The Shy Campus Belle Senior Fell for Her Cheerful Junior

Author, the pace of your article is a little too fast. It looks like you write very casually and your writing style is not very good. You need to write some things in more detail. Don't be too general. It's easy to get confused. For example, your description of the characters is not very detailed, so I don't have a deep impression of the characters. Sometimes I don't know who they are when I see the names, as if they suddenly appeared. There are many things that are often mentioned in one stroke and end inexplicably. It looks a bit like a running account. For example, in the section about feeding the cat, there is no description of the cat's image, nor the image of the senior sister. The plot is too hasty and written very deliberately. I'm just giving some suggestions from a reader's point of view. It doesn't mean that the writing is not good. Please give it a try. I know that coding is not easy, so I didn't rate it too low.

Good, very good, very good 😉

The author ran away? 🙂

It's well written and the rhythm is very good.

Nice book that I love to read

Very well written