Under One Person: Immortal Immortal

The writing is indeed pretty good, better than a system text that is cloaked in a garb of incredible understanding. However, the mechanical sound in the first chapter should be better turned into a piece of information. It looks like a system text there, but the rest is fine. It has a few flaws but is acceptable. It doesn't work anymore, it's useless.

I read a lot of book reviews and gave low scores, expressing my incomprehension. Judging from the plot, at least it is quite smooth and interesting so far. Come on, the author. If you don't rely on this book to make a living, I hope there will be an ending.

It's good to watch, the ending is imaginative, and the characters of the original plot have not changed. Many people said they didn't want to watch it because the male protagonist could join anywhere. But at that time, the male protagonist was only 14 years old, and the male protagonist was very strong. Even if Qiang did join, many things would become easier. The author's goal for the male protagonist has always been very clear, and there is no misstep until the end.

It's been many years since I've seen such a serious book that made me laugh. Welcome to Chapter 95 and Chapter 96 to see how the vicious villain purchased missiles abroad to attack the protagonist's domestic division. The protagonist studied under Baiyun Temple and was located in the capital. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

The only one-person fanfic that I enjoy watching is that invincibility is what it should be, immortality is invincible, and the plot is not muddled and logical. The purpose is very strong, just for longevity, so the writing will not deviate too much from the main line. It's too short, please keep it updated, otherwise the rating will get lower and lower, that's how fan fiction is

This fanfic is one of the rare works that does not focus on CP, but also fills in the pitfalls of the original work (some are even better than Mi Er himself). The most important thing is that the writing is very complete (not limited to the dimension of fanworks) and readers can still recall it after reading it! ! ! ! ! Besides! The details are appropriate! An invincible protagonist should look invincible! I enjoyed watching it very much! ! !

The front is okay, the back is okay. I don't see the determination to pursue immortality. It's a good character to be affectionate and righteous, but does Zhang Chulan always respond to every question? Every time I say it depends on the situation, but I can guess the inevitable result hidden behind it when I see these words. [Start] It's okay. Overall, it's okay. It's impossible for one person to like all of them. I've also been tortured by a lot of poisonous books. Now, unless there are particularly annoying poisonous points, everything else can be ignored. Personally speaking, after 100 chapters, I think the points will start to drop. I hope it can be written better. After all, the income is not high and it is not popular to a certain extent. I'm afraid it can only be considered a part-time job, but it's not as much as working part-time at a fast food restaurant. Overall it's okay. I want to watch the extras hahaha [note]

The plot is okay, even if you are seeking immortality alone, you are not always in a group with the protagonist. It is different from other fans, and all the pitfalls have been filled. But it's pretty good-looking among the same person.

It feels like the Eight Magic Skills have been weakened not just a little bit, but overall it's pretty good. Writing a book can be outrageous, but not evil.

It's probably the best plot design I've ever seen. Many other books speculate that babies are created by the Eight Magic Skills, which is unreasonable when you think about it. The Eight Magic Skills can be regarded as the Eight Evil Skills, which can quickly become stronger and damage themselves. It is more likely that they "learn" the Eight Magic Skills from the baby. Rootless friendship 36, what is the purpose of the 24 Solar Terms Valley Enlightenment Skill? What did he get? Where have you gone? This explanation in this book is quite reasonable.

Uh... It's quite refreshing, for me. If you decide to read it, don't read the reviews for the first 50 chapters. They are well written and reasonable. Luo Changsheng, as his name suggests, is a person who pursues immortality

To be honest, it is very exciting, with a huge layout, and I don't want to skip the chapters later. It's also good to have no heroine, after all, the main characters are immortal. The protagonist only wants immortality and has no other ideas at all, which is worthy of the title of the book.

It's a good read, the protagonist is strong, and the article is logically coherent, making you unable to resist reading it in one sitting.

@ The Master of Survival Author Come on, try to follow the original work. I am especially interested in the rest. How would you write to catch Ma Xianhong? Fan fiction can only be popular if it follows the original work and does not write randomly. Don't worry about other people's opinions. Follow your own ideas, but it still has to be close to the original work. If you don't follow the original work, there are some settings and details. Maybe the author will forget it. Although some people like to read it, they won't read it for too long.

I originally wanted to give it 5 stars, but I was afraid of being harmed by Harmony. The writing is really good, and the logic is logical and the ending is reasonable. It has been a long time since I read a book in one sitting. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's very interesting. It's hard to say whether it's number one. But I've read Under One Person and it's one of the top three best-looking fanfics. It must be full marks. There's also the guy who posted this book on other platforms and said it was good and urged for updates. He's really indifferent, hahaha.

It's very beautiful. I hope there won't be a female protagonist in the future. That's good. I want to pursue immortality.

The book is okay, the author is very persuasive, I personally feel it is okay, and the plot is also okay. For the sake of longevity, it is understandable that I am most concerned about longevity.

Flaws do not hide the flaws, it is worth a read. In short, after reading it, I feel that the author still has room for improvement, and I look forward to better works.

It is indeed possible. This private design is also wonderful. At first I thought it was similar to an ordinary one-man fan, but now I find it is far different. I am waiting for the follow-up of the author's private design of Heaven.

It's pretty good. The writing is considered to be the best in the fanfic.

It's great. I watched it from 12 o'clock in the morning until 6 o'clock in the morning. I finished reading the latest chapter.

Full of Stars, not much more to say, this is the first book that one person has read

Highly recommended, it's really good and I didn't skip a chapter.

The writing is very good, especially when I see that there is no unfinished ending at the end, the more I read, the more I feel [shy]

Good-looking, very strong, with balanced combat power settings and firm goals.

Invincible is a cool novel. The protagonist is dedicated to seeking immortality. He is the most powerful and saves some people. The villain bosses are Qu Tong and Black Tiandao. There are a lot of custom settings, but it is very cool.

Although I have been pursuing immortality, the main plot is simple, but it is more comfortable to watch.

A good book in One Person, the story is well organized, and the writing has a lot of room for improvement [I learned it]

It is a very good addition to the world view of Under One Person, the explanation is in place, and the protagonist feels like a fairy.