My Split Personality

After reading it, I feel it's okay. The story line is okay, the content is relatively rich, and it provides a foreshadowing when new things appear. Besides, the description of the characters is not full enough. There are many characters who appear in the later period. Although they all have names, they die soon after they appear. How can I put it, come on, author!!

Interesting⌓‿⌓But why is there no one there?