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Behind the Scenes + Invincible + Cool Articles It won't overwhelm the protagonist's combat power, and he will be invincible (but he can wear a vest) The main focus is crushing, please feel free to read.

Come on, I hope I can be more straightforward, but now I am holding back the discomfort. These vests are all unique, lacking that kind of exposure, and my subordinates are shocked by the protagonist. Except for the old man and employee, I have never known about it. Except for the comfort when looking at the old sword master, it is a little bit uncomfortable. The writing style is very strange, most of the routines are that the protagonist should be the stronger one without knowing it, and then steal the protagonist. Or maybe the protagonist opens the vest knowingly, uses You Ye to easily defeat her who possesses You Ye's origin, and then uses the main organization to pretend to set a deep routine. And this book intervenes between the two. It feels aggrieved to read, and I feel that my sister is too pitiful [I almost cry]

After reading this book for so long, I want to express my feelings. If Shana dies, I can give it four stars in my heart. Now it is only three stars. Shana is really not a good character. The author needs to strengthen some small details of the scenes and characters. I gave four stars because it is not easy to write a book, but I can't be unconscionable. Overall, there are no big problems. There are some minor problems but they do not affect the overall reading. If Shana died, I would give it five stars, but in my heart this book is still four stars, so I can say whatever I want.

How should I put it? I would prefer the protagonist to be the kind of god who controls everything, rather than someone who doesn't know what he has done. Although it is not to my taste, I have to admit that this is a good book. There are not many authors like this nowadays, so I must encourage him! Five stars for you~

I like the setting of becoming a god behind the scenes. Do you intend to describe the dialogue between each character as the kind of communication between wise men? Well, I can't see that the plot rhythm is interesting, but at present I can only see some of the settings that are interesting.

The traditional "behind-the-scenes boss opening a shop" text + light dihua + western fantasy light novel + invincible + vest, but the innovation in the traditional behind-the-scenes boss shop opening flow. What I like very much about this novel is the light dihua, because dihua has been promoted too much as the main theme of the novel, and this novel has weakened or turned this dihua into a comedy. Moreover, this work still has many interesting aspects. The protagonist wears a vest and the sister is a three-faced spy. However, I felt that there was one plot that was not handled very well. The scene where the protagonist kills someone with his vest... Was too logical, and it felt like the protagonist's character had collapsed (he was going to do bad things for no reason, to steal something?). Then the second one is the mentality of the protagonist. His mentality feels like playing a game to me? I mean the feeling of leaving aside the dimension and feeling that the characters are all NPCs and it doesn't matter how you play. I'm wondering why this is the mentality?

Not bad But Can my sister have more scenes? I just want to see my sister [blowing kiss]

To be honest, when I first started reading, I felt that the writing was good, but I felt that the plot was a little slow, which dampened my enthusiasm for reading. I don't know why (no malice) but the author seems to deliberately focus on describing the stories of other secondary characters. On the contrary, it seems that the protagonist has less role and a weak sense of presence. He is a bit frustrated at times? [Laughing and crying] Overall, a good book with potential. I hope the author can make the protagonist more interesting and advance the plot faster, so that everyone doesn't become addicted to the book [please ask for more updates][please ask for more updates]

The writing is not bad. This type of book itself tests the author's writing skills. I still hope that the author can achieve good results. Finally! ! ! ! Say important things three times! Now I'm an old fan I'm an old fan I'm an old fan

Very good, come on, come on

It's very well written. I like to read Western fantasy and magic novels, but what worries me is that I can't remember the names of the supporting cast in such novels. Sometimes the full name of the protagonist is not written out, and I forget it.

Whether it is the story or the characters, it is very well drawn. It is not like those mindless novels. It is very beautiful anyway, but it lacks a little charm. If it is a behind-the-scenes flow, it feels more like Dihua flow. It is said to be a transaction. It is a transaction to let them help you collect faith, but it seems that some people do not collect faith. What are the traders doing? Will they serve the protagonist in the future or something else. But there are also traders who do not believe and do not follow orders. If it is a transaction, it should be a transaction of various things. It cannot be said that you give him something just because he is not doing well. A typical example is the one with two personalities, Jia'er. If you don't believe, you only know how to eat. To expand the scope, you only know how to eat. 2 Is the protagonist. The protagonist is portrayed very well, especially the person behind the scenes who likes money. But why does the protagonist seem not to know any history and the people recruited by the protagonist act as if they don't know the protagonist? This is actually Dihua style. In fact, there are still some details that need to be corrected. Apart from these anchor points, the rest is actually pretty good.

I've seen Chapter 68. The characters in this book are relatively good, and the current plot is relatively solid and very reasonable. The worldview has not yet been developed, so it is too early to evaluate the layout. The problem is that the proportion of the plot between the protagonist and the supporting roles of workers seems to be adjusted. The plot proportion of the protagonist is a bit small. The part I wrote recently, from following the caravan to going to the royal capital, is better. In the future, as the number of customers in the store continues to increase, there will be more and more part-time workers. I hope that more attention will be paid to not letting the details of the supporting characters and plots overwhelm the focus.

The story of each character is very interesting when I develop a ruka pseudo-discipline. It just depends on when I realize that my master and my master are actually the same person [face covering]

(Maybe it's because I haven't read enough) This book made me feel a little unique despite my visual fatigue. I wanted to stock it up, but I couldn't bear it. It was hard to hold a knife to the author's neck and let him write 10 chapters a day (▼ヘ▼#)

It's a very nice Western fantasy group portrait. The protagonist is invincible behind the scenes. I just hope that the protagonist's golden finger can have more functions, such as being able to contact the believers above and below, and there can be more plots about the Lord in Yellow Robe [Thoughts]

In the current impetuous environment, it is very rare to find a good article with a western fantasy background. The structure is tight and the plot is compact, organizing a huge and brilliant story from various small events! Looking forward to more content written by the author.

It's still pretty good so far, and it's more in line with my preference for behind-the-scenes streaming. The character creation is also good, the believers are fanatical but their personalities are different, the plot has nothing interesting, and the battle of wits and courage between the supporting characters can be watched [Blow Kiss]

They can't recognize the protagonist standing in front of them, so I'm curious about how the author can let them know the identity of the protagonist, or how the protagonist can make them believe that he is the god they worship. Should he take out his mobile phone and show it to them?

In which chapter did the protagonist learn the true function of this golden finger? Indifferent, no behind-the-scenes feeling

It has the flavor of Lord Shadow, I hope the author will keep it up

It's so good. The author must not stop updating it. There are really too few good novels like this these days.

The book is good and suits my taste very well. I hope it won't be sold out.

The subject matter is well chosen and the writing is interesting. However, the way it is divided into shots is a little uncomfortable for me. It is also a Western fantasy type. After a few shots, I can't tell who is who, who planned to kill whom, which is the princess and which is the duke's daughter. There are many characters, and the requirements for readers are too high. I usually read books without any brains. I read novels when I am fishing. When the leader comes to the phone, I close it, and then I don't know where I am when I continue reading. [Wronged]

Looking at the whole process, it is just trenching. It's so funny, but the world is also eukaryotic. [Like]

The fight between girls is quite interesting. When you look at the end, you realize that it is similar to Lord Shadow, giving the male protagonist an invincible setting. But the male protagonist's story line is a bit difficult to evaluate, and it has some value besides selling hooks. The overall evaluation is worth watching, the author cheers

The writing is interesting and the plot is rich. Novels like Tomato are rare. I hope the author will not give up.

I've read ten chapters, I'll save the rest for next time. It's very interesting and I think it will be popular. The author must continue to read more [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's rare to find a group portrait article that looks good. It looks a bit like a powerful person in the shadow.

This book is also called My Sister Was Toyed with by My Believers