I! Immortal! Already Read and Reposted!

Please bear with me as this is my first time writing a novel. Please correct me if I am not good at it. The author is always learning!

After reading it in one sitting, the plot is a bit clichéd, without too many twists and turns. For old bookworms, you can know the subsequent development at the beginning of the short story; but the details are reasonable, and there are not too many forced conflicts and pretentiousness. I hope it will continue to be like this. Finally, I would like to mention some personal opinions. After all, the protagonist wants to become a god. It is best not to involve too many personal causes and effects with the pilgrims in the future, and to maintain the character of a god.

This is the first book review I'll give you five stars.

Author, how could you do this? The Guinness record is for typing 807 letters per minute. Calculating that each Chinese character requires six letters on average, you can type about 134 words per minute. Since you are not a holder, we will calculate it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours, and you spend about two hours eating every day, and then 20 minutes eating. Toilet, 40 minutes to wash up, one hour to exercise, two hours to get inspired, and another hour of daze fishing, you should have nine hours to type, Linyi typed 435,780 words, based on 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 36 chapters, but you only put so little content every day, what's going on? To be honest, is it a deduction? The donkeys in the production team dare not take such a rest, the author quickly got up to type!

The first wish came true, but it was not friendly to the hospital. For the second wish, why do I feel that it doesn't matter whether there is a protagonist or not? He relied on his own changes, and the protagonist didn't provide any help? [Cover face]

In Taoism, ordinary people are usually called "good believers", "good men", "good women" or "lay Buddhists". These titles reflect Taoism's respect and expectations for ordinary people, hoping that they can obtain good rewards and blessings through belief and practice of Taoist concepts. It seems that the donor is called this because he is a Buddhist.

One afternoon during school, you just woke up and opened your hazy eyes. What caught your eyes was a tall ponytail and a few strands of broken hair hanging on her ears. The sun shone through the dilapidated windows of the school and shone on that girl who may not be particularly beautiful, but her smile was unusually clean. , On the side face of her fair face, she was quietly reading a romance novel. The sun seemed to add a golden glow to her. She was wearing a white shirt, clean and tidy. In this way, her figure remains in your mind, and you may still recall it until the moment you die.

It's pretty good, but I feel a bit bored at the moment. I hope it will be interesting later [eating melon] Will there be a female protagonist later?

The author's writing style is exquisite and every point is described in detail. (Commonly known as a little watery.) Overall, it looks pretty good.

Now that you have become gods, don't worry about continuing the family line. Don't you still have a sister?

It's okay, just a little bit less

It's a good subject matter, but the pace is too slow. I can write three chapters on one thing, and there is no problem in jumping from chapter to chapter.

OK, I watched until 4 o'clock in the middle of the night, and found that I finished reading and could finally sleep [laughing and crying]

Give me a five-star encouragement, come on

I like this style very much

It's good-looking, but not good enough. The male protagonist is a growth type.

It's quite interesting. I like it. I feel like the plot hasn't started yet, but I didn't expect it to be almost over.

It's beautiful, I love reading it, I like reading it. This book is very suitable for my taste. Come on, author.

The writing is good. Each story is well written, and the construction of each story is also good.

The author's writing is good, but the matter about the fat cat seems to have been reversed by an official announcement.

It's still okay. The quality is in the first echelon of tomatoes.

I think it's good to hear detailed stories like this. Don't just brush them off and you won't feel anything.

Update quickly, but also pay attention to rest, especially your eyes.

I crowdfunded a book and everyone came up with the plot, and I summarized it. How about trying this model? Everyone feels more involved when they see themselves writing a book

It's good, I just want to be with that girl

. Good job, author, come on.

The God of Evil has completed his appraisal,

It's okay, just a little bit lacking [smiles]

When in doubt, ask your heart first

So far, it looks good