial and rich, the plot is very compact, and the coherence is very good. However, when the main plot is not finished, the side plot emerges. What does this mean? Author, you are not only a branch line, but also open three lines at the same time. Is this making my CPU burn out? What do you mean you still have to dig a hole? 3. Forget it, don't talk about this, let's talk about other things! There is just a little too much dialogue and less narration, so I couldn't tell where the protagonist was for a lot of time. 4. I also like the scenes in the book. The descriptions are very good, but when describing the characteristics of the times, the author did not grasp it well and failed to write something more representative. This author needs to work harder and write more in the future. It's my personal responsibility! The dialogue in the novel is secondary, less is better. This is not watching TV, let alone a movie. TV is all about dialogue, movies are all about shadows, novels? It relies on the author's imagination, expressed through words, to bring readers into the book. 5. Finally, let me summarize this book, okay! Very nice? No, I'm the reader, I have the final say, and all I can say is that it's not bad. Because the author made me unable to read any more. Why? Why! Author! Author! Just hurry up and type! Would you please stop fishing for two days and drying the nets for three days? Come on, boy! ! !
The first person is really difficult to write. The author has great writing skills and a strong sense of immersion. I highly recommend it.
The plot is really fascinating! The plot is compact, the characters are vivid, and each character has a unique charm. The author's delicate writing style brings readers into a rich world of characters. Not only is it exciting, it's also thought-provoking. Definitely a masterpiece not to be missed!
The author helped me recall interesting things about my childhood in the countryside, which is really good! Sure enough, our generation is the same all over the country, the difference is just different customs, hahaha!
This book made me feel like I was on the scene. The author's writing style is smooth, the rhythm is tight, and it is very beautiful.
Good. I like watching it very much
Great writing, please encourage me♥
- The plot of this novel is full of ups and downs and gripping, making people unable to put it down as soon as they read it.
- The characters have distinct images and different personalities, leaving a deep impression on people. The theme of the novel is profound and thought-provoking, and it conducts an in-depth discussion of human nature and social issues.
The writing is very good and the plot is very enjoyable. I read it in one sitting and couldn't put it down. It is a novel worth reading.
The writing is very good, the writing is smooth, the story has exciting twists and turns, and the first-person perspective makes it immersive to read. It is very enjoyable to watch. Come on, author!
There are still many interesting things in the countryside Why does it feel like every chapter has a ghost story [laughing]
The writing is good and the plot is enjoyable.
The writing is smooth and the story is engaging.
Seeing that in the end the workers could not get their wages, I remembered that I had asked my boss for wages in the past, and I felt the same way...
The story is a good one, but the author's naming is a bit too casual. The plot is very exciting. Come on [Adore][Adore]
I saw it now in one breath, and my thinking is very clear. I hope the author can hold on, come on!
It's really cool to dare to write a book in the first person. The novel describes the hardships of people in contemporary social reality. The author's writing style is smooth, his words are simple and precise, and his rhythm is appropriate. Great book with potential.
It describes the rural story vividly and well.
How did you come up with the mosaic-like face? [Hold face] [Hold face] This is the first time I have seen such an opening. The plot of the story is interesting and the author's narration is vivid, like it 👍
I actually found this type of book. The content is very good and worth reading. It's very enjoyable to read.
The writing is good. From the introduction, it attracted me and made me interested in reading. Good job, author!
Great writing, it feels like I'm back in time, keep up the good work
The writing is very good, the writing style is very delicate, and the plot is not procrastinating. It's good [like]
I've watched more than half of it, I think it's very good, it's worth watching, come on 666
The author tells the story eloquently, the plot is fascinating, and the characters are vivid. I can't get enough of it. I highly recommend it! !
The recorded narrative is very comfortable to read.
The writing is concise, the story is delicate, the plot has a strong sense of substitution, and the description perspective is fascinating. I feel like I can't stop. Add a bookshelf and read slowly.
The story is wonderful, the writing is very good, the humor is humorous, and it has five stars. It's beautiful and exciting haha
I feel the same way, it's well written, I'll give it a thumbs up.