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Would you mind not introducing so many people?

If you want to read about the world of Pokémon, you can read this book, but the farming content here is not detailed in detail, and there are only a few Pokémon battles. There is also too much introduction. It depends on whether you can accept it, because few of them will be used later. Most of them are the author using the original introduction to reshape the image. There are also many comparison examples using Pokémon animation.

So far it looks very good, of course I hope there will be no cp, but it still depends on the author

The ideas and settings are all very good. It's just that there's too much analysis, which makes it annoying to read.

If someone could reduce or even eliminate too many popular science and other ideological issues in this novel, it would definitely be the best elf farming novel I have ever read [Learned] Excessive science popularization and analysis, too much description, shorten the daily plot. The popular science elf text is very good, and the elf farming text is very good [laughing]. It only uses nearly 600 words for one Yongjira. It is very detailed, very responsible, and very popular. It feels like watching Digimon. People add illustrations to videos, and you add plots to illustrations. [Yongjila: Super-powered Pokémon, Casey's evolved type. Yongjira's body is yellow, with pointed and long ears, a red five-pointed star pattern on his forehead, a face shaped like a fox, a narrow muzzle, and two tufts of hair like a beard. Females have shorter beards. Its eye sockets are deep and narrow. Its torso is divided into brown shoulders like shoulder pads, a chest like brown leather armor, and a triangular abdomen with three red marks. There is a thick and long tail behind the abdomen with a brown ring-shaped spot on it. Yongjira's limbs are also segmented at the joints. Each hand and foot has three fingernails, and he holds a silver spoon in his right hand. Yongjira's body emits a special alpha wave, which will give you a headache if you get close to it. When you close your eyes, the special alpha waves emitted from your body are twice as strong as usual. It holds great spiritual power. The greater the crisis, the stronger the ability. Every time a power is used, special alpha waves emit from the body causing the machine to malfunction. Weird things like clocks turning backwards seem to happen when Yoongiara is nearby. Sometimes mysterious shadows are reflected on the TV, and it is said that those who see this shadow will become unfortunate. If you focus your attention by staring at a silver spoon, the alpha waves emitted will be strengthened, but this does not seem to be the case with a gold spoon. It is said that if there is no spoon, he can only use half of his usual superpowers. If you don't have strong mental power, you can't become Yongjira's trainer. It uses its mental power to float in the air and sleep, and uses its elastic tail as a pillow. It will also store spiritual power in the stars on its forehead in preparation for its evolution. There are rumors that a strange boy who helps with superpower research will sometimes suddenly transform into Yongjira.

The writing is good, but the introduction is too much. I think it would be better to wait until the end to write the introduction.

Very good. Your Pokémon farming dream article will always be the first Pokémon farming article to surpass other authors. I appreciate that the author's ideas are different. Also, when I read a chapter of your book, I slowly followed it and found out how the protagonist and the elves use their own power to farm. It is really great👏🏻🎉. Please don't give up on your writing path. Come on.

The themes are very rare. Two themes that I like very much are combined to form a super-combustible reaction where 1+1 is greater than two. To be honest, it is simply a visual feast. By the way, there are quite a few themes that are definitely the originator and this book is.

The author is a chatterbox! ! ! !

The book is good, but it's a bit like a paper . . . . Don't use the illustrated book to make up the word count [face covering], there are four Pokémon in one chapter, accounting for more than half of the characters.

How should I put it, it feels like the level here is a joke.

I feel like this is pretty good

There are too many words to popularize science. If you want to popularize science, why not write a popular science article?

This book contains basic information about Pokémon and is very suitable for newcomers to the game👀 [laughing]

Emm, I thought I would just keep farming, but then I went to college again [face covering]