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The heroine fits the cute, silly and sweet character very well, and the heartthrob is basically maintained or even perfect. System 250 also fits its name very well. Both are naive, but the author's writing style is too jerky, but the plot twists are a bit unexpected. For example, the fifth prince turned into the second brother-in-law. I didn't expect it, and there was also the first world where he was thrown out on a roller coaster and died. Like, the content is very interesting, but the writing makes me feel embarrassed. What kind of praises are there for light, fairy, goddess, etc. Although I understand that the author has thought about other people's language side expressions to highlight the charm of the heroine and set off the aura of the heartthrob, but it is really embarrassing😅. I hope this part can be revised and add some extras if possible. The ending is a bit sloppy. I look forward to a masterpiece.

I feel that this is the heartthrob story that I have seen on Tomato so far that best suits my taste (she is really a heartthrob, everyone is attracted to her, regardless of age or sex). No CP is really no CP, not even an ambiguous partner, just a single arrow. The heroine gives people a feeling of being stupid but not stupid. The stupidity is still due to the lack of understanding of some things (simple) Lightning protection: ① Sometimes the twists in this book are strange and novel, which may not be accepted by some people. ② Everyone loves her, including those who are physically and mentally unclean. ③ Generally, the real face is seen by one person in the first few chapters, and it takes many chapters before it can be seen by other people. ④ The author's writing style is still a bit naive, and it will be a bit messy in small parts. ⑤ A heartthrob novel will definitely be a bit embarrassing. Finally, I would like to give you a big compliment. The update is on time. The three views are also positive. [Love] [Love] I respect women very much. The description of women in the article is also relatively good👌

The male protagonist in the second world is unclean and has children [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

The heroine's family is a bit miserable, and the heroine dies suddenly every time.

Not bad, not bad. She is in line with the heartthrob. Both men and women love the heroine. I hope the author will write more. It's good to watch.

The heartthrob is really a heartthrob [face covering] but the little system is suffering [laughing and crying] and I go out to work every day! Very cute [laughing]

In some aspects this book can be said to be my top one. The heroine is very innocent, the system is very protective of the heroine, and the author has a great imagination and can always write to new heights. After reading this book, I felt that I would not be able to read other books of the same type, because this book touched me deeply. [Smile][Smile][Smile] The last sentence summarizes, I am really hungry [Cover face][Cover face]

It's very interesting. It would be nice if there was a subtitle for each world.

Nice! A true heartthrob of men and women, awesome

I feel that the main god does not love the heroine, but is possessive and lustful. He just treats the heroine as a canary, trapping her in a cage and not allowing her freedom.

This book really satisfied my love for heartthrobs

It's a pretty good book, but the heroine's death was sudden every time, which made me a little bit unable to recover. I hope there will be a sequel.

I picked up this book out of boredom and read it to chapter 275 in one go. Overall, it's okay. The heroine is a perfect Bai Yueguang! ! ! But the fly in the ointment is 1. After I read Chapter 275, there was very little description of Yun'er's appearance, but too much about her appearance, so that I couldn't imagine Yun'er's appearance, but the article also said that Yun'er's beauty is unique. This kind of blank work is good and bad, (I think it's average, but it's okay. You can "copy" the OC you want. 2. There are too many things about the Rebel Bureau and the main temple. The feeling of going around in circles makes people feel a strong irritability because it is not clear whether the heroine is good or bad, and which one is the villain, the main temple or the rebel bureau. 3. After reading Chapter 275, it is mostly about the ancient small world. There are more descriptions of Shura field and supporting characters, but the main center is still on the heroine. 4. The average number of story chapters is 1-20 chapters. Although it is less than others, the story is too abrupt and makes people unable to react. Overall, it's still very good-looking. The heroine gives people the feeling of a sacred flower on the high mountain. She is a perfect representative of Bai Yueguang, just like the early-dead Bai Yueguang in ancient novels! ! ! !

Beautiful, Xiaoyun, I can already feel that she is beautiful just by reading the text! Blank is really good or bad, I hope Xiaoyun can defeat him. Big cheers for the author! I hope Xiaoyun can be known to more people.

This book is very interesting, very interesting. Bai Yun is a lovely heartthrob who travels through various worlds. She is a real heartthrob. There is no female rivalry. Both the male and female protagonists like her. Even our little system is captured by him and her. It is worth reading. I also look forward to more and better new books from the author [Send my heart] [Send my heart]

Unintentionally clicked on 2024.4.23——Follow the full text on 2024.10.8 I really like the treasure heartthrob story. It's been a long time since I read it and I'll leave a review. If you don't point out any of my red flags, I'll read this article over and over again. The beauty of Yun'er's daughter is worth a lot. Oh, by the way, this book has no CP.

Come on, come on, keep working hard

I hope the author can publish an article where everyone who likes the heroine can travel to the same world and watch Shura Field first [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Super beautiful. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Very sweet. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

This is the most satisfying heartthrob novel I have ever read. No cp, no ambiguity, it's already the second season, isn't it? Can the author release a second season? It's so beautiful, but why is the rating so low? I feel it should be rated above 9 points.

It's very interesting to watch. It's much better than other ones that force a female protagonist. Some of the heartthrobs actually want to be successful and they force the female protagonist to ignore the wishes of the female protagonist. It's very unpleasant to watch (a small part of them are, some of them are not). The author loves the female protagonist very much.

Very interesting, the content is very exciting

This article is really new and too short! ! ! !

The writing is very good, and the characters in it all fall in love at first sight (and are attracted by sex), and they all dote on the heroine. Even the system dotes on the heroine, who has a cute and innocent personality. There are also a lot of foreshadowings

This novel is a group pet literature composed of multiple worlds. In each world, there is no specific sequel after the death of the protagonist of this novel. It abandons the stereotyped plot of chasing love in the crematorium, and instead allows us to see multiple worlds and multiple settings from a God's perspective. The most important thing is that the protagonist is a heartthrob and has no CP, hehe. What can I say, it just looks good! ! [Adoration][Adoration]Praise more

It looks good. It would be best if it had two female protagonists.

It's very beautiful, it's the first good knife [crying][crying][crying]

It looks like white moonlight

_It is also very beautiful. Although it is written in many separate books, it is really beautiful. It travels to different worlds and has peerless beauty. The male and female protagonists love it very much. It is very beautiful. Come and read it.

It's pretty good, but I feel a bit biased towards Baihewen.