The Outcast: Seeking Immortality Through Quanzhen Inner Alchemy

The writing is indeed pretty good, better than a system text that is cloaked in a garb of incredible understanding. However, the mechanical sound in the first chapter should be better turned into a piece of information. It looks like a system text there, but the rest is fine. It has a few flaws but is acceptable. It doesn't work anymore, it's useless.

I read a lot of book reviews and gave low scores, expressing my incomprehension. Judging from the plot, at least it is quite smooth and interesting so far. Come on, the author. If you don't rely on this book to make a living, I hope there will be an ending.

This fanfic is one of the rare works that does not focus on CP, but also fills in the pitfalls of the original work (some are even better than Mi Er himself). The most important thing is that the writing is very complete (not limited to the dimension of fanworks) and readers can still recall it after reading it!!!!! Besides! The details are appropriate! An invincible protagonist should look invincible! I enjoyed watching it very much!!!

It's good to watch, the ending is imaginative, and the characters of the original plot have not changed. Many people said they didn't want to watch it because the male protagonist could join anywhere. But at that time, the male protagonist was only 14 years old, and the male protagonist was very strong. Even if Qiang did join, many things would become easier. The author's goal for the male protagonist has always been very clear, and there is no misstep until the end.

It's been many years since I've seen such a serious book that made me laugh. Welcome to Chapter 95 and Chapter 96 to see how the vicious villain purchased missiles abroad to attack the protagonist's domestic division. The protagonist studied under Baiyun Temple and is located in the capital 😄😄😄

The only one-person fanfic that I enjoy watching is that invincibility is what it should be, immortality is invincible, and the plot is not muddled and logical. The purpose is very strong, just for longevity, so the writing will not deviate too much from the main line. It's too short, please keep it updated, otherwise the rating will get lower and lower, that's how fan fiction is

It's probably the best plot design I've ever seen. Many other books speculate that babies are created by the Eight Magic Skills, which is unreasonable when you think about it. The Eight Magic Skills can be regarded as the Eight Evil Skills, which can quickly become stronger and damage themselves. It is more likely that they "learn" the Eight Magic Skills from the baby. Rootless friendship 36, what is the purpose of the 24 Solar Terms Valley Enlightenment Skill? What did he get? Where have you gone? This explanation in this book is quite reasonable.

The plot is okay, even if you are seeking immortality alone, you are not always in a group with the protagonist. It is different from other fans, and all the pitfalls have been filled. But it's pretty good-looking among the same person.

It feels like the Eight Magic Skills have been weakened not just a little bit, but overall it's pretty good. Writing a book can be outrageous, but not evil.

The front is okay, but the back is okay. I don't see the determination to pursue immortality. The character is affectionate and righteous, which is a good character. But for Zhang Chulan, does he always answer every question? Every time I say it depends on the situation, but I can guess the inevitable result hidden behind it when I see these words. [Start] It's okay. Overall, it's okay. It's impossible for one person to like all of them. I've also been tortured by a lot of poisonous books. Now, unless there are particularly annoying poisonous points, everything else can be ignored. From my personal point of view, after 100 chapters, I think the score starts to drop. I hope it can be written better. After all, the income is not high and it is not popular to a certain extent. I'm afraid it can only be considered a part-time job, but it's not as much as working part-time at a fast food restaurant. Overall it's okay. I want to watch the extras hahaha [note]