Zhu Xian*****

For the time being, the writing is pretty good. I'll keep it in my collection.

I have been looking for Zhu Xian fanfics and finally found one. Personally I think it's well written, the author is awesome, keep up the good work! [Praise]

I really wanted to sell my iPad to give you a gift, but the waiter at Haidilao stopped me and said it was for ordering food.

Everything else is fine, I just can't figure out why Cangsong wasn't told. This doesn't mean that the protagonist directly identifies Cangsong or something, but it can be said that he saw the man in black using the Divine Sword and Thunder Control Technique and Master Pu Zhi, both of whom were harmed, and then Cangsong arrived with Qi Hao. Isn't it good to tell the truth? After all, the protagonist has even talked about the blood-devouring bead soul-catching stick and Puzhi teaching the Tianyin Temple skills, so this is not enough, right? What is the use of pine trees? Didn't Cangsong collude with the Demon Cult to attack Qingyun? But Wan Jianyi is still alive! So after talking about it, Daoxuanhui doesn't understand that Cangsong is for Wan Jianyi? ? ?

The best Zhu Xian fanfic I have ever seen [Like] There must be more heroines [punch]

Looks good, I hope it has a single heroine

The level of description is sufficient and the characterization is basically effective. The rest of the supporting characters do not transcend the characteristics of the original characters for the time being. They are definitely not at the 7-point level, at least 8 and above. The disadvantage is that the protagonist currently has no hidden flaws, the frontal buffs are almost full, he has a happy family, is gifted, smart and studious, and respects his teachers. He does not have the flaw of being modest on the outside but crazy on the inside like Zhang Zhiwei, or being too tough for the world like Qiao Feng. The character's personality is not fully developed. The success of Xiao Yan's perfect character is due to the background of the times. Even Tudu after writing Wu Donghui PS said that Lin Dong is more humane than Xiao Yan. Finally... I felt a hint of the harem. To put it bluntly, Zhu Xian's original work is about love. You only started a fanfic on the premise that the original work attracted fans. With such an audience base, you want to force a harem? (After Tian Linger and Qi Hao were disconnected, the harem became vague. Tian Buyi supports Lu Xueqi. This matter is already ambiguous. After Baguio was cheated, she must have gritted her teeth and thought deeply about her. It was easy to fall in love with her, and by the way, she broke up with Zhang Xiaofan. And the maid, maybe she will be transformed into Jin Ping'er who has a lot of roles left? Do Xiaobai and Xiaohuan have any ideas after that? ) No matter what you say, I hope the author will think twice.

This book is the best Zhu Xian fanfic I have ever seen.

It's pretty cool, I hope it's the single heroine Lu Xueqi!

Not bad, the writing in the Zhu Xian fanfic is quite good. Logic is online.

In fact, you can read more. There are only a few Zhu Xian fans, and this one is pretty good. I feel like it can be put on the shelves, but after all, it is a small niche, and the results may be average.

One thing to say, it is considered top among Zhu Xian fans [Like]

Is the author still writing? It's only about 40 chapters now

The writing is quite good, I just wish it could be published sooner. It's not enough to read.

So far, it suits my taste very well. I have been looking for a novel about Zhu Xian for a long time [Thinking]

So far, so good. Say important things three times. I hope the heroine is Lu Xueqi. I hope the heroine is Lu Xueqi. I hope the heroine is Lu Xueqi.

The content is very detailed, the plot is exciting, and there are a lot of updates. The protagonist has a smooth personality and can handle people well. I just don't understand why I have to exchange with the Ghost King alone. Isn't it better to find an elder?

It's good-looking and has a relaxed and refreshing style throughout. It's not procrastinating, not bloody, and the writing is good. The characters, the atmosphere of getting along, and the description of the background setting and sceneries are very natural. It's eloquent and inviting, and it's not complicated. In short, the writing style is very suitable to my liking. It's relaxed, refreshing, and quite interesting.

It's okay so far, but to be honest, this book is suitable for a single female protagonist

What will happen to Zhang Xiaofan? Gone later? Single heroine

Good content, I like it

I think it's very beautiful

It's so beautiful, but such a shame! ! !

Author, who are the heroines? ? ? @Hanmei Yinxue @Hanmei Yinxue

Okay, it's rare to see Zhu Xian fans of this level.

Okay, it's well written, little junior sister, please accept it [Send heartfelt message]

This is the best Zhu Xian fanfic in Tomato

It does not violate the original work, is innovative and exciting, interesting and informative!

Well written, keep it up 💪

Not bad, I can watch it, keep up the good work