Quickly Pass Through: the Unlucky Cannon Fodder Earns a Hit, Don't Disturb Him!

Shen Yu seems to have appeared in this world. Words make up his flesh and blood, and monologues from readers stir up his soul. I observe the joys, anger, sorrows and joys through the mirror. I also understand love and affection. I want to use countless gorgeous words to describe him, but they all come together - what you see is love. I'm lucky enough to read this article, and I'm so excited for the author ٩(ˊˋ*)و!

It's very nice. I think both of their personalities poked at me. Shou's character is very gentle. After knowing that Gong likes him, Shou wanted to force him to leave, but in the end, because he was a bit harsh, he gave Gong two gifts on his birthday, one was a birthday gift, and the other was an apology. The apology happened to be the money can that Gong mentioned before, and it was full of coins. It really poked me! ! ! I am very much looking forward to the following plot, and I hope the author can work harder [Love]

It's so beautiful. Alas, I almost got dissuaded by the slow traveler I was targeting, but it turned out to be so beautiful. The emotional line is just right. I like very ambiguous ones, but I also like the kind of long-lasting emotions. As long as the depiction is good, it's fine. It's just the right age to make those emotions very good. First of all The main line of this world is not love, but it has always been a hidden line. The main line on the surface is that the protagonist completes the task and changes his original life. He is almost always fighting with others to fight for power, and the emotional line is always interspersed in this business battle of wits. The character design of Gong is very interesting, and it seems like spending money will kill you. But as so many plots progress step by step, his problems are gradually reduced. After all, he has something more important. Before he knows it, the protagonist has occupied a big position in his heart. The details of the writing are really good, and his emotional changes are highlighted. From the beginning, he was worried about whether the company he was working for could be treated well. After all, he didn't trust the rich second generation, and then he discovered that this boss was quite powerful. As he continued to get along, the beauty and temptation, and the protagonist's personal charm slowly unfolded in front of him, and he became more and more attracted to the protagonist, but it was not a very subversive attitude towards the protagonist. Even if he liked him later, he didn't mind spending money on him, but the bright moon always hung on the high platform. The protagonist is a careerist. He has been working hard for the task. At least the first world should be, according to the author, also his emotional enlightenment stage. The second world just started to go to the first world in both directions. He also started to have feelings for him, but He didn't have to know who he was, he still had what he had to do, so overall he was still a career guy. After discovering these feelings, he wanted to divert Gong away, but the birthday gift he gave Gong to celebrate his birthday made Gong make up his mind and never look back. Ah, I may not be able to express it, but the changes in his feelings are really delicate. The feeling becomes very reasonable, and the feeling of falling in love gradually with time. It is not love at first sight, but at most the first meeting, the good impression is 10 points higher than that of a stranger. The two protagonists are both very powerful people. The golden finger is not very good. In the end, the golden finger actually depends on the protagonist's own efforts. It provides an opportunity for him to learn. In the final analysis, it is his own ability and what he learns is true. What's rare is that Da Da writes, at least in the first world, the writing style and the overall feeling have always been the same. Many novels were written, but he jumped anyway, and the feeling was sometimes good, sometimes bad, but when Da Da wrote the whole world, it always gave people a very smooth and stable feeling.

So pretty! ! The content is very substantial, the emotions are also very delicate, and I really like the characters of the protagonists. The character design of Gong is also rare. It is the type that I like. Oh my god, I really love Qian Li's character, and it's great! He is a very powerful person, but I really hate the author Da Da! ! It's not updated yet, damn it! I've really had enough of these days with no end in sight. Please update it quickly!

My humble opinion: Beginner's World Chapter: Pig's Knuckle: The CEO (very smart) receives a special assist from × and has few intimate scenes. The wording in some parts of the early article is not rigorous, which will reduce the interest of reading. In the first forty chapters, there are a lot of descriptions of Shou's appearance, and they always appear at inappropriate times. I know Shou is beautiful and delicate, but author, please stop, the comment section is full of complaints. OK, as I look at it, there are always words and phrases describing being subject to external conditions. It really drives me crazy😫 After reading the first world, there are very few interactive descriptions of emotional scenes. In the early stage, they are always secretly poking. Later, it all comes naturally. There is no love process, and they get married directly ~ Spread flowers (I always feel that the number of words describing the appearance is more than the emotional scenes) 😂😂😂 This book is not suitable for those who like to read sweet love stories; well, the descriptions of business wars are also very superficial (personal opinion) Summary: The plot structure is good, I want to see what the world will be like later on Second World: OK, it's hopeless. I'm stressed, but I still have beautiful sentences describing my appearance. I'm immune to being affected by my peerless appearance😄 I didn't recognize Shou in the early stage of attack. I was hurt by the killer (acting) but also hurt by Shou (being wronged). I feel it's unnecessary, it's excusable that I can't recognize it after the soul has passed through it😢 I'm ooc (in every sense ⌯oᴗo⌯). I think Shou is about to become a love brain. I want to ask you, please give me back the calm and wise Shou I had in the first world. I can't stand it anymore. I need to save some brains. See you in the world👋🏻. It's so uncomfortable to watch😣The descriptions are all superficial🤣

The love that flows slowly and slowly is so wonderful❤️ I love Shen Yu so much. His gentle personality really pokes me. He feels like a gentleman. Shen Yu VS "Qian Li" The love between a gentle beauty and a money-lover is so beautiful✔️

The author's fast-travel novel is truly unique among all the world's persimmons🍅🤩. Each plane has an extremely grand narrative, and various battle scenes are not to mention. It's really satisfying for someone like me who loves to watch a little battle😘. You can see the growth of Shou in each plane, and er, the planes do not actually revolve around the feelings between Attack and Shou. Instead, we readers can see a broader world view with the help of Shou's life trajectory. I feel that each world view can be published in a separate book. If the audience is not large, I sincerely suggest that the author can change the platform. You are far worthy of more attention and praise🌸🌸.

Saw a demiplane. A small world with long flowing water. However, if I watch too many fast-paced movies, I will feel that some plots are very anxious, such as the shareholders meeting, and I am a little impatient, so it is better to calm down and watch it. I watched the second half from the second plane. It was said at the beginning that it cannot be OOC + system errors lead to time travel errors. You can only live for 3 months after being poisoned. Then it is mixed with suspended animation, amnesia, etc., Of course. Mainly for my personal reasons, I don't like having to follow the original owner's settings. If you like immersion, you can join. I really like the first world. If you love a moon, you have to hang it high in the sky. Five stars to the author.

I like this rhythm. I feel that not only the development of the emotional line is very good, but also the development of the plot is very good. I also really like the part where Qian Li cried after receiving a gift on his birthday. I feel that both the plot and the characters are very logical and will not make people feel inexplicable.

Very good, very warm, gradual relationship, strong and reliable lover. All is well.

The writing style is quite good, but sometimes there will be missing words (but it doesn't happen often and it won't affect the perception too much). After reading the latest chapter, I feel that the change of feelings is more natural. From admiration at the beginning, it slowly turned into liking and then because of some things, it turned into love (I can't go into details about this. You can really read it! It's really good!)

I really like it, it suits my taste, double strength 👍, gentle, intellectual, educated, the years are quiet, the water flows slowly, I will never regret loving you, loving you becomes instinct, because I love you, the disease can also heal itself, love you, the special assistant really likes Mr. Shen, I will love you to the core soon, big, update soon, haha, this is the special assistant and Mr. Shen that I saw, and added a little bit of my preferences, I really love this kind of text

The author's writing style is very good, the characters of the two male protagonists are also very good, and the storyline is also very interesting, but why is the rating so low? I have read many high-rated books, and this author's book is not inferior to them at all. You can only take your time, come on, author [Sending heartfelt wishes]

The first plane business war made me really frustrated, and I didn't get slapped in the face in the end. I can only say that the author enjoyed writing it, and I was a little bit dead. But the setting of this book is so good. I couldn't read the red persimmons and love at first sight routine. I was so excited that I couldn't bear to read it. Both attack and defense are excellent. The beauty is really good [Adoration]

The plot of the first world is pretty good. . . But it's a bit frustrating to watch. It's not particularly satisfying to be slapped in the face, but it's logical, and it's pretty good that my career comes first. It's not a common love-at-first-sight drama. It's pretty good, but it's also a bit bland.

This book is still very nice to read. If you like long-lasting love, you can read it. The author's writing style is very good and he writes very poetic and sensible love.

I have been following this book for a long time and found that I have not reviewed it yet. SysysyI love you like a mouse loves rice. The author's writing style is obviously getting better and better as he writes, and he has his own style more and more. It has the lightness of prose, but there is no lack of sense of substitution when reading it. This style really shocked me. There is a plane that I like very much, but it may be too long and the fast travel setting is not suitable for writing such a long story. I feel that it ends a bit hastily, which is a pity. I really like this aspect of Li Yu. The characters and the plot really impressed me. While watching, the fireworks of rural life and the details of neighborhood interactions came to my mind. I felt that the network of interests and relationships in the countryside depicted in "Country China" was concrete. [Blow kiss] Come on, author Beibei I just took a look at the book cover and found that the slow wear label has been added. To put it another way, it feels a bit like an immersive time travel, and the system has a low sense of presence. In the impression, it only appears at the beginning and end of each plane.

I really like the interstellar chapter. Although it is very long, it is indeed the most beautiful of the three worlds I have seen so far! To be honest, the first two worlds are really a bit mediocre, not ugly, but not good-looking either. The biggest drawback is that the author describes the beauty of the protagonist in a large space, and then the protagonist succumbs to his beauty. There is almost no emotional drama in the first world. The second world is slightly better, but not much, and it seems very empty. I don't know how the two of them suddenly fell in love, and there are no memorable points. It feels like the protagonist is still an outsider, not integrated into the world, and his character design is very thin. It has been really different since the third world of interstellar novels. The characters in the author's works have come to life and become flesh and blood. It is really surprising. Although this world also describes the protagonist's beauty, it is not as out of place as before, but just right. It is also possible that in the third world, the protagonist has been cute since he was a child. The description of the face is not offensive? The interstellar novel has a lot of daily interactions between the protagonists. You can feel their personality traits in their daily interactions. It's so cute! Who knows, the supporting characters and villains in this world have also become more fleshed out. Erwin and the little black dragon even have a foreshadowing in the future. Although they are villains, they also have a bit of a rivalry. What's going on? There are also little octopus Mengmeng and little golden tree who are cute and mischievous. I really like them and want to keep them! There are also robot butlers, so what if you give me one? ! When I read the first two worlds, I actually wanted to give up the book, but I couldn't find anything good to read for the time being, so I continued reading. But now I am willing to pay for the third world, the interstellar novel, full marks! ! Okay, now let's go see the fourth world to see if it looks good...

This is so pretty! [Admiration] Love it, love it! [Blowing kiss]

The author's writing style is good and the writing is beautiful. After reading some other comments, I suggested that the author write the introduction slowly or at a slow pace to avoid thunderstorms.

The writing is really outstanding. The introduction is very ordinary and I only read it. I didn't expect to be impressed by the writing. Especially the plot and writing of the second dimension, describing the world of martial arts, feel like it could be made into a TV series. Just watching it reminds me of the time when I followed the world of martial arts. The third plane is even more amazing, just like a single book of Interstellar ABO plus Dragon Aotian upgrade stream. The length is a bit long, but the plot is so exciting that it feels so fast. There are only three planes at the moment. I look forward to Dada's subsequent works. This kind of writing is really hard to find on Tomato. I support Dada [love]!

It's okay, there's nothing interesting about it. The only drawback is that the world is too long, and it may be too short to portray the plot characters well. However, the author has already said it in the introduction. This is okay. The emotional line is slow to heat up.

This book is really super good to read, don't worry if it's too little or not enough. The author has good writing skills, the story is good, and the world view is big and the layout is big. The character of the protagonist is hard to find. Although it's a bit long, it's really good to read and it can train your patience. Every aspect can make my eyes shine. I really recommend it! ! ! ! Why doesn't anyone read it? It's really, really good. I, who have no patience for reading and can't finish it, can deeply appreciate how good this book is. It's just that not many people have read it. This book is top-notch. I highly recommend it! ! ! ! It shows that I have only watched it for an hour. I don't know why, but I have watched it for at least 30 hours! ! ! Boss, come back quickly, I beg you

Overall, this book written by the author is very good. It can be seen that the author is also a newcomer and is making progress. Although the previous plot is a bit average, until the third plane, I feel that the author's writing is getting better and better. The writing style is really improving, and it can be seen that the author has put a lot of thought into writing this book. From the immaturity of the first plane, the feeling of not being able to find the key points, to the transition at the critical moment, I should have found my comfort zone later on. Start writing about the daily interactions between the protagonists. As I read this book, I felt it became more and more attractive, the plot became more and more progressive, and the character of the protagonist was also very novel and lovable.

1. The writing is good and the plot is smooth. 2. As shown in the introduction, slow travel, and jumping in the middle of the first plane took almost two hours. 3. It's not a cool novel. I didn't feel happy anyway. The protagonist fights back but pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. 4. In the first level, the emotional line is not obvious in the early stage, but unrequited love is attacked in the mid-term. Thanks to the author for accompanying me ~ [Blowing kiss]

Wow, I really like the first world and the third world, especially the third world is really beautiful. Come on, the author. The third world is so well written that it can really be a separate book. The third time is the longest. At present, I can feel that there is still a lot of content to be written. I hope the author will write more [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

It's super beautiful, with a lot of words, and I really enjoyed reading it. Each short story is explained very clearly, and it won't end as soon as the world begins. Unlike those fast-traveling novels that end a world in more than 20 chapters, the chapters of each world can be the entire book of another book. I like it very much. It's just that the author stopped writing. I don't know whether he stopped writing or something happened in the third dimension. Will he come back?

It's really good to watch, but the relationship progress of New World is a bit slow, but to be honest, I really like it. Maybe it's because he is unique and has really strong feelings. He is not the ordinary kind who only relies on others. He is a very suitable person for falling in love because he is gentle and strong and will not wrong his lover. As the author said, he is a very rational person. Love is the icing on the cake for him. It would be very beautiful without it. So although the progress of love is very slow, I really can't help it and can't save it at all.

I really like the author's character Shen Yu, who is calm, rational and beautiful, with smooth logic and three correct views! I really, really like the protagonist who focuses on his career! Love is like the icing on the cake. Moreover, the author's writing style is really good, and many sentences are very touching. Maybe the world behind it is a bit long, but I think it's okay, and it's not enough to read. The author has perfected the world view very well, making me feel that they are real people with flesh and blood. I was a little reluctant to read it, for fear that I would no longer be able to read it after reading it.

It's beautiful, every world is beautiful, and very detailed, with a grand world view. Each world individually is a very good single novel. Now let me tell you something that only represents me personally. As the author said, it is long-winded and very slow. It was so slow that I forgot what he had written before and had to look at the settings again. In addition to the complete emotional line in the first world, I actually felt that the number of people affected by it was a bit broken later. , Because starting from the second personality, Gong is actually not very good to Shou. Although he has amnesia, according to my understanding of Shou, he should not lick Shou, but he does some very strange actions. Even though Gong did that to him, he still can't let go. According to his personality Generally speaking, he shouldn't be swayed by this. If you are not the person I am looking for, then I should turn around and leave instead of insisting on being with someone. The most outrageous thing is that after losing his memory, when Gong said the sb words, "He poisoned me", I felt guilty. It's time to turn around and leave instead of waiting for him. His amnesia cannot be the reason for him to hurt Shou, and Shou's love does not allow Shou to hurt him again and again. However, the overall plot line is still relatively complete. If you don't watch Shou's sudden love brain reaction, the story would be perfect.