Awakening*************

Encourage. In addition, Destiny Sufferer is really good-looking!

It's not the beginning of Invincible Long Aotian. The plot has a slight feeling of invincibility. It's just that the male protagonist is just as you wrote in the early stage. Fortunately, he will appear weak in the later stage. I hope you don't have too many pitfalls and can't fill it all out. [Powl] Also, is it really suitable for the male protagonist to be so high-profile? [Rolls eyes] This kind of world view is usually so high-profile and has been secretly captured by the big boss to study [Thinking] It's not very reliable, but it's still a good-looking and refreshing article. [Like]

The world view is relatively simple and can roughly predict the final outcome. Breaking the game cage and defeating the gods of major professions. Therefore, the main content of this book lies in the emotional foreshadowing. The author did a good job, but I feel that the protagonist is not like a cultivator, but more like a Da Feng Da Geng. Of course, the physical classification of The earth lacks spiritual energy. I hope the author can write the protagonist as a demon cultivator who uses the flesh and blood of living beings to practice magic. For example, the blood escape technique can fly or move at high speeds. The blood rain can create illusions. Finally, there will be a demonic body and a body, with feet on mountains and rivers, holding the sun and moon in hand, and the sky is filled with blood and energy, just like the end of the world.

No one wakes up to think, and no one understands how the people at the bottom are struggling in reality. Doesn't every young person have dreams? All roads lead to Rome, but some people are born in Rome! Does anyone understand the deeper meaning that the author wants to express?

It's so beautiful, but I suddenly felt thirsty and wanted to drink water. After watching it for a while, guess what, I'm full and not thirsty at all [Like] [Like] [Like]

Are you sure you are a cultivator? I haven't seen anything about cultivating immortals. It's all about martial arts

A classic and refreshing article, but the kids should read it quickly #%#￥*&%

No, this is too abrupt. There are so many things that haven't been discussed yet. I'm so worried that I still want to continue reading. [Crying] It's very well written, but it's a bit slow in some places. The plot can be written later. Please make a sequel! ! ! I'm here to support you, come on, author! Still unfinished! Sprinkle flowers🌸July 27, 2024 1:57

Good book, good book, the ending provides a huge amount of emotional value

The water has not left the city yet, so I don't know what to say.

Emmm, don't comment on my personal opinion, I feel like the author likes hydrology a little bit

It's good-looking, but it's also very smart.

It's very interesting. I hope you continue to work hard and don't end it hastily. You can add some infinite flow, such as ascension, or break out of the earth and hit the monster's lair. It might look better if there is some innovation in the middle.

After reading it, I realized it was from Emperor Tears (book 16 mark) Come on Di Lei! Always with you Cool!

I quite like this setting. It looks okay, but it's a pity that I didn't write it down.

It was a bit of a short story at the beginning, but later on the protagonist's nine-year compulsory education ideological level directly sublimated the whole book. Later on, the setting of Guwu was completed and Jiu Juetian was added, which felt quite good [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

This book is okay. Just not enough.

I have read the author's other works, and they all have their own characteristics and are not routine articles. The pacing is a bit slow and I will be anxious to wait for the update. I hope it will be the first completed work based on the premise of controlling the speed of the car and surviving.

It looks great, why is the rating so low?

I have read it one after another. The beginning of this article is about hiding one's strength in front of the world, which gives enough imagination, and the world structure is not bad. However, it ends hastily after reading the second part. There are many things in the middle that have not been written. It even feels like the story has ended just after it started. It is still a bit regretful.

I saw a very good quote and gave it five stars [like]

It's too short. The author is really too short.

The author writes Randian very well, but don't write too many emotional scenes, I'm afraid you won't be able to grasp it.

Come on author, I still like the plot and the characterization is fine.

Sea, sea, why are you all water?

It's beautiful. Why is the rating so low?

It's very beautiful, but author, why don't you write anymore [I'm about to cry]

"If you are young and ambitious and want to succeed, if you don't wash your feet, you will be in vain. Once you step into the footbath door, you will never have a sweetheart again."

How should I put it? It should be that body training is not considered immortal cultivation, but it is still pretty.

I read a little bit of it a year ago, but then I wanted to read it again, and I went through most of the bookshelves before I found it. [Cover face]