The Male Supporting Character of Quick Travel Transforms into a Face-Slapping Maniac

The plot of the first story was okay, but not neat enough. The second story is a little too long away from the protagonist's perspective, there is not enough foreshadowing, and the twist is a little less interesting. Starting from the third time, the protagonist's general abilities become stronger and have more presence than the system. It is reasonable that the driving force and effect of the system are not obvious. The description of the original plot is more than the role of the protagonist. It would be better to improve it later. The growth and mood changes of the protagonist are not very obvious yet. If another spontaneous motivation of the protagonist can be highlighted, it will be easier to find the fulcrum of the plot. [Laughing and crying] After saying a lot of useless things, I just want to say that you should update it quickly, it's not enough!

Overall it's ok! The male protagonist in the first story is quite miserable, but the female protagonist has a bad ending, with the company gone and regretting it, but there is not much plot about the process of torturing her, which is briefly mentioned, which is not very satisfying. The second story has a very fast pace. It is good that the author enters the world, but it is too fast. I deleted the story directly and wanted to see the male and female protagonists being tortured or changed. The third story is good; the endings of the male and female protagonists are not good! ! This is very satisfying. Although it is an old story about Voldemort and so on, it is still good. The male and female protagonists are both miserable hahhhhh! I hope the author will write something about a running heroine, a system heroine, a reborn heroine, etc. [Sending Hearts]

The male protagonist is about to go through time, and it should be non-CP. After watching the first world, I thought it was generally watchable, so I skipped to the end and watched the bloody story with the male supporting character. It was very good. It was very satisfying to torture the scum and the plot was not draggy!

I quite like it. It doesn't have the personal stuff that most authors like to do with the opposition between men and women, and it doesn't have any messy ambiguity or career-related word count. It's just that the previous world didn't slap people in the face and abuse them enough, but it's much better later.

Not a bad way to pass the time without thinking.

That's right, just feel good and that's it. Don't use the word "water"

It's a very good fast-travel novel. The plot looks quite enjoyable, but it's a little too fast. Some places could be polished and improved. It deserves five stars. It gave me a wonderful reading time. Come on, author!

It's good-looking, fast-paced and not draggy. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The adopted son counterattacks, there is no need to work for the heroine, right? Didn't the Qi family commit suicide by themselves? It's not the same as the Qi family broke up later, there is a need to help the heroine achieve he [smile] Mr. Huang is Jiang Wanwan's exclusive driver. Although Jiang Wanwan is four years old, he is honest and kind. After getting along with each other, Jiang Wanwan and Mr. Huang both expressed a favorable impression, but their identities are really different. So neither of them broke the window paper. It was also this time, after Jiang Wanwan told Mr. Huang what happened, that Mr. Huang's eyes showed a different light. Even the look he looked at Qi Siren was not so unkind. (This look is like being destitute.) A young lady born in a wealthy family still believes in love. Are you kidding me?

Not bad, not bad. Come on, author.

Not bad, a bit interesting!

Oh my god, it looks good. Why is the score so low? I feel like 9 points is a lot better.

Fortunately, he just left directly after the mission was over, and there was no follow-up or anything.

It's a very enjoyable book with an interesting plot design. The protagonist is relatively sober and smart, and the pace is fast.

I've seen the finale, and overall I think it's okay. In fact, it's better than most books like this.

Overall, it's good. The pace is fast and not laggy. The protagonist is very decisive in doing tasks. It's fun. The writing is average. Some logical details are lacking. I encourage you to give it five stars.

I originally wanted to give you 4.5 Stars, five stars, but why is there such an innocent story about the headless general who licks the dog + seizes women in the crematorium? I will deduct 0.1 Stars as appropriate.

Not bad. Why are there so few people?

Very refreshing, but a little too fast

Not bad, less poisonous points

Nice looking, cool article

Very good, readers enjoy it

The stories are quite interesting.

It's pretty good, but it's really hard to maintain a single-digit income. Please support me with good reviews. Come on [face covering]

The book is very good, but I don't know why the rating is so low.

Not bad😊😊😊😊I just need to improve on the details.

Hahahahahaha Chapter 223 is so funny, especially the protagonist who cannot use curved hooks for fishing but can only use straight hooks😄

Except the pace is a bit fast. Everything else is pretty good.

The fast wearer kills decisively and neatly, not bad!

The plot is not procrastinating, and the most important thing is that there is no CP.