Lord of Night

It's a good book, very much like a classic novel. I hope the author will continue writing and express his optimism. Personally, I feel that the best part of this book is the good pace, the unhurried pace, and the alternating main and dark lines. I think it is well written. The disadvantage is that the characters depicted are not deep enough. I have read more than a hundred chapters, and I am not particularly impressed by any of the characters (but it is not unimpressive, just that the writing is average). You can consider supplementing the characters in the process of relaxing the plot (foreshadowing). The last little personal wish I have is that I hope there will be more female protagonists, more chic, and the emotional line will be a little thinner. After all, we are all free and happy, and the thought of not being romantic makes me uncomfortable, not to mention that Ruyan has a lot of scenes. After finishing the work, I recommend a book similar to this book to the author. You can learn from "Tsuma No Shang Shogun". Its characterization is more profound than this book. Secondly, the emotional line, structure and so on are very similar to this book. Seeing that Emperor Liu Ruyan was passed, although I gave the book five stars, this paragraph is really true, so 💩, you chase me and feed it 💩. It's not that I like multiple heroines, I watch single heroines, multiple heroines, and no heroines, but it's really not smooth for you. Why is there an awkward imitation of Jianlai? It was very awkward when she first appeared, without any foreshadowing, and she had been giving hints that she was the second female lead, and she was suddenly eliminated. Secondly, the character design is different. They are infatuated. What are you, a scumbag who just runs away? These are two completely different books. The fusion is too blunt. It's like you learned the cool points from some stories about multiple heroines fighting for hegemony. When you were formulating the formula, you added something that you thought was cool, but it didn't fit in with the context of the text. Emperor Ruyan, as the emperor of the Xiling country, is obviously one of the heroines and the character who promotes the main plot identity. I dare not think about how to fill the emotional line of unrequited love in the future. If you ask me to say that it is better to just remove the noble status and write to death instead of imitating the sword, this part is really terrible. Comment again and again After carefully reviewing the book, I found that the author's emotional lines were too fragmented and I really need to think about it. There is no visible sense of emotional advancement, just a feeling of developing little by little. It has always been very abrupt. Even though I can see that there is a foreshadowing, it just doesn't feel like it is a matter of course. Secondly, the characterization is really a bit superficial. It can be seen that the author is trying hard to portray, but he did not write down the idea. The fortune teller in Tsing Yi wanted to be written as a contradictory person who served the country and the people, but I didn't see how much he served the country and the people. It was too fake and empty of his image. What I saw about him was that others said he was great. Whenever he goes behind the scenes or writes a little bit about entertainment, I think he is thinking about the people here if he has done something for the people here. When I look at the back, I feel like it's a pity to lose it, and it feels like it's been abandoned. Fundamentally, the author's framework is OK, that is, how to write a book that is not difficult to read. This formula must be memorized, and it can also be sublimated with high-end formulas (some short poems, character descriptions). But there is no personal understanding, no soul is injected, and a lot of time and chapters are spent trying to figure it out. It doesn't take too much to build a three-dimensional character. A few books are enough. I believe the author's biggest improvement point is here. In the end, I was very optimistic about the author and hoped that the author would work harder. In the end, I harshly deducted one star.

Recommended for both hands. I felt a little confused at the front, but I suddenly realized it when I saw the back, and secretly thought it was a good plan, Miao Miao.

There's nothing to say about the writing style, just be patient and read it, it's full of intrigues and plots, and it's good-looking. Take a good look. It's a little slow in the front, but it's burning in the back. Come on.

This is a truly good book. Although a small part of it is a bit silly or cliche, this is also a common problem with most novels on the market. Whether it is the writing style or the arrangement of the plot, this book is already at its peak. I hope the author doesn't stop updating and can finish it.

It is better than most of Tomato's books, but there is one thing. The vocabulary is too gorgeous, and some parts of the connection are not very good. It feels like showing off. The main content of the novel is more important. Only with these can it better attract readers. Blindly piling up vocabulary will give people a flashy feeling. However, it is good for a new author to write like this. Come on, author, I am optimistic about you.

The writing is good, not the kind of mindless and exciting article, the storyline is also good, but it is too short, please update it as soon as possible [Please update it]

It has a bit of a Machiavellian feel to it. It's good to watch and I recommend it. It's getting better and better. Come on, ancient

I've read about a hundred chapters, and overall it's pretty good. I haven't seen anything like this in a long time. The male protagonist's words and actions are logical, the female protagonist (only Zhao) is not annoying, the villain doesn't feel unreasonable, and the story line advances in an orderly manner. 👍👍👍👍👍 Starting from the middle zone, I feel a little unbearable

There are not many books that I can follow and read to the end. This counts as one. To be honest, it should be regarded as a piece of cake among the general public, and it is not high-profile in the Machiavellian world. However, the author's creation is still relatively delicate, and the plot is compact. There are no numerical values, and it all relies on technique. The book was written to a level it did not belong to. You have to read books by yourself and drink tea by yourself. I personally think this book is okay. If you like it, you need to spend more time to read it carefully and then you will find it interesting after reading it (the next ten or so chapters just didn't want to be written just to make the finale a hasty ending, which is very boring and can be ignored). After reading it for so long, I only posted this comment, and I have been reading it attentively. In fact, the author's ideological line and creative techniques are very strong, but the main focus is not on this plot, so it is normal that not many people watch it. But this does not mean that this book is not good, on the contrary, it is very good. Don't give up and continue to publish good books. Geniuses will not be buried, only those who are dawdling will.

It's really good to read. The more than 40 chapters so far are really exciting and the plot is interlocking.

Come on, come on, I finished reading it before I knew it. Although I think the pace is too slow in some parts, it is still very interesting. But when I read this book, my mood was too dull. When I went back to Chang'an, I thought it would be full of passion and excitement, but when I read there it was very dull. However, after more than ten years of layout, everything has been a foregone conclusion, and dullness is what it should be. I hope the author can write this book better.

It's a very nice book. It's a very good group portrait book. All the characters are perfectly created.

It looks okay, and overall it's interesting. The male protagonist's emotional line is very natural and comfortable, and the supporting characters have distinct personalities. But it felt like the author wanted to write a little too much, resulting in a somewhat disorganized story line. Many places are too muddled (more than a hundred chapters were written about Liuzhou City), some places are a bit deliberately sad for the sake of sadness, and some places that should be wanton and joyful are a bit reserved. There is also a conflicting point (whether I want to write about being invincible in power or invincible in swordsmanship). Friends in the book world can join this book.

This book is really good, the story is wonderful, the foreshadowing is long, the writing is delicate, and there are too many knives. Except for the fact that the combat power is a little bit collapsed, it is really a really good book. There is also a blood book that one person accepted the Emperor Ruyan. Let Li Ruoruo join us. Emperor Ruyan really accepts it.

Overall, it's pretty good. The author is very talented and the plot is very good. After reading Misty Rain, I thought there were no good books out there. Then I accidentally read it and came here with the intention of giving it a quick look. I didn't expect it to be quite interesting. I forgot about the author and keep working hard.

It's so good, I didn't skip reading it, just read it chapter by chapter. The storyline makes people want to keep reading! I want to know the plot behind it. There are temples, rivers and lakes, family ties, love, power, family and country feelings, and the righteousness of the world! The protagonist is not brainless, has forbearance, and has a sense of friendship, which is quite good. I just hope that his combat power will not be ruined in the later stage!

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The writing is good, and the plot is also very unique. There are relatively few emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists (because it looks like a single female protagonist). Since writing this kind of structure feels like describing other people's story lines at the same time, it is also very good, hahaha, but it is already very good. I don't understand why there are so few people watching it, and the word count is quite high.

After reading this book, the first part was very smooth, and the second part made me feel a little uncomfortable. The overall writing of this book is pretty good, that is why Liu Ruyan was given an emotional line. I still prefer Gu Xun and Zhao Ningxue, but at the end, I understood Gu Xun's thoughts. It turned out that I always liked him but was too restrained to face it. I also understood Zhao Ningxue's approach (I promise you are an angel). As Gu Xun said in the article, food and sex are also good. No, I have to review it now. I feel so uncomfortable right now. The author really doesn't understand why there is a love line between Gu Xun and Liu Ruyan. Even if there is a love line, I think it's interesting to see Liu being in love but not having it. Moreover, the powerful combination of the male and female protagonists is very suitable for Ningxue's baby. I feel sorry for you [crying] [crying] [crying] Finally, the author, your writing style is very good, your logical thinking is good, and your literary talent is also very good (because it has been a while since I have read such a long novel) Come on, I hope you can write more emotional lines in the future.

It's very interesting. I hope the author can finish it and not end it.

This book should be read slowly and casually. If you read it quickly, you won't feel it. Mean. It's fun to read. The author should go faster. Mainly because there are too few. Everyone is raising books. That's why there are fewer people. The protagonist has a relatively high IQ. The supporting characters' IQs are also okay. , But.

I've been watching it for so long, and the things that broke my guard the most were the death of my grandpa and the death of the little mute. I think the emotional drama has reached the tomato ceiling (purely personal opinion). I think some things in the article are not only the plot, but I also think the battle of wits part is awesome.

I have nothing to say about the writing, and the plot is also good, but the people in the night have never known the identity of the Night Lord. I don't know that I understand before, but it is a bit wrong to go to Wanjiange without knowing it. This is my personal understanding. Overall, I give this book nine points. Come on, author, don't stop updating.

The writing is okay and needs to be refined. Some words are not delicate enough, and words like "violent" are too novice-like, but the overall impression is very good. Keep up the good work [Like] [Like] [Like] The plot is also good and deserves five stars.

Perhaps many fragments are a bit too cumbersome, but some chapters are very empathetic, and you can't help but put yourself into them. The characterization and description of the characters are very similar to many other excellent works, but I think this is a classic that will be passed down forever. It is a very beautiful novel.

It's very interesting, not bad, the story is quite attractive, but it's a pity that the new book has too few words [face covering]

It's really good to read. If you want to read the plot and slow-burn, I hope you can read it. It's similar to Xuezhong. Although I don't know if the author will be angry if I say this or other readers who like Xuezhong will be angry, but this book is really good so far.

Brothers, I have read dozens of chapters, and I feel that the ghostly emotional scene is very uncomfortable to watch. I have read many books of this type. Except for this, I don't feel there is anything bad about it. No one has discussed it, or this book has more than 700 chapters. Can anyone spoil the ending of this character? Normally speaking, if the person around the protagonist is of this status, especially with good looks, if he has multiple female protagonists, he will definitely like the protagonist. Even if he doesn't like the protagonist, he won't like others. If this book has a single female protagonist, then there will be no problem, and this should be a supporting supporting role, which will not have much impact. This is just my personal feeling.

Not bad, not bad. The writing in the back is very good. Except for the lyrical plot in some parts of the front that is too abrupt (the front is really like a disaster star. He meets everyone who dies [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]. The most outrageous thing is that some people die within a few chapters of meeting them. There is not enough foreshadowing and the writing is so touching). There are no other big problems. It gets better and better later on.

The content is good and the relationships between the characters are clear and clear. A young man who has a background but doesn't just use his background to do things, seeks the truth and has been planning for a long time to enter the world and build his own power. The author has just started the book, so please be more tolerant. I think the writing is good. Come on! ! ! !