The Master's Punishment and Punishment of Evil

It's not bad. The protagonist's abilities are not super-normal and the CP is suitable. I still want to combine the protagonist and Su's CP. Update quickly, author! ! !

But it must be updated and completed. Don't be removed from the shelves again, and don't be a eunuch. Come on, author

There aren't many Tomato Master fanfics, and this is the only one I can pick up, but it's really short! ! ! @

To be fair, the writing style of this book is not outstanding, but the author's character design is very accurate. I have only read one Tomato full-time fan fiction with this level, and this book is currently the highest level of Tomato full-time fan fiction. The author must live on

The plot is very reasonable, not obtrusive, the characters are full-bodied, and the background is reasonable, but the author is a bit short and hopes to update it more.

Stop being eunuchs and have more original and interesting character interactions.

It's been a long time since I've seen a good full-time fanfic. The characters are relatively full. I've started to dig holes now. I hope it won't be unfinished or interrupted. It's really good. That's it. . . . . . . . It's too short. . . .

The book is very good and deserves five stars, but the title is wrong. It should be "The Master of All-Time: Two Rogues". [Laughing evilly] Ye and Lin Chunchun are two gangsters, haha, they deceive people without batting an eyelid. The author, please don't stop updating. The two pairs of CPs are also very impressive. I like them.

I've read a lot of The Avatar fanfics. The professional European Emperor of Flash Husky has also seen it. This book in Tomato can be regarded as a masterpiece, and it is a new setting like the previous The Uncrowned King. I hope the author can work harder and keep writing, and I hope to see a good creative full-time fan complete it on Tomato.

Write a sequel. There are still a lot of holes to fill.

It's very beautiful, but... It ends a little too quickly. I want to see the beginning and the end... But where can there be no regrets in life? It's just a pity that this book was a little too quick. . . (՞⸝⸝O̴̶̷̥᷅ ̫ o̴̶̷̥᷅⸝⸝՞)

Looks good, not too unrealistic, very good

There is a good balance between the protagonist and Ye Xiu's presence. The emotional line is delicate and not abrupt. The plot moves quickly and does not drag out. The overall feeling is that it is the best part of Tomato. The author should be a veteran. This book does not look much worse than the original. Remember to check the score for those who come later.

Hey hey hey hey hey hey

Come on, please keep writing [Like]

It's pretty good, but the author is too short.

It's pretty good. I hope it doesn't end badly. A little too short.

(Personal opinion) It's a very good fanfic, the private design is smooth and logical. But there are also poisonous points. In my opinion, the biggest poisonous point may be emotional money (I personally think it's weird), because Butterfly's books don't have this [face-covering], there are only ambiguities (Ye Ping and Ye Ping are inseparable, Melee Mage's Thousand Miles Drunk and Slim Waist Dance, etc.)

I'm curious, how did you give me a sudden ending? I can't figure it out

It looks really nice, no system or anything like that

Cp Ye Qiu and Chen Guo should be very fond of Ye Xiu and his younger brother Ye Qiu

Tsk, it's a pity. This book is quite good, but it ended a little hastily. I don't know why, but I still recommend it.

It's a great fanfic of The King of Avatar. I just hope there are no more eunuchs and there are more chapters every day, haha.

Except short, everything is good

Not bad, keep up the good work

It looks good and can be written well.

The writing is pretty good, good luck to the author.

Not enough, not enough at all

There's not enough to see [crying]

Not bad, perfect, but a bit short! ! !