After Becoming Tokisaki Kurumi, He Joined the Chat Group

It's good to watch, but the chapters are a bit short and the number of people watching is a bit low. I would recommend Chapter 30. Give more settings. For example, there is a hidden power in the protagonist's body, which means temporary immortality. In Chapter 30, when the protagonist says something interesting and really interesting, you can go crazy. I personally feel that the sense of substitution is really good. Otherwise, it's not good if you don't have the strength to say it forcefully.

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch [adoration][adoration][adoration]

The writing is really good, simple and easy to understand. It is the most perfectly finished novel I have ever seen. It is much better than those unfinished or discontinued novels. The only shortcoming is that it is too short. You know, a person can read at least 500,000 words in a day when he is free to read novels. If you read it quickly, you can even read a million words, but yours only has 330,000 words. It is really not enough. It is really good to read. The only regret is that the word count is not enough. , Maybe it's because the author doesn't know much about it. The author also mentioned it when he finished it. He didn't think too much when he started writing it. Some characters were even written while filling in the chapters. It's rare for the author to write so well. I really don't know if I will encounter such a good novel next time. In short, it is really good to read. The above are all my thoughts.

Protagonist wireless time? Why can't I see any place to suck time?

You brought the Shadow King to play with you. You are a good person. I give you five stars.

It's okay, but why does it become a bit strange when it comes to dating the protagonist of the world?

Not bad, honestly. But there are still some similarities. Starting from the first chapter, the protagonist should have killed many people in order to absorb time. It turns out that the source of the world is a good-looking woman, and I can't do it anymore, right, [face covering]

It is strongly recommended that the author arrange for the protagonist to have a transformation device like I want to become a double ponytail [laughing evilly], or a Kemp method bracelet, or a Niangdongquan. What will happen if I become a villain with twin tails and go to the dark bullets [laughter]

Come on, it's really well written. I haven't seen Sansan for a long time.

Suddenly I thought of the plot of Kurumi (male) x Kurumi (female). It's a bit jarring, but I'm looking forward to it.

It's okay, you can try it again

Just don't step on the clone and let this poison flow out.

The reason for missing one star is that the protagonist has changed from Nan Niang to a girl, but generally speaking, she is still very good (I want to see a boy and girl [smile][smile][smile][smile])

So is it male or female?

Not bad, just pay attention to the other characters. After reading more than 20 chapters now, it feels like Kuang San's home field, while others are just doing nothing [laughing and crying]. Chat groups should be mutually beneficial [laughter]

As time goes by, we can read all the joys and sorrows of the world; the space folds, reflecting Xingzi's unchanging deep feelings. The kite fluttered its wings and flew across the Divine Continent with the last ray of soul fire in its mouth. There was an unsaid farewell hidden in its song. Use yourself as an anchor to pin the rift in time and space and lead the calamity of fate to yourself. When the starlight returned to calm, Shenzhou was still intact. Only the feathers of the kite were shattered in the wind into stardust that no one would pick up again...

For a novice, the writing is good, but it is too short, the pace is too fast, the intensity of the "virtual" and the difficulty of replacement are a bit off, and the rest is a bit rushed. Overall, the writing is not bad and acceptable.

Come on, come on, write quickly

This is also very well written. Well, it's a pity that the online limit is not high. After all, it is just a wild three, and the dating battle itself is mainly about emotions. This leads to the fact that the strength is not very outrageous, but the limit is very high when online. Even if you can use other actual powers, it is still limited by the native upper limit, and it cannot exceed too much.

The arena won't look good after Chapter 40. I like to see the protagonist travel to other worlds.

Okay, it's good to watch, but I don't really like the plot of the fight against the world. Everything else is fine. There's basically nothing I don't like.

It's so good. I give you a five-star review. Please update it quickly. Don't let it finish. Don't stop updating. Come on, the author is great. Don't forget to change the protagonist's personality, okay? It's a bit like a virgin, and the character's personality is a bit broken. I hope it can be improved. Thank you. Everything else is fine. I will take off one star as a punishment. I hope the author can write better and better. Come on! (ง•̀_•́)ง

Hey hey hey, two crazy three are together [laughing evilly] [eating melon]

Come on, author-chan! ! !

I came here for a visit. I was really surprised when I saw this book. I didn't expect that there was only one chapter left. The last time I read it was 25 years ago. It's a good read. At least it's a pretty good article for me. At least it's not unfinished, it's not broken, and the author didn't run away. At that time, I followed it chapter by chapter, and then I picked up the book. I didn't expect it to end after just one chapter. I visited here on February 20, 2026.

The plug-in is a bit abrupt, and there are many flaws, but looking at the overall situation, the plot seems to be well written.

Very pretty but really short

Not bad, very pretty

Not bad, I hope I'm single

Sansanchan~hehehe~