Red Mansion: After the Eldest Master Split up His Clan and Gave up His Title

I feel like the author's point of view is novel and interesting! I feel that I have written the true side of Jia She. Someone who has received the same education as the prince should not be so incompetent... Big boost to the author! [Adoration]

This book is very in line with my taste. Jia She changed his image in the Red Mansion and showed a completely different side. I like this contrast. I just want to be more active in the update. I can't wait to get into my phone to update it [Chigua]

I have read many Red Mansions fans, and I was surprised to find this book by chance. Regardless of history or story, from different perspectives, there are bound to be different positions and roles. Therefore, there are no absolute bad guys or good guys. Basically, when I read novels myself, I don't distinguish between villains and good characters, I only look at whether the story itself is worthwhile. If a story has a firm stance, distinct characters, and a coherent plot, it is fascinating. That's the surprise. Looking forward to more updates!

The wife's writing is really good. The links are carefully designed and interlocking. It makes people want to read the whole book. It's over 300 chapters and I can't even see the emotional line clearly...[Exploration] I just need a magnifying glass to look for it... Did the author forget it? It feels like the ground is being laid and laid too deeply. What is the purpose of this article? Revenge? Suspense? Detective? I feel that the author has set up the article in a very big way, so that when filling in the content, the events are described from the perspective of various small characters, which makes many readers who are impatient and inductive feel confused. However, the author's writing is delicate and he is a capable author. I hope this article will not be interrupted or unfinished. Wait to see the ending. PS: If any caring brother or sister sees the love line coming out, kick me, thank you.

It's super good-looking. Although I've read other analyses, such as being a favored prince, accompanying a prince, being raised by a grandmother, etc., I feel that Jia She's performance is not in line with his qualities, but the author's capitalized version of Jia She is really handsome. I'm really looking forward to what's coming next!

I like this book very much. Please update it more [Like][Like][Like]

Very nice to look at. It's very Machiavellian and very brain-consuming. Dear author, what on earth do the Zhen family use gold for? Do you want to raise a private soldier? Apart from this, I really can't think of what else they can do. I said why I suddenly liked this emperor named Situ Chen so much. He was the only emperor I liked in Red Mansion. It turned out that he was another male protagonist. I read this book on Toutiao, and I came to Tomato today because I wanted to read the comments section. I didn't read the introduction carefully before, so I didn't know it had CP. I also thought that I was just looking at people. Although the author does not have any emotional lines, his writing is very good, otherwise I would not be able to like this emperor.

The subject matter is quite novel (after all, there are still very few fanfics about the eldest son of the Jia family, let alone two male protagonists), but there is one thing. He has been investigating all kinds of cases for almost half a book. I want to read sweet love, but so far I haven't even had a bite to eat😭🙃

Bing Leng is the other male protagonist in this novel, and he appears dozens of times more than the emperor.

There are more than 400 chapters, and the progress of the love line is only 0.0000001%. However, the writing style is very good and has quite an ancient charm. I really like the side descriptions in the article. Many places in the article use environmental descriptions to hint at the passage of time. They are not the same everywhere, but they are very consistent with the background of this article, making the content richer. All in all, I really like the author's writing style. It is also very interesting to analyze the world of Red Mansions from another angle.

It's great to write about plots and scenery! There is not enough text to write! There are not enough chapters to read, so I update one chapter every day! It's been hundreds of chapters and the two male protagonists haven't had an explicit storyline yet, there's always been a sense of ambiguity behind the scenes. I almost forgot how long it has been since Jia She was reborn? Do Lin Ruhai and Lin Daiyu in this book have a happy ending? So looking forward to it! ! ! ! (My suggestion is to raise it. I have raised it for about 70 chapters. It's super cool to read 70 chapters in one go! There are a lot of names in it. I can't always tell whether the name is Jia She's secret chess player or the enemy's subordinate. It seems confusing! I suggest you read more interactions in the comment area!)

Machiavellian is pretty good. Although there are relatively few emotional scenes with rivals, it does foreshadow a lot of the emperor's unusual treatment of Jia She. But, but here we go, why do we give Jia Sheli a sickly and weak setting? It's so strange, is he a sickly beauty? (I substituted Mr. Lian's face)

I like it very much, but it's just not enough.

It looks good, the author's writing is good, and the description of Jia She is really likeable😍. It is different from many characters in the Dream of Red Mansions I have seen before. It is very bold and innovative hahahaha. I really like this. The only thing I feel a little uncomfortable with is the author's description of transitions. To be honest, it's too frequent and sometimes it doesn't do justice to people at all. I personally feel that reducing this kind of foreshadowing will make the article better. Unlike the blank space in TV dramas, if there are too many unclear foreshadowings in the article, it will make me feel messy.

Finally, I found a book on Tomato. The male protagonist of the female channel Red House is Jia She. The author's writing style is really good. I originally wanted to gain weight, but I couldn't control myself and finished reading it [laughing and crying]

My favorite novel, Dream of Red Mansions is from a junior perspective that really emphasizes the love between children. In the stories of the elders, you can also see the world outside the Red Mansion, the unique Jia He. The author's use of history is very good. If it is more, it will be boring, and if it is less, it will be difficult to support the framework of Dream of Red Mansions. Even I feel like I read it too early. I would have enjoyed reading it more if the author came to a later stage [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Among the many fans of Red Mansions I have read, this one has smooth logic, multiple lines of progress, smooth writing without lag, and vivid and three-dimensional character creation. For someone like me who has a rough understanding but has not read it intensively, when I look at Red Mansions from a new perspective of the plot from "benevolent prince" to "first-class general", it has indeed been mentioned [Like][Like][Like]

A rare masterpiece of Red Mansions fan fiction, with depth, wonderful strategies, very graphic scene descriptions, and very bold CP. It is not an ordinary fool's cool novel, it focuses on career pursuits, and is well worth a read! The description is very delicate, the writing is good, and it is a strong masterpiece.

It's tied in one day, it's very interesting, but there is only a hint of the emotional line. It's over a hundred chapters and it hasn't been shown yet, but it feels super sweet awa. Finally, can you please post more? One chapter a day is really not enough! ! !

Not to mention anything else, but the author's writing is very, very good. At least in my opinion, the author writes about the political intrigues very thoroughly, and the interest relationship between the aristocratic family, the officials, and the common people [Like] [Like] I see it now, the two protagonists are not together, there is no sign of it, they look so anxious to me [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Seeing that they are all very interesting so far, I just hope that the author will update them soon. I am especially looking forward to the emotional drama between the emperor and Jia She [smile] [smile]

It's nice to read. The author's writing has the feel of a martial arts novel. It's time to add some emotional lines... Hungry, hungry, hungry...

Not bad. A Machiavellian novel, a Dream of Red Mansions from different perspectives, with a large layout and an interesting plot. But the scene changes frequently, and many times I don't react. There is too little sweetness between the protagonists [face covering], and it takes dozens of chapters to see them say a word.

The plot is quite interesting, and the beginning is great. I watched the beginning twice, but I still couldn't finish it. Too many side descriptions and character introductions make it tiring and dragging. It's understandable that new characters appear mysteriously. I'm still writing about it for the second time, but I still feel like I'm just looking at descriptions. There's always a sense of looking for the plot in a bunch of side descriptions [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

I have read Chapter 112 so far. It is very interesting. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. It has not reached the emotional part yet, but it is very interesting. I beg the author to update more, it's not enough [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

It looks good, but when will the protagonist's emotional line be revealed?

At present, there is no cp, because the love line has not started yet. This fanfic is not written from the perspective of Jia Fu, Baoyu, Daiyu, etc. It feels like it is viewed from the perspective of imperial power and aristocratic families. It does not focus on emotional flow, but more on career lines, so I have a feeling of reading a male channel. The reason why I don't call it a male video is mainly because it doesn't provide much pleasure. However, the author's writing is somewhat fragmented, describing the behavior of many people one by one, but I can't understand the sense of the story. Some foreshadowings have been buried for a long time, and I haven't seen the place where they were taken care of. For example, the captain of the city gate should be a member of the Zhang family.

I suggest you don't read it if you don't have a basic knowledge of Red Mansions. I was confused when I read it, but the author's writing skills are experienced. At first glance, he is an experienced author [please take a closer look]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhs the love lines are basically missing till now and there's still one! I beg the author who has eight hands to update quickly.

It's okay. For my taste, I can continue reading it, but like other book lovers, I think it's a bit dragging, but the plot is more detailed and I feel that my wife is very careful and there won't be any pitfalls like in the past. Personal opinion