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The title is about two male protagonists. Will there be a CP in the future? Wa wanted to see Zaizai fall in love, and then the old father was so angry that he wanted to beat up that brat. Hey hey hey

This is too little, not enough to watch, the characters are three-dimensional, the writing is also online, and there are no loopholes in the plot so far, Zaizai is super cute, it is not enough to watch, fast forward to the marriage recognition! ! ! ! ! Strong Amway! ! ! ! Except for the fact that there are too few updates, there is nothing wrong with it. It is rare to see Zaizai articles that are so interesting to me. I haven't updated them for a long time. Now I update them every day. I don't know how long I can keep up. Finally, I want to say, why is such a beautiful article not read? There are more than a dozen people who push the button every time. This article is really worth reading! ! ! !

Zai Zai is very cute. I saw the third world for Zai Zai's sake. Because the Zaizai in the first two worlds have clearly become a part of the fathers' play, one star is deducted. Especially in the first world, it is clear that the father is a demon king, but Zaizai will be kidnapped twice... It feels like Zaizai, you exist just to get a cp for your father... The second world handles the issue of father's personality a little better than the first world, because from the beginning, It is said that the earliest plot in this world is a story about two male protagonists. From the beginning, the system told Zai Zai that he has two fathers. However, the purpose of Zai Zai's plot is mostly to promote the relationship between the two fathers... If Zai Zai were not so cute, I would never watch the third world. But when I wrote the review, in the part of the third world that I saw, the adoptive father did not have a CP for the time being. I hope that by the end of this world, the father will not have a CP. After all, this is a story about raising a cub. If I want to read a story about two male protagonists, I can read other works. However, compared with other cub-raising stories I have read, after the protagonist travels through multiple worlds, the reason why he is still a cub when he arrives in the new world is established, which is okay. After all, in other works with similar themes that I have read, it is clear that Zai Zai has experienced multiple worlds, and has grown up in some worlds for several years. His mind and experience should have grown to a certain extent, but in the new world, his mind and experience all inexplicably regressed to the stage of infants and toddlers... Although ignoring this does not affect the reading of the article, the author usually is inconsistent in the follow-up...

Does dad have Cp? When I saw the train rising, I felt that my father had a CP and was waiting for me [awkward laugh][shy][shy][shy] I prefer Tangtang to have CP, but I don't like dad to have CP, so I'm asking for a solution.

Tangtang is very cute. I wonder if the first part is almost finished. I feel like this article is a bit long.

I'm so hungry, I'm so hungry. This article is so beautiful. The writing style is natural, and the characteristics of the small world are expressed in the correct details. It won't be a drama, but there are too few. [Please update]

To clear the air for everyone - Zai's father has CP, but he is also a bisexual man! This book is still very nice, Tangtang is very cute, and Omega is so soft hehe! ! But I, Deputy CP Lei, can't accept that Zai's father has a partner, so goodbye Tangtang, woo hoo! If you don't want to watch the sub-CP, you must watch it, I highly recommend it! ! There's really nothing bad about this book, it just happens to have some quirks in it. I'm sorry, Tangtang! ! Just to clear things up, I see that many people are saying that Father Lin will have a bit of an OOC personality in the future, changing from the original cold and indifferent cultivator who only loves his cubs to a coquettish one...? I didn't read it later, so I don't know the details, but I'll give it a shot.

Ahhhhhhhh, author, write quickly! ! ! ! I am such a cute and sweet sweetheart, how can you bear to make me unable to see him! ! ! ! ! ! It's really good. The theme is obvious, the story line is smooth, and it's very delicate. I just like it to be done slowly and step by step. Although there are some small places where the writing style seems childish, it's completely harmless.

Emm... Three stars are for children, and one is for the author's hard work on coding. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. [Go crazy][Punch hard] The advantage is that the subject matter is very new and the baby is cute [love] The shortcoming is that the writing style is emm..., It has a somewhat distant feeling [Petrified] You can pursue it, but don't be too arrogant [salute] In short, it's okay, but you can't ignore the writing style just because the subject matter and the protagonist are well portrayed. It should be better later on. [Adoration][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] Looking forward to the author's subsequent works [in progress][top post][top post][top post]

The characters are more fleshed out. Personal feeling Lin Qingyuan's character design can be changed to A young demon master who didn't like practicing and was assassinated and traveled through time. You can add more overhead to the background. It's really well written, but some of the plot doesn't match the characters. In the plot of being kidnapped twice It feels like Lin Qingyuan has forgotten his own abilities (the author will explain it a little bit at the beginning). I think the reason is that the author wanted to draw out Huo, A node created by accelerating the emotional process between Lin and Lin, Lin and Huo. The early process was slow, but the later process was accelerated. Maybe it was because of readers' urging for updates? The plot details are inappropriate and the design is unreasonable. There is a feeling that the author has made a brief outline but started writing without detailed context. Readers urged, and the author began to rush to catch up...

Tangtang is really cute. I couldn't stop watching the first world, but the result of the first world made me heartbroken. No matter how dad is in other worlds, I just feel that my dad is no longer "Lin Qingyuan" who also traveled from other worlds. There is an empty space in my heart because the feeling is different. I don't know if Tangtang will have a chance to see the family and friends he loved in the first world again. I feel really bad [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]. Let me just say that Tangtang is really cute, especially the cute part about not being able to speak clearly. I will always fall for it [sending my heart]

Tangtang's writing is very cute [blowing kiss], but the bad guy (Mrs. Luo) is so slow to get off the line, which makes me a little worried, [awkward laugh], so I skipped to the chapter of dealing with the bad guy and read ([give heart]) and look forward to the next plot.

I think it's very interesting, and the author has two male protagonists from the beginning. I think it's good. Zaizai is the protagonist, and so is his father. He has gone through so many ups and downs in the world of cultivation, and I can't imagine what kind of girl he would find to match him. But I feel that when Zaizai grows up, no one will be with him all the time, and the ending for him is too cruel. There is someone who can accompany him, no matter what kind of relationship he is in, I think this is a good choice.

Damn, can you write more about it? Not all the bad guys get their due comeuppance, it makes it more uncomfortable to watch. It's okay to give a side story. Although the novel can be left blank, every world can't end in such a tragic way. The good people suffer terribly, and the bad people do all kinds of evil but live well [crying]

Let me tell you my feelings. It is not my fault that Zaizai's father has CP. It is acceptable, but what about Zaizai's CP? Because in my opinion the protagonist of this book is Zai Zai, the setting of the two male protagonists is based on Zai Zai. Of course, it could also be that it's only the second world right now, so there's no CP? . Furthermore, the plot is a bit delayed, and I feel that there are some unnecessary plot points, but they are all written. The progress of the plot can be appropriately accelerated and the plot can be arranged reasonably. Five stars for encouragement. Come on, the author.

How to say it? After reading the first world, I obviously feel that the author wants to end this world as soon as possible. The plot is very strange and there are many pitfalls, but I still like it quite a lot (I originally came to see the cub). However... The writing style seems to be that of another writer (the author I like very much is called... Duo? It seems so)

I've watched half of the first world, and I just feel distressed. I feel sorry for Ms. Lan who got married and had a hard time giving birth after going to the countryside. I feel sorry for her father. I feel sorry for the original owner Lin Qingyuan who was trafficked and had her body taken away. I feel sorry for Tangtang who was trafficked by the system and used to be a love tool.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, who knows, shitty yellow button! ! ! It's looking right up! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhh, it's so beautiful, it suits me very well, sweet article! ! Tangtang Zai is so awesome! ! ! Love it, love it! ! Big update soon! ! !

I still like it very much, but does it feel like it's over before it's even finished? It's a bit strange, emmm, and my father is also a bit of a loser, eh, but I like to watch (っ- ‸ - ς), and what I like most is, I love to watch (✧∇✧)

It's good to watch. The interaction between Zai Zai and his father is very heartwarming, but the ending of each world is a bit hasty. They are all be. When can the author have a happy ending?

Looks good! Baby Tangtang is so cute There are a lot of things that were not explained clearly in the first world! There is no follow-up, which makes people fascinated!

Although I have only read more than fifty chapters, I think it is already very interesting. Tangtang is a cute boy. The double male protagonist refers to his father and another man. This man has not been written in detail yet, but I already think it is very sweet. The originally cool and handsome male protagonist becomes like a little bird when he meets him.

The Western Fantasy Chapter is the best😍😍😍😍🥰😘😘😘😘😘😘 Only the Western Fantasy World is good-looking [laughs awkwardly]

Woo hoo, author, I want to ask if Tangtang will return to Lin Qingyuan. I like that world so much [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

I pulled out a yellow hair and went to check whether it was due to vitamin A deficiency. Fortunately, it was not you, Rouse, but my vitamin E that was lacking.

Very nice! Strong recommendation The more I watch, the more speechless I become. The NPCs seem to be stronger than the protagonist, and the system seems useless.

It looks good. Does Tangtang also have CP?

Will Zaizai have CP in the future? [Exploration][exploration]

At present, except that the update is a bit slow, everything else is fine~ Please solve the original family problem quickly. It seems that the truth was known more than 20 years ago. I hope those who have done evil will pay the price...

It's okay. Tangtang was originally an Omega cub in the interstellar era. After being bound to the system, he started a journey of fast travel. There are three worlds. The first world is a period novel. In the period novel, the boss is Tangtang's father. He is not related by blood. The boss is a miserable fairy who traveled to the era. Tangtang clings to him softly, with unreserved dependence and trust. The boss also loves Tangtang very much. Inside There are still many people who like Tangtang. One drawback is that the big brother has CP, because Tangtang was kidnapped twice and was saved by CP, but I feel that it is a bit forced to add CP to the big brother. Also, the big brother has a partner and turns himself into a spoiled wife. The second world is a post-apocalyptic novel. The top student is Tangtang's father. He is not related by blood as before. His calmness was broken by Tangtang who suddenly rushed over and hugged his thigh and called "Dad". He gave all his preference to Tangtang. This world was okay. After all, the system at the beginning mentioned that there were two fathers. The third world was Western Fantasy. The cold and ruthless vampire prince harvested a soft little dumpling Tangtang. Looking at this cub that can't even fly and only has one small deciduous tooth, the prince gradually became a heartbroken "old father" from being at a loss at first. He even made exceptions to his own principles and rules again and again for Tangtang. In this world, dads don't have CP. It's okay, that's the end. I didn't write about whether Tangtang visited his father in the first few worlds. In the first two worlds, Tangtang would leave because of some things. In the latter world, Tangtang did not leave because of an accident, but I think it is a little lacking. How I wish the author would write a big extra story about the three worlds. Personal opinions, please don't comment.