Sky Knight: Destined Destiny

The writing is good, but the social environment it describes is too tragic. It looks uncomfortable, and the protagonist's hanging is too small... I've put it on the bookshelf until I finish it, maybe I'll read it when I have time in the future. The writing is really good

It's worth appreciating, you can see the introduction from the beginning. When you look closely from the table of contents, you can see the table of contents. You can see it carefully from Chapter 1. Okay, 50 words.

I read more than a dozen chapters and felt pretty good. I recommended it on the homepage. I was attracted by the title. I read the introduction several times and still didn't see whether the protagonist was male or female. But I still plan to read it. The writing is pretty good, but I suggest that the introduction state whether there is a CP, whether it is a single heroine or a harem, so that some people can choose it carefully, and may choose to watch it because of this. I personally hope that there will be no CP, and a single heroine is okay, but I feel that the writing will be all in the same routine, and it will become very vulgar. The author should write according to his own ideas, and don't be influenced by others. Since you have been writing solo, I will give you an evaluation. Just follow your own ideas. So far, I feel pretty good, there are no bad points, the plot is coherent, and you can watch it immersively.

Ah, this is the end, I still have more to say. It can be said that the setting of this novel is really novel. Although it is similar to the ability to rewind time, it is not as abnormal as the time reversal in other novels. Moreover, it is also more reasonable. The author has written a novel that few and very few of me can be immersed in. I hope the author will become a big hit.

The slow-heating type is okay, the golden finger is not too big, the protagonist is a type that becomes stronger step by step, and it has a sense of cultivation. The current content of 160,000 does not have any poisonous points. It is very good, but there are few updates.

Yes, the author's writing style is very calm, the plot is quite compact, and the writing is quite realistic. The description of the background is complete enough. I have little knowledge and I don't know what to say except reminding [face covering] Okay, come on

I've seen the latest, there's nothing poisonous about it so far, and the character's behavior and IQ are normal. He just left the "Newbie Village" and became an official family thug (although he is still a slave). The protagonist does not know much information. The author said that he is a Butter fan, but I have not read about it. I can supplement the world view from this aspect. It may not be suitable for the mainstream of Tomato, but it is quite good for readers who like this kind of book that is not too hung up and logically self-consistent. So give me five points first Based on the content of the first dozen chapters as of 185, this book is not suitable for me. The biggest surprise to me is that for someone who actively cheated me and didn't intend to retaliate because of feelings, it's a big mistake. After all, the other party didn't consider the protagonist's feelings when they cheated me. Secondly, the author gives the protagonist a wit in order to bury possible emotional lines. Although he has never understood the power of the true god, the protagonist is doing all sorts of things in front of the priest of the true god. Wouldn't the true god be interested in being a golden finger who has a power that is at least equal to that of the false god? If this is the case, then the protagonist's experience is just arranged by the true gods. Finally, the most taboo things about stories without female protagonists are ambiguity and single arrows. Just choose one path and go down it. Repeated jumps will not please you.

Reading this novel reminded me of a fascinating word. It is indeed well written, but the first few chapters may feel that the pace is too slow. Therefore, I suggest that newcomers can quickly skip the first few chapters when reading this book, or turn on the listening mode. After experiencing the initial foreshadowing, you will find that it is getting better and better. Look, especially the author has very good control over his golden finger. Although the male protagonist's golden finger is not invincible, the author has written a powerful feeling. He will not appear (will not appear) that kind of golden finger that is obviously invincible, but the author insists on controlling the speed of the plot by reducing the male protagonist's intelligence. Praise

This book describes the growth process of the protagonist very skillfully. The initial hardships and the possibility of unlocking the identity of a slave are also very calm. After there is no threat, he continues to pursue becoming stronger. It is not the kind of adventure that Long Aotian becomes stronger, but the boring daily life of hard work. However, the author can use the warm process and new questions to divert the reader's attention from this boring part, which is excellent. I can't find any flaws in this book. It's a very orthodox story about the protagonist's growth in a western fantasy setting. The descriptions of the supporting characters are very sophisticated, but I haven't seen anyone who can be called the protagonist's opponent. The protagonist's growth is still too smooth.

Alas, it's really a pity that the author stopped it for so long after being interrupted by a typhoon. The plot is in a relatively clear and forgotten state, not to mention that he also modified some settings and classic content. After re-watching it, I feel that the plot is familiar (not to belittle) and the author's writing is not particularly good. I personally feel that if I re-watch it, I don't have the same enthusiasm as before. But if you look at it further, because of the different settings, these seem very contradictory and confusing. So I probably won't read this book. But I personally think his writing is very good, and it's a good article worth reading (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

The content is very exciting. I heard that it is a fan novel. If you can make fans who don't understand the content of the original work, it is a good fan! I hope the protagonist is not a love brain. I only gave four stars because the previous chapters were too weak, but the situation in the latter chapters is much better. Keep up the good work, author! There are also philosophical thoughts that can be added appropriately, but don't add so much! This is an online article, not a literary work! Especially if the repeated views are explained so many times in different sentences, it is useless. This is a big poisonous point It is recommended to add more obvious cool points. The cool points of the article are really not obvious, so I can only say if there are any. I originally wanted to give it 3 stars, but the story is really interesting. I really like otherworld stories that are not cookie-cutter (such as Jobless Reincarnation, the author can also read it and find some inspiration). And I haven't seen better fan fiction for a long time. As the saying goes, good works are fan works that can be understood by people who don't understand the original work.

It's a rare masterpiece. I haven't seen the original version. What I watched was the version that was modified after the completion. The background of Western Fantasy is advanced and transcendent, and it adopts the narrative style of refining qi. It is quite interesting. There is nothing outrageous about Xiao Gua, but the emotional scenes are a bit stiff. In fact, it is okay without emotions. I looked at the comments section and the original emotional scenes are also okay, but it is not so logically appropriate. At present, the scenes without blocking points are relatively slow and okay. As for the emotional scene in the second picture, I feel that it can be deleted or retained. It is true that emotions are difficult to write and require a lot of writing. I look forward to the author continuing to write books in the future, and looking forward to your new book I originally wanted to change it to 3 points (the third volume is only worth 3 points), but after thinking about it, 4 points is better. The revised first two volumes are worth 4 points. At present, I see that the third volume is the original version and has not been revised. The first two volumes I have read before have been revised. It can be seen from the comparison that from the revised second volume to the unrevised third volume, there is a clear decline in the writing style and content that have not been revised. I can't help but come here to complain. The rhythm of the third volume is a bit messy. , The progress has suddenly accelerated, and new characters have been added, mainly because it is almost finished, and some emotional scenes have been added. I have to complain about this. Your emotional writing is not very good (consider making some cuts), but it is normal. Many famous authors are not good at writing emotional scenes, so you can consider using your strengths and avoiding weaknesses. Then the rhythm is a little off. I can't explain it. I don't know why other countries were included, but as a first book, it's already great. Come on. Then I really didn't read the third volume. I hope that the author can re-revise it after having a deeper accumulation. The third volume is just like you revised the first two volumes. I really like your end-of-volume messages for the first two volumes. When I first wrote the book, I just wanted to realize my own ideas. I didn't consider the benefits so much. It's pretty good. Come on, I'm looking forward to your other book [Like] [Thinking]

Yes, the writing style was a bit literary and wordy at first, but I gradually started to grasp the tone later on. There were no loopholes or blood-pressure-inducing plot arrangements. This is why I could endure the writing style at the beginning and read on.

It's well written. I've read a lot of cool articles. This kind of writing is gentler and more balanced. I feel good about it.

(Revised book) First of all, it is undeniable that this is indeed a good book. Whether it is from the character creation or the storyline, we can see the author's exquisite writing style and great efforts. There is no doubt that this book can be ranked high on Tomato. The score of 9.1 Is a little low according to my standards, but that does not mean that this book is without flaws. For example, the contrast between Woolley's resistance before and after the slave training camp has a sense of fragmentation, and the psychological changes caused by Reigns being used as a test subject by Marvin gave me a feeling of moaning for nothing. The author's writing skills in describing the emotional changes of the characters are slightly lacking. If the author improves this skill, it has the potential to become the next Ten Days End. The last thing is my wish--I hope the author will update one hundred chapters every day [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The title of the book is so simple, so simple that I don't want to click on it, but the content is pretty good. I really like it. I like this kind of hard work and the feeling that hard work can make up for one's weakness.

Non-toxic and edible, the pace is slightly slower, but it better reflects the growth of the protagonist, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The author's writing style and prose are both excellent. There are traces to follow if the rating is not high. If there are some cool points, if there are none. Is there any cool points? If so. But it is also the foreshadowing of this novel, and the plot can be expected in the future. It would be great if the plot could be written in one go. Directly dive out of the abyss.

The first and middle stages are very good, but later on when the harem opens up, the plot is not as good as the first half. But overall it's still worth watching. The details are well handled, especially in the back where people from different worlds speak differently. It can be seen that the author has put his heart into it. Please support it. I hope it will become more popular.

So far, it looks good. The protagonist has clear ideas, works cleanly and prudently, the plot is coherent, the logic is clear, and it looks good.

It's a hard-core slow-paced novel. The protagonist also has his own characteristics and is not so stereotyped. Now I am looking forward to following the protagonist to explore a different world. I hope the war will end soon. Give the author 5 stars here!

I'm just a poor bookworm who reads 30 novels a day. Brother Analog is really good. Although I am slow to read two chapters a day, reading more is sometimes a blessing. Just keep the pace and don't stop.

So far, it is very good-looking. It is a book of food and has the same feeling of no CP in my mind. Wow, so crazy. I like the author so much. Come on, it will become popular sooner or later. It's very nice. I like it hehe_(: D)∠)_

It feels pretty good. Just looking at the front I feel like Khorne: Chosen, but I feel relieved when I look at the back. I am gradually regaining my nature and heart as a person. Unfortunately, it feels difficult to update (´;;`)

Nice! Don't be impatient, grow slowly, and work carefully to produce high-quality products! Watchable, sure to be popular

This book is good. The first part made me feel very good. The author's description of women in the second part did not make me hate it. I usually read books without female protagonists because other authors' descriptions of women are particularly bad and I can't stand it. This book made me look forward to it, even though the author said there will be no female protagonists.

The author is very strong, and the book he wrote is very, very, very good. The protagonist's character is decisive and a bit crazy, which is very suitable for my taste. Moreover, there is no character failure at present, and the world view is quite abundant. If you keep writing at this level, 9.8 Points will not be a problem. Come on!

The subject matter is quite novel. Ordinary climaxes are sometimes more attractive than dramatic climaxes. The character design of the protagonist is also quite good. He is indifferent to life, but he still has the bottom line of being a human being. He also emphasizes friendship and the characterization is quite detailed.

The logic is coherent and the novel is super beautiful [sending my heart][sending my heart] Very nice [like]

Good Tomato books are hard to find! This book is pretty good so far. Although I personally don't like books that describe too many relationships with female characters, it's still acceptable. Mainly because the main plot is really well written. It's not bad except that there are too many female characters and the word count is a bit watery.