I Don't Want to Be Teased by My Senior Sister When I Transform into a Demon Girl

It's good to watch. Overall, it's an excellent work. It's much better than most nonsensical works. It's expected to break through to higher levels.

There is a buddy in the comment section of this book who has been feeling sad. It is more interesting than what the author wrote. I recommend it. But there is one most clear point. I want to say that if there is a very unhappy plot in the follow-up, I may give a bad review. For example, the two sides turn against each other and become enemies. I hope it will not form too disgusting contrast with the previous foreshadowing. You can have a knife, but turning against each other is not necessary. After all, you say you love so much, but if you turn against each other later, it will really make people unhappy.

Not bad, the plot and sweetness are good, but it feels a bit rusty and the plot may be a bit rushed. It is still highly recommended. You can slow down the speed appropriately and think more about the details.

Frog Fun is a really good book. The characters are described delicately and three-dimensionally. It is much better than tomato-like novels. There are no big problems with the plot so far. It may be a bit cliche (maybe because I read a lot of books), but it is very exciting to watch, and the interaction between the protagonist and the heroine is also very interesting. I recommend reading more. There is also the author's writing style and the narrative rhythm that makes people look comfortable. He should have a certain writing skills. There will probably be a knife that I like to see later (my favorite episode), everyone should watch it and cherish it. [Eat melon]

When I first watched it, the senior sister was the kind of arrogant and cold lady. Later on, the character of the senior sister felt a bit collapsed. She was not arrogant and cold at all. She [face covering] forcibly transformed into a yandere and also said some embarrassing yandere quotes from the boss. Then in the very later part of the suing for peace, some of the words the senior sister said were a bit awkward and felt inconsistent with the original tsundere and cold sister. I thought it was going to be the last one (to be honest, I quite hoped it would be), but in the end it was he. Excluding the emotional scenes, the fighting scenes are quite attractive for the sake of the Demon Sect. The heroine's master is portrayed as a very likable person, and I like the master. There were a lot of knives, and I tortured them again and again. Then there was the scene where she was imprisoned, drugged, locked up, grabbed by her hair, thrown to the ground, domestically abused and forced to admit her fault (which made me hate the senior sister [face covering] and even hoped that the plot would be better). The senior sister made the heroine use a vase with emotional value. This was the most embarrassing scene that left me speechless. But fortunately, the upgrading of the fight and escape sequence and the revitalization of the magic door attracted me very much and supported me to read the entire book [smile]

It's pretty and sweet, even if it happens occasionally🔪. But I am really looking forward to the following plot, the author will update soon! ! !

So far, it seems that there is nothing toxic at all, and the romance is relatively two-way, although I would like to see something a little deformed, such as being imprisoned or something [laughs evilly] Personally, I feel that there may be a knife later. I hope it won't be too cruel and the ending will be more perfect. If you dig holes, just look after each other. Just remember to fill in the blanks. Thank you to the author. That's true

I feel bad for Xiao Yuan. After watching many Lily works, I think Xiao Yuan is one of the characters with the best personality. He has high emotional intelligence and good personality. He has sacrificed so much for his senior sister, breaking the shackles of the world. He has sacrificed a lot for everyone. Ye even locked Xiao Yuan before the decisive battle. , Yandere and yandere, in addition to being sick, she is also coquettish. She breaks the agreement and is forced to do it, forced to kneel down, and locked in the basement. This is purely for selfish desires and only reflects possessiveness and no love at all. After the war, everyone can break through the ten realms to find Xiao Yuan, but Ye is not worthy! Master, Xiao Yao, Ye Qiu and even Li Tai'an all worked hard in the decisive battle. Ye was even holding back. What's the use of belated affection? The same thing happened during the Earth Chapter. I didn't listen to what others were saying, so I just followed behind. How should I act if I wanted to coax or apologize? What's the use of saying I'm sorry? Can I walk by Xiao Yuan's side again? Is it because Xiao Yuan is soft-hearted? Can I make breakfast or something every day to offset my mistakes? Wear a collar and say that this person is your little partner to surrender to, but you still think that love is surrender in your consciousness? Xiao Yuan even said at the beginning that it was an equal relationship, but in the end nothing happened. It was Xiao Yuan who saved the world, Xiao Yuan saved her aunt, and Xiao Yuan suffered what senior sister should suffer. Even in your mother's love affair, Xiao Yuan took the initiative! The soul also supplied 1/3 of the senior sister. Everyone realized that there was something wrong with Xiao Yuan's soul, except you, Ye didn't know. You Ye are really sorry for Xiao Yuan. Top 5 stars on Biangan Island: The senior sister loves Xiao Yuan very much, and is willing to give up her hostility to the devil for Xiao Yuan, and she only gives up on Xiao Yuan. The reason why she didn't follow Xiao Yuan right away is because her only relative is her aunt. After she has no worries later, she immediately seeks out Xiao Yuan. This decisiveness surpasses that of many female protagonists. Xiaoyuan's efforts are also responded to by her senior sister's love, full marks. 3 Stars after Bigan Island: one star for Ye's distrust of Xiao Yuan, and one star for what Xiao Yuan did. Comprehensive four stars: one star for Shengyuan's great character and emotional intelligence, one star for Yuan's own efforts and dedication to everyone, one star for the master who always stood by and trusted him, Xiaoyao, Ye, Qiu, Li Tianan, and the brothers and sisters surnamed Jiang, one star for the non-paranoid and gentle senior sister in memory, and one star for Ye Qingning.

The content is very good, the plot is not procrastinating, the writing is very delicate, and it makes people feel very comfortable to read; there is a knife but not a knife, but it is very sweet and has a sense of CP; the heroine is very powerful, the daily posting and driving are well written, and the most important thing is that it goes in both directions, love, love, love. Alas, it's a pity that I was very disappointed with the heroine (Ye) later on, with twisted love, indifferent love, incompetent love, and selfish love. Can anyone really desire this kind of love? [Cry]

It is very emotional and can make people unconsciously involved. It is the most impressive lesbian novel I have ever read. Even after reading it, I thought about this story every day for a while. I love the setting of the characters here. The main characters are no longer black and white, good and evil. The protagonist is cheerful and lively but responsible and responsible. She dares to love and hate, and makes decisive decisions. The heroine is powerful but very naive. She is constantly growing up through constant adjustment. You can see a person's slow changes along the way. When you look back, you and yourself now, if you could do it all over again, maybe it would be better. I love this kind of setting. Many people say that the heroine is not good. What if she is really bad? Just like when we were children, we occasionally made a few "big mistakes". Only when we realize it will we regret it. Only when we regret can we grow. The protagonist taught him to grow. What does she bring to the protagonist? Maybe it is The sins of childhood may have been deformed love, but I think it gave the protagonist the light of hope and the courage to risk his own life. The protagonist is always close to death and the edge of collapse again and again, but he can forge ahead again and again. I think it is not just his own resilience. Looking at it again, it's not that she's bad, it's just that her good points have been forgotten. I have thought about whether the Xuanxuan Continent that I traveled to really exists, I don't know. But I think even the world that has been shaped is like what The Paper writes. The world is fake, but love is real. They have love, so they have a world, one flower and one world, one person and one world. They are each other's world, and there is only each other in this world. They stumbled along the way, and they worked hard all the way. "If love is real, the world is real"

The plot is exciting and sweet but not timid. The author controls the characters and the speed of the plot very accurately and delicately. The characters seem to appear alive in front of me. The whole book does not deviate from the theme. In short, the author is awesome! ! ! ! ! The plot may be a bit too fast and lack a sense of immersion.

This is a female channel, wearing a transformed vest, and its world view is also that of a female channel. The maid calls the master's daughter "Master" when announcing the master's arrival. The headmaster's daughter is treated as an outer sect disciple in the outer sect, even if the headmaster's daughter is extremely talented. To sum up, this book is a female lily.

Well... Generally speaking, the author's writing style and many processing methods are much better. Compared with the previous book, this one seems very natural, which is a big improvement! The structure of the book is very complete, and I like the ending very much. The process is a bit tricky, but it is completely acceptable. The senior sister in the later period was controversial, I think... It's understandable, with so much foreshadowing, it was expected to develop to this point. It was also Shen's tolerance that redeemed Ye recently. Shen really deserves to be loved! Therefore, after the transformation, Ye has been trying his best to compensate for the loss. A very good Lily article! Five stars, highly recommended! ! !

Well, it's a very good novel, and maybe it's because of myself. I feel like Jingliu and Bai Heng's CP, but I won't continue reading. I heard Shen Nong say that there is a knife, and I'm afraid of the knife. I was betrayed three times [awkward laugh][awkward laugh], and everyone else said there was no knife, no knife, and in the end there was no one left.

You need to be mentally prepared before watching it. There are too many knives but not enough sugar, and you may get a stomachache when you look at it (emotional line) 1. There is no big problem with the plot, but the senior sister is so broken that she is just sick. Gentleness turns crazy and then becomes gentle again. There are too few transitions and too strong a sense of separation. It makes people feel that the senior sister is not worthy of being an official partner, and the IF line is the most likely. 2. The abusive protagonist, and it's an officially-matched abusive protagonist. It's true that most of the protagonist's brain is online•᷄ࡇ•᷅ 3. As a mildly depressive novel, it is qualified. It has an ending and the writing is not bad.

In terms of subject matter, this book is about the heroine plus Lily. The part I have read so far has swords, but fortunately the swords are not too deep (unlike a certain Beng). The two heroines have good characters, but from the part I have read so far, there are no highlights. , The writing style is average among the books I have read, and the plot is pretty good, but not as bad as other writings. The writing style needs to be improved. You can quote more poems from literati. Improving the writing style is nothing more than reading more books. I hope that the part where the heroine gets married will be sweeter and the part after that will be sweeter. (Another point is that there are some strange things about these protagonists. If you like them, the author should also like them, hey.)

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel with such rich emotions. The characters are vividly depicted, the fighting is economical and not distorted, the relationships between the characters are well handled, and the existence of the system does not make people feel illogical. I have been looking forward to their story every day since I discovered this treasure in May. Now their story is over, but their story continues in my heart. This book gave me confidence and taught me how to get along with people. I am not a very lovable person. Reading this book has probably improved my way of getting along with others.

I also finished reading it in one go. The plot is basically logical. There is no problem in giving 5 stars, although there are some holes that were not filled in, such as what is the system? But this does not affect the integrity of the story as a whole If possible, I would expect a star of 4.5. After coming to Tomato, starting from the second book I read, almost everyone I read wrote a long review. (The first one was too long ago and I forgot about it, so I won't comment...) For this article, it is definitely worth reading. In fact, my requirements are not low. Anything that can reach 4-5 points is called a good book, but my definition of a full score is not only a complete and interesting storyline, but also unique creativity, and the overall story is very smooth and has no loopholes. Don't worry about the low ratings from other reviews. In fact, they are too true. At first, I thought about giving up because of these reviews, but in the end I was still curious to see what was going on. Fortunately, it lived up to expectations. This article is a short and concise short and medium-sized article (for this world view). I expect the word count to be more than 1 million, so the overall effect should be better than the current one. The pace of the middle and later stages of the article is obviously faster. Let's talk about the writing style. Overall, it's above average. It's pretty good. I read that the author said in his final statement that he doesn't like gorgeous rhetoric. There are indeed very few such words in this article, but I think the use of a small number can greatly enrich the image of a character. If you ask AI, you can clearly feel this way (such as deepseek) or environmental description, which can describe the character's psychology, image, and personality at the same time, or pave the way for the plot. There is also the most criticized knife in the comment area. The character collapses and so on. In fact, I really like what the author said. When the character image is established, the plot will develop automatically. At this time, the outline can no longer limit it. What does this have to do with the above question? In fact, the author has laid the groundwork in the previous article and left many foreshadowings or clues. The plot development in the mid-term is also a matter of course. But after reading it, I can find that this problem can obviously be weakened or solved, such as increasing the length of the entire article. In the article, Ms. Ye can be said to be ignorant. She just always had a bad premonition, and the only time she was fooled by a grocery store was. I always feel that if there is more time, she will definitely find the clues. This kind of pull before the storm is also very exciting, and it may not be weaker than the plot that explodes at the end. Some readers always don't like Ms. Ye, and it's not worth taking the role of the protagonist. But this is the result of not immersing in reading. Is love worth it? Even if the lover doesn't understand, he still sacrifices everything for her, including his life. Isn't one-way giving called love? But what is it? In reality, I am a cautious and self-interested person, so I don't want to try and make mistakes. It doesn't matter if I say I have no sense of security. No matter what, I just know that I have to give myself the right to choose and love myself and my family. For this reason, I particularly long for this kind of non-material, non-contractual love. Some readers may feel that their efforts are not reciprocated, so they feel like licking or something. One-way love can be called licking, but what about two-way love? Some readers think that it may not matter if the contribution is small, but it enriches the character image. But what if the contribution is large? The huge sacrifice was rewarded with incomprehension, and even readers began to complain. I didn't have such an idea at first, but now it highlights the greatness of love. Maybe the love I expect is not an investment, not a reward for what I put in, but a confidant, someone who can understand and support me unconditionally. What if I don't understand? Not understanding is only temporary, you will understand one day What if Ms. Ye didn't come to Earth in the end? Miss Shen will probably go to find her. The most likely thing is that she will ask Master to take a look at her from a distance, and then return to the earth and fall into endless internal friction. After a while, she will finally go back to find Miss Ye. I remember it was only half a month in the original text? I started to miss Miss Ye. I actually wanted to complain about a dog that cannot change and eat shit, but I felt that the impact was not good, so I wrote in the brochure that a country is easy to change and its nature is hard to change, but this is a very reasonable thing. I didn't want to write so much, but some of the comments were so malicious that I was almost persuaded to leave. Although some of the plots were too fast, lacked rendering and foreshadowing, and seemed a bit abrupt, it was still a masterpiece. In short, the whole thing looks a bit rough, and there are still many areas that can be improved, but it is still full of sparkling brilliance, just like a rough gem, it has a sparkling core. Perhaps the most impressive thing about this article is that Miss Shen, as a prophet, has calculated everything, not counting that her lover will sacrifice her life for herself. Miss Ye wants to dedicate everything to her lover, but she is in the middle of the game, but she can't do anything. The author just didn't describe it in detail, but if you think about it, you will know that Miss Ye's situation is even more suffocating. Of course, this is also the author's mistake, otherwise there would not be so many negative comments.

I read the entire book in one night. The senior sister is a proud and independent person, while the protagonist is a thoughtful and gentle person. Their personalities complement each other. The knife in the middle makes me love and hate it, but in several tragic plots, the growth of the character's character can be seen intuitively. I am a layman, and I am not very fond of writing affixes and writing arrangements. But after writing this novel, I felt that the content was just right. The mood of the characters can be felt intuitively. The images of the two protagonists have transcended the plot arrangement of the book itself, including the arrangement of the characters such as the master and the little fox demon (I will not reveal it, it is better to read it yourself), which makes the whole emotion richer.

At the end of the story, the main text plus extras, both Ye Qingning and the little fox have their own good endings, win! (It would be great if there was a Master line, Master is not impossible) The author does a good job in portraying emotions and laying out the plot very well. There is no need to worry about the collapse of combat power in daily writing, it is all for the sake of the plot. Shen melted Ye's aloofness with his tenderness. While getting along with Shen, Ye kept recalling the mistakes she had made in the past and wanted to make up for it, fearing that Shen would leave her. However, lacking love, she eventually went to extremes. After Shen died, he saw himself clearly, let go of his aloofness, and finally lived happily with Shen Xingfu. Briefly evaluate the main characters Shen Yuan: The world is virtual, but the feelings are real. The pampering she enjoyed in the Demon Sect in the first eight years made her choose to revive the Demon Sect in the future, and she lived up to the expectations of her parents and elders. She loved her senior sister, silently protected her senior sister, and gave everything for her. Have a goal and take action towards it. Emotional yet rational, gentle and considerate. Ye Qingning: With a heartless father, a mother who died early and a broken home, she had nothing emotionally and chose to wrap her lonely heart with indifference. Eventually, she was melted by Shen's tenderness and fell in love with Shen Yuan. However, the lack of love means that she cannot love others. The arrogance and threats she used when she was a child were just to keep Shen from leaving her. The restraint and control after gaining power were just to keep Shen by her side. She was afraid that she would lose Shen. She regarded Shen as her only light, and was afraid of losing this light, but she couldn't let go of her pretense of aloofness, which led her to extremes. After Shen died, he recognized his feelings, lowered his proud head, and understood what love is. Little Fox: Love is humble, love is despicable. You know you have fallen in love with someone you shouldn't love, and you know that this relationship will have no results, but you are still willing to take risks just to live in peace. Knowing that Shen and Ye Zhong had reconciled and quietly withdrew from the competition, if Shen was well, it would be her sunny day. If you want to see the knife, just read Chapter 232. Shen burned his soul and body in order to achieve his goal. Ye also understood what love is. Unfortunately, everything is irreversible. She lost Shen forever.

For daily use, it's pretty good. It can be seen that the author has some skills in romance writing, but he may not know enough about fantasy settings. Also, the combat power system is very strange. On the one hand, it gives people a fantasy feeling, but on the other hand, they find—— Hey, it seems that those people are like this, they seem to be high martial arts Why doesn't the author write about cities? However, this book mainly focuses on love-making, and the rest of the story is a bit cliche and a bit bloody. But overall it's really good

The plot is first-rate and the writing is first-rate. Although the relationship between Shen Yuan and Ye Qingning was bumpy, the happy thing is that they were able to get back together and achieve success in the end. I probably won't be able to forget them for a long, long time, and this excellent Lily article will also leave a strong mark in my memory. This journey has witnessed the love between Shen Yuan and Ye Qingning, from one party's dedication to the forced separation to the two's split and finally their reunion. This bumpy journey really moved me! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry]

This is the first Lily I have read, and I feel a little uncomfortable with the weak-minded people (this is the drawback of reading Lily for the first time). The plot of Xuanxuan Continent is very good, he is good, but I feel it would be better if written as be. If it can be written in a sadistic way, it will definitely be better. Anyway, it's very interesting, good luck to the author.

The author knows how to write. Very sweet and exciting to watch. The chapter feels like it has been completed in one or two hundred chapters. Very pretty

Although the IF line satisfied my desire to see Little Fox and Shen Yuan together, it only had one chapter, and it was a bit unnatural compared to this article. I personally think that the author used too much force when portraying the senior sister. In fact, Shen Yuan still had a reason to leave the senior sister even if it was not to this extent. The little fox in this article is really heart-wrenching. He attaches great importance to love and righteousness. He has been giving in later. The tears at the end really make people sympathize with him, far more than the part where the senior sister guards the grave. I believe that many readers will also support the pairing of Little Fox and Shen Yuan. This is actually a small mistake made by the author, making a supporting character more likable than the senior sister. The little fox is really well-behaved, arrogant but obedient. If the protagonist is not accepted, I think senior sister really does not have a little fox suitable for the protagonist. So no matter what, I give it four stars at most, and one star is because of the little fox

The important thing about a good work is that it can arouse the reader's emotions. If a book is only sweet, you may be able to read it, but it is definitely not exciting. There are a lot of knives in the middle of this book, although I can still survive it, but luckily it's he. Life is inherently boring, and the spiritual food on the Internet needs to bring joy, so in my opinion, he is the most suitable ending for Knife's works. The ending of this book is very good. Shen's position in this relationship was very humble at the beginning, and Ye was always in a strong position, even ignoring Shen's feelings. Of course, this also caused Shen to leave her. After experiencing many things, Ye realized his mistakes, and finally changed his arrogant personality and reconciled with his heaviness. Overall, it's very good and worth a look

This should be the first novel I have read on Tomato. I am very grateful to the author for his careful writing. The love and hatred between Xiaoyuan and his senior sister come to the most perfect conclusion in the beautiful picture of "above all else, only lower than you"; at the end of the full text, it tells us that love means liking each other and being equal to each other. Love means liking your favoritism in lowering your posture and also liking your pride in holding your head high. I like everything about you! Very good work! I will probably be troubled by the lingering power left by this story for several days...

It is a very good lily novel. The protagonist has a very good character. She is not sloppy when she should be ruthless and decisive. It fits the image of a witch very well. The emotional scenes are also very good. In short, it is very interesting to watch. Cheers, author [sending heartfelt wishes]

It looks good, everyone said yes. [Cherish it carefully] I don't say any empty talk, but I really feel it. This novel is really good to read, and it can be regarded as a very classic. If there is any big problem, I think the character of the senior sister is a bit "broken" [I have been betrayed (dogo) three times]. The idea of ​​​​this novel is very clear, the writing is fluent, and according to the author himself, the style of this novel is indeed distinctive, which not only makes people feel happy, but also makes people feel sad. As for myself, the only pity I feel is that the little fox's mispayment is easily forgiven. No matter which one of these two, I feel uncomfortable (save my life! This is just a self-feeling). Of course, I also want to ask the author, if you want to become a Lezi person, Aharingshi welcomes you ~ [You taste carefully] [You taste carefully] [You taste carefully]

This is a book with ups and downs in the plot. The author's writing is very good and the plot is meticulous. Shen Yuan and his senior sister have gone through a lot. There are knives, but there is also candy. The last one is he. It is very easy to get into. It caused me chest pain and tears several times. Recommended Spoiler ps: Some people may feel that they should not forgive the senior sister, but in the end, if there is no such experience, there will be no subsequent plot. It is just a pity for the little fox. I hope that in another timeline, the little fox can also find someone who accepts him.