I Won't Gain Muscle Just to Reason with Pokémon.

The writing is green, but not poisonous. The content is more daily, with relatively large sections of copy content. But the most important thing is that it's true that the protagonist has Pokémon. The heroine now has Gardevoir and may have one in the future [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's really good. I haven't seen such a comfortable Pokémon novel in a long time. Although the writing feels a little green, the descriptions are good and worth reading. Come on 💪, write well. How can I say that the first novel is only 2 million words or more? I'm optimistic about you [cool]

This book is one of the best Pokémon novels I have ever read. If you point out any errors, the author will correct them within two days. He is an author who listens to advice. Everyone can help the author improve and correct the errors in this book, making it more and more beautiful @chuchubeibi's whereabouts are unknown

Alas, it's more comfortable. I spent an afternoon reading it calmly. There's nothing sinister about it. There's just too little worth reading [laughing]

It's beautiful, it's so damn beautiful [like], the author is a real man [cool], he really dares to write something~ I don't know if the author will accept Diancie. She looks great in a princess outfit. Although there are diamonds below the waist, doesn't she still have a mouth? It feels like it's usable~(｡･㉨･｡)ﾉ♡ Also, wasn't the Dou Li mushroom that the protagonist conquered at the beginning also a female? At the beginning, I wanted to hug the protagonist and accompany him all the way to fight in the world. How about fulfilling my wish of being the main Pokémon? Anyway, I think I can talk even if I turn off the lights! [Blowing kiss] There are also some optional Vine Snakes, Menas, and Masked Cats, all of which can be subdued by the protagonist! ! Come on, the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

This book is really affected by the ratings. There are no major problems in the content of the whole book, and it is also very vivid. The key is that the author is very self-reliant [like]. Tomato does not provide traffic, but provides traffic to itself [cool]. The main thing is that he is independent.

Pretty good. The protagonist can grow normally and will not grow abnormally. Lessons can be learned from the previous Megalodon incident. [Laughing][laughing][laughing] And the author dares to express his preferences👌🏻. I like it 😍.

You can cultivate a nanny bug that is not only good-looking, but also hehe, it is the perfect elf to mess with people.

So far, there are no poisonous points, and the quality is pretty good for Pokémon fan fiction. The system tends to be normal. It can improve the level and skill proficiency of Pokémon and people. Once the skills are mastered, some limitations will be exceeded. For example, three powders can be effective on grass types, but it is okay and acceptable. There is no NC limit to four skills. The heroine Gardevoir may be added later?

Not bad, but the main character's operation is quite confusing. Sometimes he is omniscient and omnipotent, and sometimes he knows nothing. The underlying logic is quite jumpy. He is the kind of moody male protagonist, sometimes kind, sometimes evil, but he is always good to his Pokémon. I will give it four stars. There are some shortcomings and poisonous points, but I can still resist it. At first I thought it was very average, but after comparing it horizontally with other Tomato books, I suddenly felt that it was quite good [face covering] [laughing and crying]

It's pretty good looking. Upgrading and other things also feel like in the game. And even if there is a drop mode similar to Zhuzi, it doesn't have the dark and residual character. It feels more like opening a new save file and starting to play the game.

It looks good, the content inside is very consistent with my XP, five-star praise

It is very well written. Although it is about a farm, it can provide funds for the protagonist in the later stage. It is also very funny. The author updates steadily. The two Pokémon novels I have raised, one is about 9 points, and the other is this one. The author's low rating may be because too few people have seen it. Come on, author, I hope your book can get a rating of 9 points.

It's quite interesting. In the early stage of the book, the protagonist challenges the gym and prepares to participate in the Caiyou Tournament. He takes Pokémon and constantly greets the wild Pokémon group to develop and grow [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] In the later stage, he takes time to win the championship (the length of this game feels a bit short). It mainly develops the farm and catches mythical beasts through the system to improve the protagonist's personal strength [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Finally, he conquered the Alola region and became the king. Finally, the Rainbow Rockets team and the chaotic battle between the villains and mythical beasts of various time and space were quite interesting, but the ending felt a bit rushed. The whole book is not long, but it is relatively complete. The main tone of this book is that the protagonist is doing things throughout the whole process. It is very H and BL [smile] [smile] The pace is very fast, like Pokémon growing up too fast, but when you think about the tone and other settings, it is also very fast. It doesn't matter, there are pros and cons. Most of the protagonist's Pokémon have their own personalities, and even the mythical beasts collected in the later stage are quite interesting. Of course, the "most interesting" ones are Gardevoir, Sweet Queen, and Masked Meowth [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile]

It's so good. I'd love to see more elf heroines. No author, if you change that qualification back, why can't you see it? Will you basically stop writing about that qualification later on? I just look at my qualifications. I never believe in changing one's fate against the odds. I only believe that talent can defeat heaven.

There are currently no problems with the book. It is a remarkable book. I saw the update and the author continues to work hard. I am reading it while I am reading it. There is a bit of a disconnect behind 117. The main line is not the main line, and the branch line is not a branch line. I don't know what I'm doing in this long chapter. The main plot doesn't follow, and I don't know what the significance of the branch plots are. It looks like I want to start a farm, but do you think about the main plot of the previous 100 chapters? After listening to about 50 chapters, I felt drowsy, and I let myself go as soon as I started to pick up. Overall, the nearly 60 chapters were meaningless. If you think it has any effect, I guess the main plot has not started yet, but I want to start a farm again. The key is that the writing in the branch plot in chapter 60 is too clumsy and has no effect. Others only write a branch plot and the plot is too strong in chapter 10 and they still get scolded. You really can't understand this operation. Very disappointed, 2 out of 5 stars, removed. What a pity. Didn't the author have an outline? Originally, the team set up was pretty good. Gardevoir was versatile in special attack, Jackrabbit was versatile in physical attack, and Bite Land Shark was balanced. It was a pretty good configuration, and it wasn't too poisonous at the beginning. When writing something, you have to follow the main line. The main line is divided into branch lines to pave the way for background/time/prices, environment, world view/training/adventures/character warm-up/these can be returned to the main line at any time. What's the use of writing a bunch of them later... The ratio of sixty to seventy chapters makes me numb.

It's very interesting. I personally like the common people and it develops step by step. I hope the author will work harder and update it. Two chapters in one day is too few. I haven't read enough! ! !

Not bad, not bad. This one is relatively good among Pokémon novels. The rest of them, well, I don't want to say more.

I still like the style of this book. The pace of the whole book feels a bit slow, also because there are fewer opportunities to get hurt. However, because the protagonist has a likable character (he is shabby, sometimes he suffers a small loss, but he can also take advantage of it), and his love is astringent but not too much. Currently, there are no OOC characters in the original book (within 150 chapters) I like this style very much. First of all, the casualties are not obvious. Although there are frequent beatings and making money, there are very few casualties. The main character is not like other books. He comes from a big family and has that arrogant feeling.

Starting as a civilian, there are no weird skills, they are all found in the Pokémon world. Unlike other beast-control stories covered in Pokémon skin, it contains a lot of weird skills that come from nowhere.

As long as you can bear it, if the heroine has Gardevoir So this can be said to be a very good novel. There are basically no poisonous points in the whole text (I have read Chapter 77, so far it is okay). Some slightly outrageous operations are explained later, and everything is logical, at least in line with the choices made by the protagonist when he was still weak. Unlike other anime-oriented novels, the protagonist of this book fights in groups when encountering people, charges up his skills in advance, and uses his hands to paralyze fans. After all, he only has one life, so the portrayal is quite realistic. This novel is a bit more daily, with mostly original plots and no animations. It's not like other readers who follow Xiaozhi every day. What happens next? As long as you can bear it. The heroine is Gardevoir. Here are the better fanfics, as long as you can stand it

I have been following the update for months, and by the time I commented, there were more than 350 chapters, and there was no obvious poisonous point. The protagonist acts neatly and neatly, and the plot is not sloppy. There is a very small amount of darkness in the world view, but in a world where Pokémon can die and the Alliance is also very humane and sophisticated, it is very easy to accept and will not be dark just for the sake of being dark, so it is well grasped.

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. Demining completed, Pokémon fans + system + civilian flow. Imagination is fine, but it would be a pity to use it only as a gimmick. The actual content is still about Pokémon battles. It's quite satisfactory. It's okay for a novel. I look forward to its growth.

Five stars for encouragement. Each chapter has pictures and content. The author carefully reads the comments every day and responds. The plot design does not meet my personal preferences, but the writing is still good. The psychological score is four stars.

It's quite interesting. It's not the kind of poorly written plot. The author also complained that only one Pokémon is killed when it meets the protagonist and goes up to it when something happens. Plug-ins don't have to be that kind of system store It's interesting. I still like the protagonist in this style. I'm tired of looking at the traditional ones.

After reading it, I would like to express my personal opinion. The protagonist is decisive in killing, has his own bottom line, and can snowball if he has trouble. Many people have ideas about Pokémon, but very few write them down in serious novels. The shortcomings are that there are some places where the connection is not connected and it feels like sudden jumps or adding characters. In the later stage, maybe because of the rush to progress, the pace was too fast and the ending was a bit sloppy. All in all, it is worth reading among the Pokémon novels.

It's very interesting. The male protagonist has a good personality and a sinister side. The male protagonist's power is gradually rising. The male protagonist can use Pokémon skills by himself. There is also a Pokémon harem. There are very few human harems. People who like Pokémon books can buy it.

It was quite interesting to write, I look forward to the follow-up

It's really good, and Pokémon basically has pictures, either by the author or by a guy in the comment area, so that even someone like me who doesn't know much about Pokémon can watch it [laughs]

This thing is very good-looking and very comfortable to watch\(//∇//)\, especially with Pokémon as the heroine, and she also does some things that can make people understand. I just think it would be nice if the protagonist could have a few more human companions. Pokémon are quite interesting, but I don't know, it feels a bit weird without socializing with humans. My personal sense is that it's wild. I thought it would be best to have a human heroine, and what should I say, it's not like we're together all the time. It's better for the girl to be busy and have something to do, and then intersperse some good-looking Pokémon at that time to make up for the vacancy. Although the Pokémon in the protagonist's team, uh, most of them, don't have a very high status in my mind. Maybe they are a bit different and related to the Pokémon I like, except for Gardevoir and Sweet Queen. As for the scene where they are in the tent with the protagonist, if possible, I hope there can be more.