When the night covers the day, when fate changes again, when the ending is shrouded in darkness, when... "My name is Ye Ming, when you see this sentence, please kill yourself."
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I suggest you take a closer look. Well, there is definitely something wrong with this writing. The first ghost appeared, and then a lot of people died. You didn't write about why they died. How did you come up with that sense of horror and the sense of the picture? Can't you put it in? For example, the ghosts started killing. They stretched out their cold fingers and grabbed people's throats tightly, suffocating them in despair of being unable to breathe. Some people's bodies were instantly penetrated by the dark breath, with blood pouring out, and their lives passing quickly in mourning. , There are also people who are used as food by these evil spirits. Their living bodies are bitten and devoured by the sharp teeth of the ghosts, and screams are heard in the night sky... Etc.
I suggest you take a closer look. Well, there is definitely something wrong with this writing. The first ghost appeared, and then a lot of people died. You didn't write about why they died. How did you come up with that sense of horror and the sense of the picture? Can't you put it in? For example, the ghosts started killing. They stretched out their cold fingers and grabbed people's throats tightly, suffocating them in despair of being unable to breathe. Some people's bodies were instantly penetrated by the dark breath, with blood pouring out, and their lives passing quickly in mourning. , There are also people who are used as food by these evil spirits. Their living bodies are bitten and devoured by the sharp teeth of the ghosts, and screams are heard in the night sky... Etc.