Tomb Robbery: What the Hell Kind of Commission from Moyu Is This?

It's super good-looking. I like this character design. He develops himself independently. He is not forced to fly to the Iron Triangle to rely on him.

Super awesome! ! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart] Unlike other pirated novels where the perspective follows the protagonist of the original work, there is a copy that belongs to Chi Yu and tells the story of how Chi Yu and the protagonists got to know each other from the beginning. Departing from the original work, I feel that he is like a real person experiencing ups and downs and fantasy adventures in another world, rather than like a tool man who revolves around the protagonist to satisfy our wishes. The other supporting characters written in the original copy are also vivid, with their own character experiences, as if they are really living in that world. However, our vision is limited to the main line, so we ignore it: it turns out that their world is so big, and ordinary people also have their shining points. Just because we can't see it doesn't mean it doesn't exist. Chi Yu's performance as a player in each dungeon is really cool [adoration][adoration], and there are several moments that are truly amazing. There is a barrier between players and NPCs, so in their eyes, Chi Yu is the unfathomable mastermind behind the situation. But wouldn't it be more handsome this way? ! Hateful! ! He made my heart flutter! ! ! [Shy][shy]

I was attracted by the cover at first, and the name is also interesting. The more I read, the more I like it. The protagonist is also very handsome, and I also love the character of the protagonist (forgive me for being uneducated and don't know how to describe it). A very good article, I hope more people can read it and like it

The setting is very novel, and the friendship with the black blind man is also handled very well. I don't feel embarrassed when I read it. It is a very smooth and good book. Yangyang continues [sending my heart] [sending my heart] I hope our blind man can have a good mouth in the future. The protagonist's baby doesn't care about him very much yet. It's miserable (˘ω˘)✩ I hope that the protagonist's baby will have more people he cares about and friends (husbands) who care about him (=^^=)

It's very interesting to watch, the plot is not sloppy and exciting, and the most important thing is that the character of the protagonist is so palatable. He kills when he needs to kill, and he is 100% strategic and scheming. He is probably a refined and indifferent egoist. In short, the character of the protagonist is perfect. Highly recommended! ! !

The black pool and the flower pond in it are very good. The protagonist's elegant and gentle character is a life mentor. He can see through Wu Sansheng's chess game and can easily be the master and the chess player. He can see through all the traps. The protagonist is strong and polite. You can see how long this book is by looking at my reading time (homepage). I highly recommend it! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

I came across a new product, went in and took a look, wow! It's my favorite genre. I still like the character development of the protagonist, but it has shortcomings~ It's not enough to watch, so please do more✧*. ٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*.

It's non-toxic, and the writing is great, but it's too little, so I'll have to wait to kill it. The interaction between Teixi Chichi and Heixiazi is interesting and natural. The original plot is good, keep up the good work!

Teacher! Look at this! Here! ! ! Oi! Oi! Oh! (Slaps belly) Oi! Oi! Oh! (Slaps belly) Oi! Oi! Oh! (Slaps belly) Oi! Oi! Oh! (Slaps belly) Oi! Oi! Oh! (Slaps belly) Oi! Oi! Oh! (Slaps belly) Oi! Oi! Oh! (Slaps belly) Oi! Oi! Oh! (Slaps belly) Oi! Oi! Oh! (Slaps belly) Oi! Oi! Oh! (Slaps belly) Oi! Oi! Oh! (Slaps belly) Oi! Oi! Oh! (Slaps belly) Oi! Oi! Oh! (Slaps belly) Oi! Oi! Oh! (Slaps belly) Oi! Oi! Oh! (Slaps belly) The teacher should be 160-190cm tall, weigh 80-100 pounds, have a waist circumference less than 80cm (31.5 Inches), and have a body fat content between 10% and 25%. Resting heart rate range is 60-100 beats/minute Respiratory rate is 12-20 breaths per minute Hemoglobin range is 12-16 g/dL White blood cell count range is 4000-11000 cells/cubic millimeter Platelet count range is 150000-450000 cells/cubic millimeter Creatinine range is 0.6-1.1 Mg/dL Bone density T-score is greater than -1 In simple terms You are my standard ideal type Look here, look here, look here! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Don't forget me! ! ! ! ! ! High school students are crazy (T_T)(╯╰,)(╥_╥)╥╥(T⌓T)(Ｔ▽Ｔ)ಥ_ಥ(┳Д┳)

The male protagonist Chi Yu traveled through time because he played in Arknights for too long, and incidentally underwent a rejuvenation surgery. To put it simply, Arknights and Tomb Raiders are linked together, and the main game is Tomb Raider World. Although I haven't played it, it doesn't affect my impression. The only one currently appearing is the black blind student Wu Xie who fell on the spot. Some people say that Blackpool is very easy to drink (not bluntly, because currently you can think of it as friendship, a brotherhood of life and death), I chose the story of the season (that is, the story that happens in each commission), because I think it is much more interesting. I look forward to the author using more imagination to write more interesting stories and characters. @ Chixia elegy

It's very interesting, with a novel setting and different character lines. I like it very much. Finally, I quietly urged for more hehe.

Rice rice rice! ! ! Super pretty! I am also a big boat player, and this is the first time I have seen someone combining a boat with a stolen pen! ! Very novel! And cats, cats and snakes are really fragrant! The character of Yu, who calmly and rationally grasps the overall situation and provides the optimal solution, is simply dancing crazily on his own xp (in order to stab himself to activate skills efficiently, Modo Modo will lose something in battle)! ! I really like watching the interaction between fish and blind! Don't like all things like that too much! ! Come on, keep up the good work, I'm hungry, I'll send you my heart [sending my heart]

[Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] Show them all to me. I would like to call them the most perfect combination of porridge and stolen pens. The perfect conflict between the game setting and the background of the story, it seems that everyone in the rice porridge is really a natural disaster [laughing][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] But I hope the author is safe and sound and can remember to continue updating one day [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] Good people have a safe life! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The writing is not bad, and the Arknights system makes it more interesting, but there is a fatal point. The author wrote the original character of Tomb Raider to "entangle" the protagonist for too long, or one-on-one. We all know the character of the black blind man, but he appeared and entangled with the protagonist for a long time. , Has been teasing the protagonist, and readers who didn't know it were disgusted. I was relieved when I saw Jie Huayu appeared. I didn't expect that it was Jie Huayu who was entangled. As a client, I wrote for a long time and wanted to express my feelings. The author just wrote that he was just 15 years old! In the middle, it was written about Wu Xie. Although he didn't bother with him for a long time, he came to see the protagonist from morning to night that week. After the protagonist completed the commission, he also sent a lot of messages to the protagonist. I read the synopsis and knew it was all-oriented, but I didn't know why I felt suffocated. There were several chapters after the Heixiazizi and Huayu that I skipped. I know the author wanted to write them one by one, but it would be boring to write one character following the protagonist for too long. In fact, you don't have to finish writing the character's feelings at once and then change the character. You can intersperse other characters, or three or four people (the main characters, not the supporting characters like Wu Sansheng) can do the commission together.

Ah, I just remembered when I saw what the author said. I haven't commented after reading it for so long... (Crying in the storm) Very beautiful! The cat pool is so cute. Blackpool, take a bite. What is this, a flower pond, take a bite too. However, compared to Blackpool's interaction in life and action, Xiaohua and Xiaochi are more like souls and hearts🥺... They are all cute babies—— The fish are so cute... We are all cute babies! This is the first time I like grain production so much... (As Mom wrote this, my phone suddenly popped up the 5 symptoms before sudden death) Everyone is so compatible with Yuyu, their relationship is so natural, I love it! I always put some filters on my favorite characters. In my eyes, everyone is a cute baby... Very cute. Cats, cats and fish are the best in the world!

The writing is very good, the plot is not procrastinating, and the characters are described in detail. It is a good book. It is recommended not to keep reading because it will easily collapse. The world view is very grand and makes people think about it. It will be okay if the author updates slowly. We pursue quality rather than speed.

The writing is very good. The image of the protagonist's cat is very well written, and it penetrates deeply into the reader's heart. Although it is usually called a fish, the fish is indeed a cat (what nonsense is so complicated⊙▽⊙) The interaction and pull between the characters are also very good, there is no OOC, and the character image is perfectly restored, which is super interesting. I really like to write about the tension between players and game characters due to different perspectives. It's super exciting! ! ! Variety Chi Yu, hehehehehehehe~(^з^)-☆ If possible, more would be better, hehehe ヾ(*Ő౪Ő*)

Very interesting to write! Koike Yu's character and golden finger are also very interesting! Like! Very suitable for my taste! Moreover, the plot has ups and downs and the writing is also good! In short: great book! It's just a little short, I recommend adding more! (Hei Ye and Koike Yu are so addicted!!! (✪ω✪) Wow wow wow, it's so awesome! It was obviously the first time I wrote it, but it directly captured my heart. No matter which couple it was, they were all dancing on my chest. Wow, wow, you really wrote it with great care! (Cricket: It's just a little short, please apply for more updates!)

There is no OOC and the original plot and fan fiction are well combined. It can be called a fairy grass. It will be even more perfect when I rush into the manuscript box and take out all the manuscripts.

It's good to read, very good to read. I finally found a tomb robber fanfic that's not so shocking. I've read a lot of tomb robber fanfics before, and I really watched them follow the plot. I'm tired of reading it. The protagonist of this book doesn't always participate in the plot. He has his own plot, and he doesn't deliberately get close to the protagonist group, and the relationship between the protagonist group is not that good all of a sudden. I really like this kind of setting. Otherwise, how could the protagonist group have a crush on a person who suddenly pops up? I really feel that the character design is very bad, and I also like the protagonist's character very much. That kind of cold and ruthless tone, wow [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

☆☆☆☆☆Five-star praise! The top level of tomb robbing articles on the bookshelf. When I saw tomb robbing + porridge for the first time, I was so excited! The character design of the protagonist is also very cute. I especially like this kind of rational setting because the game is like an NPC to others and can socialize normally but has some inhuman feelings. I really don't want to be too cute...! I'm going to cook and start painting! The plot is a bit like a unit drama, one commissioned a story, the writing is very interesting ww but it has not been updated to the main line yet, only the blind man and the male tall puppy have appeared, I look forward to the subsequent plot! The pit is too shallow. Please update Modo Modo! !

It looks good, I love it, and the writing is pretty good. So far, there are no problems. The content innovation is worth recommending. I look forward to the next plot ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧. If the characters remain intact, it is still worth watching.

Boss Chi's character is so annoying to me! It's fun to watch, it doesn't follow the same plot as the original work, it has its own main plot, and it doesn't act as a babysitter. I have long been unhappy with Wu Sansheng. He is a scheming old fox who always likes to drag people into the game and test him again and again. Xiaoyu won't tolerate him. Keep it up!

Nice! Xiaoyu is powerful yet cold, the really cold kind. His occasional gentleness makes people addicted. No wonder others like him. I am looking forward to the following character lines and can't wait to see other characters in the Iron Triangle! ! [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] The author's writing style is also good, and the emotions written are very delicate!

To be honest, this is the most enjoyable fanfic I have read so far. Both the plot and the character setting are novel and interesting. You won't want to skip reading halfway through. The relationship between the characters is also handled very well. The little ambiguity between the characters is really interesting (//∇//). I have read other fanfics with relatively high scores before. Well, anyway, I am. I feel that some parts of the book are just weird and sometimes there are problems with the logic. I usually skip reading. This is one of the few books that I won't skip reading so far. Maybe I'm too picky. I feel weird when I read other books that progress too quickly or too slowly. A little ambiguity like this is very suitable for me. Anyway, I highly recommend it. Everyone is very happy with it. Of course, you can't ask for fan fiction to be too perfect. After all, it's just a fan creation or something. Everyone has their own preferences, so if everyone likes it, why bother posting fan fiction? Most books about the blind Hua Ye will choose to redeem them, but I also think that what they need may not be redemption, but a kind of like-mindedness and mutual understanding, because in my understanding, Xiao Hua is a very arrogant person. He should not let others show the bad things he has experienced to others. His character should not allow him to do this, so many articles spread the bad things he has experienced. I really do. It's very uncomfortable. Although I know that the protagonists will help Xiaohua and let him try to get out of the past, I really feel that this method is not suitable for Xiaohua and the blind man. How can I put it? Many people in this article said that the blind man will steal money from the pool in the early stage, but the blind man's character is a person who has no resistance to money. And at that time, they were not as mature as they were later. They must have their own interests first. Anyway, how can I say? The characters written by the author are very full of personality. Anyway, I am satisfied with this choice. The only drawback is that it is still serialized. I really highly recommended this book to my friends. Of course this is just my personal opinion (*´∀｀) (Quietly, can the author update 300 chapters a day? I'm just kidding)

This book pays more attention to the protagonist's personal experience and does not rely directly on the protagonist's group. I like this very much! ! Then the relationship between the protagonist group and the protagonist is really good (I especially like Black Blind Man). I highly recommend this book!

9.5 Points, the male protagonist is strong, there are system and other linkages, such as the blessing of the banshee, the certificate of the condemned, etc. At the beginning, it feels like he is away from the world, as if he can't play the game he wants to play, which can make him emotionally fluctuate. Of course, the instability of several protagonists is excluded. There are many original plots in the whole book, and the part about designing and unraveling the comic strips was very enjoyable to watch. I have the same indifference as my younger brother, but it's completely two different feelings. Well, I don't know how to describe it, because my culture is limited. The little brother only appeared in Chapter 170 or so.

First of all, the protagonist of this article (Chi Yu) is not rigidly bound to the original protagonist group for some inexplicable reasons. This is one of the biggest plus points of this article! Koike has been independent from the main line of the original work since the beginning of the world of stolen pens. He has a story line that runs parallel to the main line of the original work. It incorporates many authors' reasonable guesses and extensions of the settings of the original work, allowing readers to understand the vast world of stolen pens from a perspective that is not limited to the perspective of the original protagonists. Most of Koike's actions are based on a firm and individual-centered stance, rarely influenced by others. His ego and freedom are what attracts me the most (it's great that there are no unreasonable entanglements or redemption plots!). But he is not completely isolated. Pure goodwill and passionate love can still pry off his defenses, and the resulting confusion is even more adorable! In addition, Koike's super execution ability and arrogance in controlling the overall situation, etc., Together create Koike's plump character image and superb personality charm! In addition, the author's handling of the plot transfer and description of the environment are very nice! ! Crack the wall recommended! !

Nice! I really like Boss Chi's character ww And our sunny and cheerful Lelexia (x) children are born to be eaten by the doctor———— I have always been a boat guard (and on the fifth anniversary of your boat, Ulbian is finally about to land, and I burst into tears.

It's very interesting. The protagonist doesn't use emotions and does things based on his mood. In fact, I like Wu Xie's puppy very much, but I can't go to the grave with Wu Xie. It would be a trap. But no matter what the author writes, I will support it [blowing kiss]