Immortal Emperor: I Use Fetal Breath to Practice Martial Arts

Great book, haven't seen it for many years

It's indeed better than most books. Good luck, author.

A good book with a relatively solid framework

Looking at it first, I feel good now. Give a star first and cheer for the author Not bad indeed. It's been a long time since I've had a book that kept me reading. Although this one still has some shortcomings, it's undeniable that it's more in line with my interests. This book is not as exciting as most books. The protagonist himself is also an ordinary person. He is afraid even if he likes to pretend, but the sense of immersion is still good. Most of the cool things in this book are secretly cool, and there are not many traditional slap-in-the-face cool spots (people who read a lot may know that sometimes it's hard to read books without new ideas). Many people may not be receptive to this kind of secretly cool book. The overall plot is on the light side, except for some plots that make people feel uncomfortable. For example, the protagonist obviously does not need to pretend to be this b, but still pretends, but the pretending is not cool enough, which leads to a series of plots that will return to development (although the plot is brisk and comfortable during the development, but it feels like it is not good or bad again and again). It makes me feel that the author is casual and wants to write something reasonable, but the balance between the coolness and the rationality of the plot may not be right. The author may want to write a protagonist who has both advantages and disadvantages. There are not many exciting points in the plot. It is mainly enjoyable in terms of resources, but this is still secretly enjoyable. Many people may not be very receptive. However, the character of the protagonist Jianjian (ruffian) is still relatively good. And the author's update speed is so fast. It's not as if it has already been written. Please upload it slowly. It's not enough to read.

Five star hands. Enjoy the shopping.

It's very good, but the logic is not smooth and the writing is not good, but it is better than Xiaobai's writing. It should be like this if you are not practicing immortality and practicing martial arts.

It's okay. It's imaginative but the ending is a little rushed. The protagonist should have a lot of stories [thoughts]