Improve the Civilization Level of the Tang Dynasty

I am a newbie, but I am also doing writing work. I was an animation director before and wrote a lot of scripts, especially animation scripts. I have been reading novels for a long time, and I hope to write one myself, so I came up with "Artists of the Tang Dynasty". I read some book reviews from friends and realized that I have stepped on some mistakes. Thank you very much for your book reviews. Fortunately, the novel has a revision function. I revised some bad points in a big way to make the relationship between the characters more layered and the logic more reasonable. Strive to make this book the best it can be so that everyone's impression of it will not be so bad. I also hope that all my friends will continue to support me and help me find out if I have any suggestions or if I am poisoned. I would like to thank you all. In addition, I sincerely ask all my friends to be merciful when reviewing books [crying]. I am also a person who knows my mistakes and can correct them. [Laugh]

It's very well written, I like this style very much. Princess Pingyang in it is very manly, the protagonist's creations are also very creative, and the war scenes are very enjoyable. This book should describe fantasy things realistically, so that people can read it leisurely and feel the passion and passion.

Let me talk about the advantages first. It is rich in content and very thoughtful. Especially the glider part, I think it is good. Before, I thought it was a fantasy that a horse can bring a plane to the sky. But then I found the video and watched it. I am narrow-minded and it can really be done. Another advantage of this book is that it doesn't have too many words, which is rare. It basically follows a plot. As for the personality of the characters, the control of the characters is also good. The main plot line is very clear. There is no old routine like potatoes, Quyuanli, soap, crafts, music, etc. It feels good and refreshing. In addition, I feel that the author's historical background is also good. Another advantage is that the author seems to have really looked up the map to write the scene, and his description of Dingxiang is very accurate. Let's talk about the shortcomings. I guess the author is a newbie and didn't pay attention to the first three chapters. The first ten or so chapters were a bit unfamiliar, but I guess he started writing more liberally in the later chapters and it feels like it's improved to a higher level. In addition, the contradictions are rarely displayed and the conflict is not enough. I hope the author will strengthen it in the future.

Very creative, I like this kind of novel without delay, the characters are quite interesting, I really like Princess Pingyang, but unfortunately I am not the protagonist.

Very good, very good

The content is rich and the plot is also very good, but the princesses are all led astray by the protagonist [face covering]

Is this just one chapter updated every day? ! It's not enough to watch at all [face covering]

Well written and fluent.

I think it's okay. Is there a plot that leads to all the worlds? I feel like I can write about using music to commit suicide in all the worlds. Please update more and don't read it.

Mickey has entered the wonderful house and wonderful home.

A very novel title. It could use more humorous settings and less intrigue. It will be tiring to read.

Looks good, I like the subject matter The running account is in ruins

Okay, okay, nice looking

This book is worth reading

How can I put it, it's pretty good. It's just that it's a little bit toxic at the beginning. The back is fine.

A very highly recommended novel to read. Very. Um. A horizontal part.