Immortal Slaves Become Enlightened

The wide-open book is as beautiful as ever, but I hope it won't end at the end. Oh, I can't stand it anymore

The most powerful thing about the author is his grand imagination. He was deeply shocked when he saw the fairy, but it was a pity that it ended hastily. I hope I can finish this one patiently and not let down the readers who love him. Generally speaking, this book did not have as big an impact on me as Immortal. The image of master and rebel disciple Li Dakai is deeply rooted in people's hearts, and the structure of the whole novel is huge. All kinds of fantastic ideas are eye-catching in the highly homogeneous immortality novels. If possible, I very much hope that the author can re-write the ending of Immortal. I feel that there is no problem in writing at least another million words. Then it will be a complete work, and it can definitely be ranked first among the immortality novels I have read. This book may be because many settings in it have the shadow of fairy, but because I like this genre, although some of the logic is imperfect, it is still a good book for me to entertain.

A little suspenseful, a little objective, and hopefully more and more interesting. Li Xingzhou blasted a pill-forming monk with one palm of his hand, the Dragon Subduing Seal. How cool!

One hundred chapters have passed, so far it's pretty good, there's no heroine, no bloody plot, everything is about revenge! The sudden appearance of romance will often lead to plots of two women competing for their husbands!

From the old man cultivating immortality to here, although the ending of the old man cultivating immortality is not as early as I expected, I still like your writing style, which is neither fast nor slow, relaxed and relaxed, rigorous and orderly. After reading so many books, only Li Dakai has flesh and blood, determination and determination to move forward... Come on, come on, come on...

To be honest, I particularly like the behavioral logic of the characters in this author's novels. I feel that this is like the behavior and reaction of normal people. Although there are some settings that are not to my liking, I like the behavioral reactions of the characters and the logic of the plot development very much.

I have been looking forward to the author's new book, and the result did not disappoint me. The protagonist's loyalty, Liu Long's life-saving help, the county magistrate's kindness to the protagonist, etc., All did not disappoint me. Alas, it has been too long since the last time the author opened the book, and his technique is obviously rusty. This book gives me a far worse feeling than the big one. I will keep at it and see if the situation improves after another hundred chapters. If so, I will change the rating. If not, I will withdraw it.

I've only read a few chapters, and overall I feel good about it. Keep up the good work, come on. Don't pull back. In the later stage of many fairy tales, when the level of cultivation is high, it seems that they are invincible, and then they have nothing to write about and become dull. I hope those who certify it can be exempted from vulgarity

I really like Dakai. My only request is that it doesn't end badly. Please [blowing kiss]

It's good to read, a strong author, rigorous content, and ups and downs of the plot.

This book is very well written. There are no violent emotions or brainless plots. The narrative structure and plot design are very good. I recommend more book friends to read it together.

The concept of this book is novel and rigorous, and the dramatic conflicts are perfectly grasped. The protagonist is bold and careful, has a fierce spirit, and has the spirit of a heroic hero. This book is one of the few fantasy novels I have read so far.

The plot of the novel is exciting, and the pace is just right, neither dragging nor rushing. The various dangerous battle scenes are described in a passionate and exciting way. Every move seemed to be performed in front of my eyes, which made me unable to take my eyes away. The bottlenecks and opportunities encountered by the protagonist during the training process, as well as the love and hatred between him and other characters , interest entanglements, and written in detail. Every plot twist is unexpected and reasonable. People can't help but follow the protagonist's footsteps and immerse themselves in this world of immortality, cheering for his every success, and worrying about his every dilemma. . I have to say, this is a rare masterpiece!

Basically, after reading it, it was good in the early stage, but the quality declined in the later period. Generally speaking, it is good but not enough, and it is still more than enough. In short, the whole text is not excellent but not bad either. In addition, the previous film "The Story of an Old Man Cultivating Immortality" was almost the same as Wen Ping's here, and it ended up being hasty. However, I think the overall male protagonist's enemy scenes in the previous film were a little better than this one. Of course, the same shortcoming is that the quality of the writing has declined in the subsequent films. The male protagonist in the previous film An Old Man Cultivation to Immortality is invincible at the same level every time he breaks through to a new level. This is even more impressive, even in the later integration and Mahayana stages. It is a pity that the previous film should have been completed by ascending to the immortal world, otherwise it would not have ended unfinished. I thought that the writing style of this second part, which was written by the author himself, could be improved, but I didn't expect that it was as unfinished as the first part. But overall, I still give it five stars. In addition, I also drank a cup of milk tea today to express my encouragement to Dakai.

It's really good. Although it's a novel about mortals, it can be clearly seen that a lot of innovations have been made in the human world and the spiritual world. The main thing that attracted me is that there is always a Mahayana old monster in the setting who is pressured by the protagonist and shoulders the important task of reviving the Li family. This made me feel the tension when reading the novel. Even when I arrived in the Nine Spirits Tribe, I was not being hunted by the Mahayana monk but was still being hunted by a barbarian. So this is mainly different from other mortal novels. It has an interesting setting, which also attracts me to continue reading.

Quality guaranteed, Li Dakai, don't let us down. The ending of "The Story of an Old Man Cultivating Immortality" is not good, but the beginning is very exciting.

I read "The Cultivation of Immortality in the Elderly" first. When I discovered this book, I was full of expectations. More than 2 years later, I still remember a lot of the content in the story of cultivating immortality in old age: starting a business, touching a woman's hand to start cultivating immortality, and being cautious all the way, either "sneak attack + concentrated attack" or deception. "Taoist friends followed along and showed up." There are also those things with the master and the priest, and the obsession with opening that storage bag... I don't know the order of these two books, but I personally like Li Dakai better. He is wretched, cautious, and has a very distinct personality like he will not let go of rabbits before he sees them. Li Qingzhou is also wretched and cautious, but he can't do it early without any benefit. Thanks to the author for his excellent work and bringing us good works. No more rushing to the end! ! !

It's almost the same as the old man's book on cultivating immortality. It gave me the feeling that it was peaceful. After reading so many chapters, I didn't feel the kind of tense and exciting fighting style, nor did I feel much intrigue about cultivating immortality. The writing style is good, but I always feel that there is something wrong with it.

Overall, it's okay. The advantage of Dakai is that the development of the story is more exciting. As for the description of fighting, I cannot praise it. It is very messy. In other novels, you can imagine the scene in your mind. But when you think about a wide-open fight, you cannot imagine it. Even if you can imagine it, it will be a very confusing scene. Just skip it and don't watch it. Come on wide open

This is a decent fairy cultivator novel, which is my favorite type. I hope that the layout in the back will be bigger. We ordinary people can still see the boundless starry sky. It is reasonable that the universe in the eyes of these immortal cultivators who fly to the sky and escape from the earth should be bigger. When it is time to change the map, don't ink on it. Don't toss endlessly with a big opponent. You will get tired. Come on, author!

The male protagonist is decisive in killing, careful in thinking, knows how to endure humiliation and bear heavy burdens, and has a firm mind. OK OK! [Laughs][laughs][laughs] Support Brother Kai! ! [Like] [Like] [Like] [Flying kiss] [Flying kiss] [Flying kiss] [Admiration] [Admiration]

So far it's pretty good, very interesting. It's not the kind of boring writing that builds up the foundation in one step. It's a plot point, a plot, many detailed scenes, and it advances slowly. The language is concise and fluent, and the humorous words are constant. I look forward to more exciting things.

This novel is very interesting and immersive. Sometimes it is unexpected, but the look and feel is very good. There are also a lot of foreshadowings. It has the refreshing feeling of upgrading and is not boring. The author can always write some unexpected plots, which is still very good. I didn't read the author's last book because I think the new book should be better than the old book. Come on, author!

First of all, I would like to give a thumbs up to the author of "The Old Man's Cultivation of Immortality" before the five-star review.

Dakai's novel is as good as ever

Update as soon as possible. I can't read enough. The content you wrote is very rich. The ups and downs of the plot are much better than other novels. Other novels are all read by the master without being tortured. Yours is much more comfortable. I rarely give people five-star reviews. This time I give it to you.

It's funny, it's humane, it's not crazy, it's not Xiao Yan, it's not Wang Lin, it's logical, it's bound to be a good work if it continues. It's just that I don't know if the innovation of the practice system can be perfectly self-consistent. Expect. Update soon! ! ! !

This book and "Family Cultivation of Immortality: The Rise of the Poor Spiritual Farmer" are my two favorite books among Tomato novels, super weird imagination, great [like][like][like]

Tomato is a rare novel about cultivating immortals. There are no cheats or time travel. The narrative is smooth and the plot is stable. Although there are a little bit of poisonous points in the early stage, it is overall remarkable. The rating is too low, which affects the development of the book. In the end, the author was forced to unfinish it. It is a pity. I am looking forward to the new book.

From time to time, I usually find books to read by myself. This is a book that was automatically recommended by the system after I finished listening to the chapters I was following. I continued listening to it without switching to listening mode. I fell in love with it after listening to it. The male protagonist is indispensable for his fate. He is generally kind, but careful, upright, and decisive. I have only been following it for 5 days, and I have read less than 1/10 of the entire book. Recommended, if you like it you can try it.