I Am a Mortal Who Traveled Through Time to the World of Cultivation

Advantages The beginning of the whole story is described in detail in three or four chapters, giving the protagonist the goal of saving his lover and the world, which is not bad. I have read a lot of time travel and immortality books. In many of them, the protagonists randomly (or systematically set goals) to conquer the world and conquer the universe. This is too brainless. However, the character setting of the protagonist in the book is very good. It has the excitement of ordinary people when they first arrive, but also confusion and doubt. A protagonist with an online IQ is definitely much more attractive than a protagonist who only throws problems to the author. Moreover, the protagonist does not have any unfaithful foundation, only perseverance, and it is also very realistic. This is really eye-catching among various assembly-line-style immortality novels. All the NPCs are also very sensible. They have regained his missing brain. No one is idle to find fault with the protagonist. Some of them just watch with cold eyes and write about the strict discipline of the sect. Disadvantages The first is that the paragraphs should be thinner, some paragraphs are still too long. Then, and the point I have the most objection to, is the relationship between the protagonist and Su Muxue In fact, according to logic, there is no problem in writing this way. Xiao Feng binds the protagonist with marriage for the sect, and the protagonist and Su Muxue fall in love based on the role of love, but! ! ! It was too sudden. For me, I was not ready for a heroine. Normally, it would take many chapters to write scenes with the heroine to let readers feel the character of the heroine. To start flirting with such a simple thing, not only did it not make me feel sweet, but it was a bit uncomfortable. Didn't it say that in the book? , He wanted to resurrect his dead wife, wouldn't he feel a little unnatural when he was teasing Su Muxue? It felt like the protagonist was a little resistant at the beginning, but then there was no description. Some readers are tricky and will give up the whole book if they feel a little uncomfortable. They will not give them a chance, which will also lose a lot of traffic. All in all, it's remarkable

Good setting, great potential