The Thunder and Lightning That Destroyed Civilization Three Years Ago

Reading this book, I feel like the two authors are bragging together.

@Dear author, let me give you some advice, that is, when describing, you don't need to deliberately use Beng Sanli's original words. Sometimes repeating too much will give people a stiff feeling. By the way, I personally feel that the emotional line between the protagonist and Aili progressed a bit fast at the beginning. Although they are similar to each other, the protagonist also knows all the information about Aili, but the cultivation of emotions requires There are twists and turns. Ellie is full of affection for all kind and beautiful people. The protagonist is the same as her and can only be promoted to a small level. If you want to stand out and transcend friendship into love, you still need some things, some misunderstandings, and some third parties to set off and join. In this way, I think the story will be full (purely a personal suggestion, the author should be very selective)

I thought it was a knife, but I didn't expect that the knife was not only soft but also broken. [Sinister smile]

Does the author want to write about modern civilization?

I'm a little curious why there are no ratings yet for over 400,000 words.

Will there be any storyline about Star Iron in the future?

The book is very good and enjoyable to read. The author goes straight to the point without beating around the bush If you don't give it full, you're afraid of being blocked. Well, it's 99% rare.

The author must insist on finishing it~ By the way, I suggest you write about the plot of modern civilization later. Or, you can also go to other Mijia games, such as Genshin Impact, Beng Tie, and Beng 2. You can also consider it.

Come on! Be sure not to run away. Author [Like][Like][Like][Like]

How can I put it this way? This book is also very beautiful. Okay, and I am also trying to write a book now, with the same heroine as Ellie.

The novel is quite good, but the main character keeps swearing, which makes the novel not very good to read. You can reduce the number of times the main character curses, and it will look much better.

The fairy boat cannot save Tingyun, and the dream cannot save Liuying. The ship cannot save Jizi, and the paradise cannot save Ellie. Sumeru cannot protect the Tree King, and Feng Dan cannot save the Water God. Eternal calamity cannot protect Bai E, and reincarnation cannot save them. Just like the dry and painted pear clothes, the fourth sister turned into elixir And you, my friend, you can do nothing.

A very good book, very in line with my taste. Come on, author, I think highly of you.

Can the author let the protagonist travel to Bentie and Genshin in the future?

It looks good, I love watching it, please post it more.

It's great, I love reading it, I'll post more chapters

Uncle, what you said is so good, the horse is so good

It's very sweet. This book is worth reading.

It can be seen that the author has worked hard. Come on, it will be better if the logic and character description are clearer.

Very nice, no knife [smile]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

So far to the last chapter

Very well written, no more knives

This is my type

Yo West Yo West Yo West

Nice! So pretty!

The writing is very good, but won't your book be banned?

It's actually finished. When I first read it, it was only over 100 chapters long.

As long as Alicia survives, all the books will be good books.

If nothing else, three or four chapters a day is enough for me to recognize you.