My ****

Xishan, what are you doing? ! Do you think this is the kind of book that is about to be finished before and you just keep putting off updates? ! This book has just started to be serialized! ! !

Judging from the content of the previous book, this one shouldn't be much worse.

The author has the guarantee of millions of words of old books and is trustworthy. Although this book is still a qualification text, it is a good optimization to improve the qualifications. I wonder if the protagonist this time will inherit Bai Luo's title of "The One Who Shakes People"?

Just the last book, it shouldn't disappoint me😊

I haven't finished reading it yet, but that doesn't stop me from commenting first. [Top post][Ask for updates][Send heartfelt messages] First of all, as expected of an old author of elf literature, the same old-fashioned plot makes people feel comfortable and happy to watch. Secondly, the innovation point at the beginning is the golden finger, which is not completely innovative (grandpa + simulator), but the upper limit of this golden finger is quite high [I learned it]. Thirdly, the author took both appearance and strength into consideration when selecting the elves, and the protagonist himself is also very motivated. (As the saying goes, readers like salted fish, but they like the progressive protagonist [Chigua].) Finally, this golden finger can be said to be a gift from Bai Luo, the protagonist of the author's last book, to a fellow villager. It is half Bai Luo, and there is no conspiracy or anything like that. The origin is very simple (see the last chapter of the author's last book) [I understand]. PS: I suspect that the author is doing it for his own benefit and wants readers to read his previous works again [thinking]. PS: There should be no female protagonist in this book, right? (What do you think, author? [Making faces]) (Some authors write too many stories but don't have a heroine, and they always want to give it a try, and then they give up [take a closer look]) Finally, (pick up the author and shake it~) hand over all your manuscripts! ! ! (Super fierce! [Cool])

I hope it's a story without a female protagonist

Could you please add Laoban (Banjilas)?

The author is already half a month old. If he doesn't update it, this book will become useless [laughs awkwardly]

Hehe, judging from the previous book, it should be very interesting. Please support it. There are so few words in this book that I can't tell anything at all, except that Mr. Bai is probably lost for nothing [please update] [laughing evilly]

I caught up on the last book and am currently re-reading it, but the author's updates are a little slow.

This book is really one of the few high-quality Pokémon articles. Although it has been discontinued for a period of time and many people have left, the quality is here. It is invincible without starting and can be easily collected. It is very comfortable to read.

Just asked, is Old Man Bai Bailuo?

Although I don't like books with systems, I can't stand the author's writing style, which is really good! With such a powerful system and time travel, you don't have to watch the plot, you can guess it. Anyway, you win every time, and you will gradually feel bored, uninteresting, and uninteresting.

It's nice, but a little lacking. Can there be more? I almost forgot about the protagonist's elf. [Smile]

Come on, Xishan, the pace is still too slow for me. Although I have only seen more than 80 chapters, I may not be able to see Bulbasaur in vain later. It is a pity, but I really can't watch it anymore. I'm used to Bai Luo's fast pace, and I'm used to Bai Luo's strength, but I'm really not used to this kind of pace. I still hope that Xishan you can write better and better, and the pace will be faster. After all, there are more than eighty chapters and you haven't reached level ten yet [face covering]

It's a very good book, the writing style is also good, the writing is excellent, the battle scenes are passionate, the story line has ups and downs, the characters are well created, and they are flesh and blood. Each chapter of the story has a touch of tenderness. It can be seen that the author has really carefully conceived the content and invested a lot of emotion. It is one of my favorite Pokémon fans at the moment. I saw a lot of negative reviews because people said that there is a part in the plot where if students do not do well, Pokémon will be confiscated. This is indeed a plot in the book. I also think there is something wrong with the design, but it is not as serious as everyone thinks. First of all, this Pokémon is provided by the alliance. , And all Pokémon growth resources are provided by the alliance, which is equivalent to the alliance's all-inclusive package. You only need to train hard and show results, and it has been said that only if a student fails three times in a row will the Pokémon be confiscated, and this is a plot in a training class. It is equivalent to a top class. There are only 10 people, and only these 10 people can get Pokémon and corresponding resources. If you can get better treatment and resources than others, you will naturally have to bear corresponding responsibilities. It is originally a matter that one is responsible for oneself. And when students join this class, the teacher has already explained it in advance. Notice! ! ! Explained in advance! ! ! If someone feels dissatisfied with this system, they can quit, but no one quits, which shows that everyone has the corresponding determination and attitude. I think this is also necessary, because you cannot say you only enjoy the benefits when you do things, you must make corresponding efforts to shoulder the corresponding responsibilities. More importantly, I actually think this paragraph mainly serves as a warning to students. Let them not be slack and lazy. As of the current update, no one's Pokémon has been confiscated. Of course, many people think that the bad thing is that this Pokémon has been owned by the students since the egg was hatched, and the relationship is very deep. If it is confiscated, it would be too ruthless. I think the author can change this plot to say that if the student fails three times in a row, he will withdraw from the training class, no longer provide any resources, and after graduation, he will have to work to repay the debt corresponding to the value of the Pokémon. It would be better this way and not get scolded by so many people

I also like your novel very much [laughing evilly], but please update it quickly, don't make me kneel down to beg you [crying]

The rating of this book only dropped to this level because the author had something to do and stopped updating it for a month and a half. As long as the author updates it steadily, the final score will go up. It's so good, no need to say more.

Coming from the previous book, the writing is as brisk and humorous as ever, and it seems very healing and relaxing [please update]

Can you add an old sprayer, and then pair it with a Metagross in the later stage?

So far, it's pretty good. It's not weaker than the previous one. It's too short and I'm starting to read it [OK]

Author, please come back quickly [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Haojian [Salute] [Like] Both books are good to read. If you haven't read it, you can read the previous one first. It's already fat.

Such a beautiful book, why is the rating so low? [What] [What]

Not bad, not bad. I listen to the book at work and it makes me very motivated at work. 5-Star praise. Both the plot and the combat content are very good.

From another book

I'm finally back, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

It's okay, the front is a bit templated, but the back is fine.

It looks good. If the update hadn't been interrupted before, it should have been above nine o'clock.

The plot is compact, and the bond between Pokémon and trainers is written in detail. It's super beautiful.

It's very beautiful. Although it was a bit funny at first, the style of the painting became more normal later on. Even though he is a patient like us, hahahaha.