Jia Huan, the Concubine Who Was Reborn in the Red Mansion

Because I have the original work as a foundation and red studies as a supplement, I just need to follow along in the early stage. However, the writing style is indeed mature, and it can be seen that the author is using his strengths and avoiding weaknesses. Although there are a few details missing, the poisonous points are also avoided. It can be regarded as a masterpiece. It's a pity to post it on Tomato. Even if you go to a big platform and subscribe by chapter, you can still do it, but it will benefit a free prostitute like me.

The writing is so good, there are no weird points. I really like the family and friendship in it. The people in the protagonist camp are very cute. Many scenes are really enjoyable. I just like to watch some plots where relatives are angry and enemies are painful. It is very refreshing. The writing is very good, but there are always some comments in the comment area about trying to collect as many twelve hairpins as possible to start a harem. The author must not be affected. If you don't consider the character background and blindly pursue the harem and never come back, that will be the beginning of the collapse of the text. Moreover, Daiyu, Baochai, Xiangyun, etc. All have their own fans.

It's good to watch, and the plot is very good. I've followed it for four to five hundred chapters, but I don't plan to finish it, because the male protagonist has a tendency to have a harem in the later period. So far, Lin Daiyu, Xue Baochai, the three eldest girls in the room, the mandarin ducks around Jia Mu, and the brothel's brothel are all having an affair (actually I don't mind having a harem, but I should accept Lin Daiyu and Xue Baochai at the same time...)

The writing style and plot are both top-notch, taking into account the requirements of refreshing writing.

The author is already one of the top Red Mansion writers on Tomato, but he writes too much about politics and not much about the most important courtyard of the Red Mansion, but the flaws are not concealed. Last but not least, there are so few updates and it's not enough to watch!

A masterpiece among fanfictions, the characters are carefully drawn. Especially when portraying the big-faced treasure (Baoyu), it was very enjoyable. When I read the original version of Dream of Red Mansions, I was annoyed by the big-faced treasure, and when I slapped the big-faced treasure, I felt really good. It retains the charm and details of the original work, but is novel and in line with the modern sense of the text. It enhances the character to reflect the plot and at the same time underlines the character. It is complementary and responsive. It is already very good among fans, but the background introduction of the original work is a bit chaotic, and the introduction of ancient events is a bit mediocre and complicated. The dosage should be appropriate in size and distance. In articles like Tomato, don't be too subtle, but have a hint of innuendo. There should be some slap-in-the-face sections, but not too many. They should be used to add passion to arouse the reader's emotions. It's better to do it in moderation. Leave blank space for the featured characters and add some imagination (the characters should be as faithful to the original work as possible, be novel but not lose the fundamentals, so this is a major highlight), the artistic expression can enrich the characters, show the intimacy with the original work, and better empathize with the readers' impression of the original Dream of Red Mansions, thus deepening the impression of the book. Also, the comments are just personal suggestions and are for reference only.

Not hasty or slow, neither arrogant nor impetuous, able to keep calm, able to endure hardships, capable of doing things, able to be determined, able to gain and give up, has a pattern, three correct views, and successful character creation. It seems to be a very good book so far

After reading Chapter 5, let's evaluate it. It's really cool, unlike other fictional Red Mansions novels that are so submissive. Revenge is super fast, and the Baoyu described is not a silly character.

This novel is quite well written, and the good thing about it is that the author will tell a certain comparison between the story he tells and the original text from time to time, allowing you to read the story he wrote and understand part of the story of Red Mansions. Many people like Red Mansions, but only know part of it or not much. After all, reading Red Mansions is quite tiring. If you know more, you can discuss it with some of the original texts spoken by the author. If you haven't read it and want to read it, you can also understand each person's personality characteristics based on the author's description. Of course, the main thing is the character of the protagonist of this book. He is relatively calm, knows etiquette, is well-organized in his work, looks very comfortable, and does not look too out of place.

The writing was pretty good, and to be honest, there were no obstacles. If you like Dream of Red Mansions, you can take a look. I feel that there are not too many points, there is no magically modified plot, and there is no blind criticism of a certain character.

The book is very good. There are some details lacking, but the problem is not big. It's just that the comments affect the perception. Many people want to see a single female protagonist. I don't object. It's normal for people to have their own preferences. But it's really annoying to comment on a single female protagonist every time you interact with a female character. Do you like a single female protagonist? You just It's just that they don't like this character. Like repeaters, they only accept single female protagonists. Like the fandom, this kind of person can only accept the world as big as the mouth of his own well, and refuses to accept anything beyond it. In the final analysis, he is still selfish, only thinking about himself, and only thinking about reading novels by himself.

The novel is written fluently, and the author thoughtfully adds notes corresponding to the original work, as well as many notes on corresponding historical events. For people like me who have not read the original work in its entirety, it is very enjoyable to read. Looking at the catalog, it seems that after the male protagonist becomes an official in the imperial court, he starts to display various modern inventions and creative skills just like other time-travel novels. . The author's neglect of the characters' age in the description of the characters is a bit excessive. For example, the male protagonist is only 13 years old. It is impossible for a normal boy to fall in love with an "old woman" who is much older than him at a glance. The author is a male, so he naturally brings himself into this aspect, right? For example, at the beginning of the novel, it is described that the maid in the house looks at the male protagonist in a very strange way. It is impossible for a normal teenage woman to have romantic thoughts while looking at a 5/6-year-old boy. Another person who is 12/3 years old drinks alcohol frequently and is drunk to the point of being drunk, which will definitely affect his development and brain. Although the male protagonist traveled through time, his body was that of a real child, not an adult, but these were ignored by the author. The author probably doesn't know much about tea tasting or was deceived by an unscrupulous tea dealer. For example, ripe Pu'er tea was only invented in 1974. Before that, rough raw tea was pressed into cakes for easy transportation. The so-called Pu'er tea is misunderstood by modern people as it is only fermented Pu'er ripe tea. On the first day of the Lunar New Year, the tea served to the son-in-law who came to pay New Year greetings was "Mingqian Longjing Tea". This was funny. It was the end of the year, and the Qingming Festival had not yet come. At this time, the Mingqian Longjing tea had not grown yet, so the tea that was served was out-of-season old tea. It was even less likely that wealthy families would use it to entertain guests at this time. It is only appropriate to serve black tea or Dahongpao at this time.

The protagonist's stakes are quite high, but the plot is carefully designed, without any development that goes beyond logic, and the interesting and painful points are skillfully set up, making it very comfortable to watch. In the writing, the author will add some of his own opinions on the Red Mansions or the Ming and Qing Dynasties. Although some comments say that the word count is too high, in my opinion this point is quite interesting. The gossip that jumps out of the article may not be a clever writing. The growth and development of each original character in the article, and the changes caused by the protagonist are very touching. Perhaps this is the charm of fan fiction. But in comparison, the protagonist already has a mature and stable character structure from the beginning. He looks reliable, but he also loses his inner growth. Due to the current development of the plot, the protagonist is only thirteen years old, and the emotional line has lost some value. Daiyu as the mistress seems to have become a bright line, but the author did not pay much attention to the emotional line. It may be left blank, but it is also a pity. On the contrary, the emotional line about Yuanyang is very clear, and some of the detailed descriptions make people laugh and look forward to the follow-up. All in all, it's a good novel worth recommending, please give it a try

It's good-looking, there's not much to say, it's quite comforting to watch, and it should be classified as a cool novel, but this is not a derogatory sense. Reading the full text, the plot is smooth and the author's writing is sophisticated. There is no plot in which the protagonist is deliberately misunderstood and wronged for the sake of slap in the face, which makes the readers feel aggrieved. I rarely follow unfinished stories. At least this story has no meal replacement for me.

It is both easy and difficult to write a time-travel work about Red Mansions, but the author does it with ease and skill, and the writing is very interesting. It is one of the rare online articles. After reading the wonderful thing, the author is determined to stop writing because of his illness. I wish the author a speedy recovery! Continue writing more excitingly!

Well written, the writing style, plot, and rhythm are all top-notch!

The writing is still good, much better than the average second-year junior high school writers. Worth seeing and recommending.

After playing it for the second time and the third time, I am a top fan of Red Mansion. The score of 9.4 Is indeed not just talk. What's rare is that Jia's mother has not been demoted. Although she prefers Baoyu, she is not brainless and has the palace of the Duke's wife.

The author's writing is very good, but I suggest that if the author is going to start a harem, write an introduction in advance to prepare for a pure love warrior like me. Don't let me suddenly find out that it is a harem novel while I am having sex. I really know how to do it.

This book is as far as it goes. It is probably the better fanfic of Dream of Red Mansions that I have ever read (although I have not read many fanfics). Every chapter attracted my desire to read on (the plot felt quite exciting), and the protagonist was very shrewd (too good at talking). Many of them also contain the original plot of Dream of Red Mansions and the author's opinions, some good and some bad. If you haven't watched Dream of Red Mansions, after reading this, it's best not to bring these views to watch Dream of Red Mansions. Personally, I think it's best to watch Dream of Red Mansions without any point of view. There are no perfect characters in Mr. Cao's works.

The author writes well. Each character fits the original work and the interpersonal relationships are clearly explained. It can be seen that the author has studied the Dream of Red Mansions very thoroughly, and the writing style is very good. I also thank the author for using another method to make me interested in the books I had read in full before. And what's rare is that the protagonist is not too violent. Although the protagonist must take revenge when he wants revenge, when reading the whole story, the mood is very pleasant and relaxing, without deliberately targeting or vilifying the villain. Ps: I can make my aunt a little smarter, I'm always worried that she will hold me back.

This Red Mansion is very well-written, and the storyline is quite enjoyable to read. The most important thing is that there are some annotations and explanations in the text. Some people may find it superficial. I think it is mixed with some historical stories, which is both interesting and eye-opening. After all, there are many people who have not read the entire Dream of Red Mansions, or do not understand the situation of that era. The biggest dissatisfaction for me at the moment is that I have read 300 chapters, which is too few and not enough for me to watch [laughing and crying] I am too lazy to catch up. I will just keep it until it is finished. I may have to read it again, otherwise I will forget the story.

The narrative logic is strict, and the background and characters of the Red Mansion are very reasonable and rigorous. The character and behavior of each character are in place, and there are no logical flaws. I hope there won't be any more eunuchs~

It's really super good-looking. The story unfolds from Jia Huan's perspective. It's a counter-attack novel, but it doesn't have the clichéd male-video novel's mindless praise of the male protagonist and the objectification of female characters. The characters of Sister Lin and Wang Xifeng are still round and full. The mandarin ducks and Caiyun and others' love for Jia Huan are also mentioned in the article. The feeling is also subtle and beautiful, unlike the traditional male harem novels (Baoyu is more like the protagonist of the traditional male harem novels, and there are always Yingying and Yanyan around who are jealous of him). This book still shows the wisdom of women. Everyone has their own personality, and they are not jealous of men.

The author uses a unique perspective to describe more diverse people and events in Ningrong's Second Mansion. It's a good article worth reading. The rating is a bit low, it should be above 9.5. Good looking, good reviews [like], recommended [like]

The author is very knowledgeable and made me want to read Dream of Red Mansions even though I don't like it very much. A very exciting place suddenly disappeared [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] Looking forward to watching you.

It's okay, the plot logic is okay and relatively bland, and what I'm watching right now is not Stallion. The protagonist Jia Huan is well portrayed, but the "villains" in this book are all quite stupid. The "Wang family" we have seen so far are all very stupid. Wang Ziteng is a little better, but only a little better. The others can be said to be incredibly stupid. The Jia Huan I saw has not yet developed. I feel that the following is about the struggle in the court (now it can only be regarded as a conflict with the King of Chu), An Nei, and then fighting "Hu" and "Liao", fighting against foreigners, or interspersed with An Nei and fighting against foreigners. I don't see any big ambitions at the moment. Overall, it is quite bland, and the characterization is also quite average, especially the current Thirteen Hairpins. I think the character development in the book "Spring in Red Mansions" I read before is pretty good. However, it can also be seen that the author has truly studied "Dream of Red Mansions". My final personal evaluation is that the main plot is mediocre, the description of life in the park is average, and there are no bad points except that the "villain" is too stupid. It is worth watching, but it is not as good as the online reviews. (The above only represents my personal views and I have only read Chapter 259 so far and will continue reading. Please forgive me if I am offended)

It is a rare good book in Tomato. I have recommended it many times, but it still has several flaws. The first one is that the image of Mrs. Wang is too petty. People who come out have been trained and will not be so ignorant. The second thing is that the contrast between Xue Baochai's before and after images is too great. Maybe I just happened to see the problem here. There may be changes later, but I really don't have a good sense of the image of Xue Baochai he established in the past. I have been chasing better for a long time, and the author basically updates it from time to time. I hope the author recovers soon, so please update more often!

The quality is very high, and I personally think it is better than what is written by most Red Mansion fans on various platforms. The protagonist is neither a virgin nor a stallion, and the plot is only cerebral. Some narratives may be heavy, but some plots still don't drag. I hope the author can add more updates.

It's a good-looking book, and it's an online IQ book that doesn't need to store your brain. 1. World view The author has done a deep research on Red Mansions, and is very particular about many details. From a world view perspective, this is the most reasonable, broad-based, and most sophisticated Red Mansions fan I have ever seen. 2. Writing style Since you are a fan of Red Mansions, you should have the tone of Red Mansions, and the author has done a good job in this regard. The descriptions of various scenes and the movements and expressions of the characters all have the charm of Red Mansions, which is worth watching. Three, feel better The fun part of this book is mainly focused on the protagonist's worldly plans. The protagonist's character is also very in line with my taste. He must retaliate, be shrewd and courageous, and be both civil and military. But at this point, I have to mention that one of the biggest regrets of this book is that the interaction between the female characters in the protagonist's book is not very heavy, and the emotional line is looming. I can only say that it is more reasonable, but it is also more subtle. 4. Plot Again, the main focus is on career, and the emotional line is too thin. Many readers who like Red Mansions come here for the attractive female characters in Red Mansions. A more obvious emotional line will be more attractive. But overall, it's still pretty cool.