Qingmei************

The heroine is very controlling and slightly yandere. The setting is not bloody. The 1V1 is not messy and the mistress has a sadomasochistic relationship. The storyline is quite enjoyable. The author updates frequently. Good luck to the five-star author.

Compared with some yandere novels with awkward plots, brainless attacks, and formulaic yandere writing, this one is written in a very yandere-like way. The last time I saw a similar novel was "Kissing a Yandere Just after Rebirth" by Da He Ma. That was Da He Ma's pinnacle work, with a score of 9.4. The author's Xiaoxuan in this book has the flavor of Xiaoxi in Dahema's book, but the author can polish some areas, such as ensuring the logical coherence and the tightness of the plot, so that it will not be so awkward and stiff to read. Overall, the potential of this book is not as good as that 9.4 One. Both my little head and big head praised it [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It's pretty good to watch, and the storyline is quite interesting. But try to divide it into more paragraphs. One paragraph and one paragraph seems to be more troublesome. Improve your writing style. Other than that, overall it's quite recommendable. I hope the author can cheer up [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Why is there no one? It's beautiful.

Come on, author! This novel is very good [learned]

Why is the rating so low?

The writing style needs to be improved, it's a bit like a running account, and there are some poisonous points, but since the author is a novice, I won't give it too low a score. Come on! Looking forward to your future works

I'm a college student, let me watch first

Good books are hard to find

Why was it taken down?

It's pretty good. Why is there no one there?

Yes (I don't know what to say, but I would like to recommend and support)

Come on, come on, wait for your debut, you will become popular [Learned]

What about the previous one?

There are flaws, but it looks good. I suggest you get a brain storage place.

I think it's good [laughing]

The best book I've ever read

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good.

It's pretty good. This one doesn't have much traffic, ugh.

It looks pretty good to me (σ′▽‵)′▽‵)σ

What happened? Why was it taken off the shelves?

I'll write more clearly next time. Sometimes I can't tell the characters apart, but the results are still good. I prefer the more perverted [shy][shy][shy]

I can't say directly, but it's very beautiful. I suggest you watch it yourself, then you'll know what I want to say [laughing]