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Full marks, really must be full marks The author's grasp of emotions is really good. At least so far, there has been no direct giveaway or the main character going insane. He even wrote about Siren! Come on, that's the cutie Siren, and our Thunder Queen and Qimao Cat! ! ! The jokes from time to time also made me laugh like never before, but the number of online readings is really too small. I'm afraid you will just stop reading. It's really hard to find a good book these days.

Ending of Chapter 49. This novel is more everyday. At least when I first saw it, I didn't see any fierce fighting scenes. Fantasy does not count. What's more, are you sure it's the protagonist fighting? Instead of Kiana fighting? This book is about the single heroine Raiden Mei and the protagonist's "men". It is non-toxic, so please feel free to use it.

We've been talking about it for so long, so let's give it a review. It's very lively and very dense. I like it. The character of the protagonist is also okay. As for the overall rating, I can give it a 9.1 Outright five stars. Okay. Okay, I admit that I was poisoned by the passage about Cecilia. It got three stars. Okay, I admit, three stars is still too high. Let's give it two stars [smile]

The author's composition is horribly mixed, but he has controlled it very well, and the overall feeling is good so far. (Also, does the heroine have Vita or Kira? Will there be a Kamen Rider in the back? I want to see Soki and Kuuga)

Beautiful, love watching it! Unexpectedly, the protagonist had contact with the Yusan family before the collapse. Will there be a scene in which Yuno the Herrscher is modeled before the collapse occurs? I want to see Mei Yi jealous more [laughs evilly]

But the harem will not be completely free like other books. There will be some time and emotional foreshadowing to add points. The content is more daily, but unlike other daily articles that only have a few writing templates, the funny parts can make me laugh, which is a plus. However, it is recommended that you add some pictures or introductions when playing memes. If readers don't know about the memes, it will be easy to dissuade them. The protagonist's combat power doesn't have to be too high. The upper limit of Honkai World's combat power is quite high, so you don't have to worry about becoming invincible. Moreover, it is originally a daily novel that follows the main plot. Therefore, it is recommended to use it whenever you have a card to increase your combat power faster. The progress of the plot can be a little faster, I really want to know the follow-up development. I hope I can go to Star Rail later. (The writing is a bit messy, and my Chinese is not good, so I can only write whatever comes to mind)

The writing style is actually average, but the character creation is very good in Tomato. What I find most interesting is that the author is very complex. There are many jokes interspersed in the text, which makes it quite interesting to read. The anime character design is not too bad (it's not very easy to see in the early stage). If it doesn't fall apart in the later stage, it will probably be ranked in the top five among Tomato's three fans. Author, I advise you to slow down more [face covering] There is something wrong with the recent content, and the character is showing signs of collapse. Friendship and love are actually selfish. If I like you, I don't want you to have contact with other girls (or boys). Even my best friends don't want you to get too close to each other. This is a normal psychology and is not a yandere. I would like to ask the author if he has a detailed outline. The characterization of Bengsan fanfics is hellish. The protagonist group will show different personalities and ideas in each period. You can't make these female characters look the same forever. This would be boring and unreadable. (I personally like characters like Alto) Moreover, the author has made it clear that the tragedy of the original plot will be rewritten. In this case, how will the characters in the original plot grow? Will the male protagonist feed food into the protagonist's mouth like an old mother? Or is it like an old father who clears all obstacles for the protagonist group? (There is currently such a trend) Of course, it's hard to agree with everyone. Some people like to watch OOC. The above only represents my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it!

It's a good read and highly recommended, especially to the Queen, Siren Party. This book is going to turn the Queen into an elf of the spring [shy]

I can only say that if the author doesn't go crazy and can keep writing this book, it will definitely be a book that can be praised as a god. But it is too little, and the emotional writing is absolutely fine! Author, I beg you to add more updates!

The book written by the author seems to me very interesting. I just hope that the author will not stop updating because of the platform. I will keep following it.

Not bad, good looking. Keep it up author!

What kind of fairy book is this? It's so unbelievable. The protagonist's outlook is correct and the character is consistent with the original work. This is very rare for a fanfic. So there are still fewer five stars, there are still many jokes that make people find it interesting, and the author's output is a bit low, but it's still acceptable. It's more troublesome than it is enough to read.

I can give it five stars, it's not bad and can be an encouragement! ! ! ! ! Come on, author! ! ! The disadvantage is that it's a little watery, but it's okay. I'm still accepting it, and I feel like it's okay. Don't spray it randomly! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Eating Melon] [Adoration]

Um, it was still very good at first, but it was a bit low on combat effectiveness, and then it suddenly improved, with a big and fragmented improvement, and your book is too biased towards daily life. I have forgotten the last time I saw a Honkai fan book with daily life accounting for 9/10 (counting all platforms) [face covering] It won't work until later

Except for the control core, which was given to me by Honkai, the rest were made by the protagonist's own hands, the biological computer system, and the martial arts simulation. It was very refreshing to see, and becoming stronger was not abrupt at all.

For me, a senior 2D reader, this novel is very beautiful in every picture, and the writing is also very good. Even the description of my character is very good. The protagonist also has characteristics, not to mention so many, but Qiao Ye must be added. Brother, please, don't stop updating [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Personally, I think it's pretty good. The author except for some of the plot in the front, is pretty good in the back. If you like Honkai Impact III, harem, comedy, etc., This book is worth recommending. If you like a single female protagonist and a plot with tight logic, please read it. I personally think this book is more suitable as a refreshing novel.

A very interesting novel, although some parts may look a bit confusing, but the overall structure of the article is good, and the article contains many very interesting jokes, as well as some "world-famous paintings" in Honkai Impact

Although the collection is a bit too much, I don't see the disgusting feeling of a stallion. The protagonist knows how to advance and retreat, and I am quite satisfied that there is no brainless collection. The foreshadowing and description of each collection are not obtrusive, and the writing is very good [I learned it]

The author of this book actually wrote it very well and added all these interesting links. The most regrettable thing is that it has been blocked.

This book is between the beauty of the novel and the pain of reality. The author brings his personal beautiful emotions into it. The content is so beautiful. The author not only wants to write the characters realistically, but also wants to give the characters beautiful settings, so it cannot be called collapse, it should be called harmony. Don't take it too seriously when reading, just enjoy it [smile]

It's just good-looking. I'll check if you let people live.

@Pineapple It's beautiful, I love watching it, I like watching it. So author, where are you, the meow person? Why hasn't it been updated yet?

Come on! Anyway, I will keep watching!

Well written, I hope the author will continue to work hard! It would be better to write it as three to four million or tens of millions, as if it were like the universe, otherwise it would not be enough to read. Moreover, it is best to have three to four updates every day!

It's very nice. I personally think Harem Lily is not good. I don't seem to have this one. I've only read dozens of chapters... I'll look at it later. It's so cute in the second dimension.

It's great, it contains a lot of meaning, but it's not completely nonsensical. There is no problem with the description of emotions and plot. It is not so abrupt or brainless. The only problem so far is that it is short and too little. The more the merrier. UPUP. Please update it quickly. The next magic book is yours. Come on, brother who writes novels.

A very good-looking Honkai Impact fanfic. The subject matter is very novel. The characters are basically consistent. The setting is also reasonable. It is very beautiful, but it can be seen that the writer is a newcomer. The writer is not very good at writing fighting scenes. There are many inner monologues, but there are many elements. It is old in the second dimension [laughs][laughs]

The plot is smooth, the character of the protagonist is not broken, he is very slutty, the relationship development is reasonable, the combat power is not broken, and the plot is not frustrating. The slightly controversial thing is the handling of Cecilia. I originally planned to break it up, but ended up with a political marriage. There are no other poisonous points, and the plot is also very enjoyable. If I write it like this, it will be above 9 points. Summary: can watch

The overall writing is quite good, and the emotional aspects are also OK, without too many toxic points. Although the goal is to set it all and achieve it, it doesn't make people feel disgusted. Pretty good. Come on, I'm optimistic about you. I hope he won't die and will be updated more often.