I Teach Orphans to Read, but They Slaughter All the Martial Arts!

It's been a long time since I've read a novel like this in one sitting. It's great, but the author. . Can father-daughter love be avoided? I feel that it is physically unacceptable. . . . All in all, I'm really looking forward to the author's future achievements, keep up the good work

Should I say it or not? The writing is really good. I enjoyed watching the part where I was born with a powerful skill and ran behind me.

Support a wave, this kind of subject matter is rare.

Give me a five-star review to encourage you [laughing], the author will work hard to update

The subject matter is relatively new, and I finished watching it once I saw it [crying] It's faster, faster, and it's only 100,000, it's not enough at all

I really like this kind of group portrait story. First of all, the protagonist remains invincible and has a sense of satisfaction. Secondly, there are many orphans with different development paths that can appeal to the public. What is most worthy of praise is that the main and supporting characters are very vivid, which makes people feel deeply involved, and also makes the development of the story line and plot twists in the book more interesting. Under the theme of this article, the content of the story can be expanded very richly, including common people, rivers and lakes, the rise and fall of power, dynasty changes, rural farming and weaving, foreign customs, all kinds of rich themes can be expanded, and it also tests the author's writing skills. So far, in my opinion, the author has written very well. The title of the book is a bit sloppy and I read it casually. Unexpectedly, it became more and more interesting and I caught up with the update in a few days. It is very good. I hope the author can maintain his writing standards and continue to update, and I hope more people can read this good book.

There are rivers and lakes, there are strategies, there are plainness, it is quite good, the intensity is just right, it is not nerve-wracking to be confused, the author gets up and updates, you are so young, how can you sleep? Have you reached the peak of your life? Have you driven a Land Rover? Have you married Bai Fumei?

I see some people are saying that Xiaolian is wrong and that she should blame herself for her misery. I think this is a typical theory of victim guilt. To be honest, if you had seen more about Xiaolian's situation when she was young, you wouldn't have said such a thing. First, what happened to her mother, she became Joan's concubine, was persecuted by her real wife, then disfigured, and finally committed suicide. Then someone died, and the wife was just detained. It's a self-imposed penalty of two cups. At this point, one person can see Qiong's obvious hemiplegia. His attitude towards Xiaolian's mother is that she is just a toy, a favored toy, which is not enough compared to her real wife and interests. Xiaolian's mother may have committed suicide after seeing his attitude. In fact, even if she didn't commit suicide, she would be forced to die sooner or later due to Qiong's connivance towards his wife. It was only a matter of time. Without her mother's protection, Xiaolian is a girl, so her importance cannot be compared with that of the main wife. If you stay here, you will be abused and bullied, and you may be forced to die before you reach adulthood. If you are lucky enough to live to adulthood, you will be sold by Joan as a bargaining chip and used as a marriage tool. And does Qiong really care about Xiaolian and feel guilty about it? I don't think so at all. First of all, if he valued Xiaolian, he would definitely let the gang go to pieces if Xiaolian was lost, but he didn't. Don't talk about searching but not finding her. I don't believe that Xiaolian can escape the search of a big gang with good sense. So you can see that Xiaolian escaped, and even Qiong didn't know that she was caught by the gangster. In the end, don't look at Qiong taking his life one by one. Will he really give his life to Xiaolian willingly? Absolutely not, he just felt that he could easily control Xiaolian. After all, in ancient times, patricide required a lot of determination. He was sure that Xiaolian, as a girl, was not so decisive. So the so-called killing him and letting those two go actually made Xiaolian unable to do anything. He was afraid that Xiaolian would kill his wife, and his gang would lose a big support, he would lose a son, and he would lose an heir. What a hero, he's just a villain with personal interests at stake. It's too uncomfortable to keep up with the updates. Is Kaiyang just stuck in the plot and making people keep reading? I won't chase you anymore, I'll start raising you.

I have read the latest chapter. The protagonist is already invincible with the blessing of three entries. The next step should be to get attack entries, or to develop power behind the scenes and dominate the world. The author writes very, very, very, very well. Xiaolian and the protagonist are seven years apart. When the protagonist is 29 years old, Xiaolian will be 22 years old. In fact, it is not impossible for them to be together. Of course, there is a girl next door who has grown up. If the protagonist waits ten years and then marries Xiaolian, it is not impossible [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] Judging from the current plot, if the map is not changed or some realms are added, it is estimated that it will be completed in about 1 million words. Your Excellency, the author, your wonderful writing is like the rain that nourishes our hearts, making people intoxicated and unable to extricate themselves. However, your update speed is like a snail crossing the road. Can you please write quickly✍🏻[smile]. Why don't you send the manuscript and let us help you check it [smile][smile][smile] The latest chapter mentioned earlier is probably around the end of the first volume. I feel that the author's writing in this part is okay, and it is different from the traditional one, but the writing style is lacking, and the wording and sentence making are a bit exaggerated. Since I am writing about rivers and lakes, I should focus on describing the atmosphere of rivers and lakes, chivalry, chivalry, the kind of gratitude and resentment, and put the heart of writing in The hearts of people in the world are focused on the sectarian struggles accumulated in the streets and alleys. In such a large world, there should be many strange people and many sects. There are heroes who are chivalrous and righteous, there are villains who are cunning, there are saints who practice medicine to save the world, there are loyal people who sacrifice their lives for the country, and so on. I am just an evaluation made by a reader from a neutral and pertinent perspective. Please do not be a slave to your emotions, do not sarcastically, ridicule, abuse others, and do not attack others personally. Reading is just for fun and relaxation. In addition, I think the author is a newcomer, and this is also the author's first book. Being able to write down a story of nearly 300 words is already very good. How many people can't write even one chapter? We are all human beings, no one is born with the ability to speak and write, they all learn it slowly. It is the first time for everyone to start from scratch, and it is inevitable that newcomers will have shortcomings in writing and plot. Don't say anything, I've made some money, let's make some money together. I don't think you've ever tasted anything good. Words like this. There is a certain order of learning and there is a specialization in the art. Someone is being born every moment, and someone is passing away every moment. You are an old bookworm. You have read online books for a few more years than the new bookworms. You know the routines of these books, so it is normal that you can't stand new books in this category. Just because you have taken the subway, you cannot laugh at those who cannot take the subway. Don't laugh at others just because they don't know how to use a mobile phone, order takeout, or shop online. Not all cities have subways, and not all people can use mobile phones. The times are developing too fast, and too many people cannot catch up with the train of the times. One day we will also be left behind by the times. When we seek help from others with a faltering step, what we get in return is others' sarcasm, trampling, contempt and ridicule. Will we also remember that we used to say bad words to others? One day, decades later, when you are holding an online book and reading it like crazy, your child looks at you with disdain and says, you can still read this kind of garbage, and you have never eaten anything good, so what should you do? Everyone should objectively comment on the pros and cons of the work and put forward their own opinions and suggestions. This is normal communication. However, comments should only be based on the content of the article, and should not be violent personal attacks, malicious ridicule or abuse. Tolerating different levels of creation, rationally discussing the issues of the work, speaking in a measured manner, and respecting each other is what reading a book review should be like.

The author's book is a good book, but the person is not a good person. He gets frustrated at every critical moment, so urge him to hurry up! This makes me look very inhumane, and I thought for a moment that the author is awesome, what kind of humanity do I need? Please update me quickly, don't force me to kneel down and beg you. Even faster, I asked the second floor to change into a man and a woman to give the author some inspiration. [Please update] Sometimes I really hate the kind of novels that tell the story of being young and then becoming old. Everything is the best arrangement to give the protagonist experience. But this kind of story about being invincible at the beginning is still about Gaowu, and when the combat power collapses and cannot continue writing, it directly writes other classic martial arts plots. The ten-turn net Gu is still working hard, and it is love at first sight, either a prince or a princess. The villain starts with his name. Can you believe that the villain in the novel is not in the dark, but the real name is in the dark. The most bizarre thing is that as long as you do something that harms the interests of the male protagonist, you will definitely fail. If you harm the interests of the villain, you can withdraw from the villain BOSS by feeding a dog on the roadside.

Very good, much better than Zhanshen, Dali, and others. The characters are well drawn, the events are simple and clear, and there is still room for white space. There are always no problems with the characters, and the writing style of the group portraits is not bad. This book has a Tomato rating of at least 9.5, I don't know why it's so low

The protagonist's system is great. It's a bit like a training camp. Each child protagonist is considered, and the protagonist himself can also gain strength. If you like this kind of article, you can read it...

Ever since I read the works of Chendong, Ergen, Tomato, Goose is Laowu, Yue Qianchou and other great masters many years ago, I have never found a work that caught my eye. I haven't seen such a good-looking book in many years. This book is very good. It's really fun to watch

The writing is very good. If you keep writing at this pace, your current level or your level may be improved. If you keep writing, keep going high and high, sooner or later you will get the copyright for comics and animation. [Like] There are more and more poison spots. Harmful

The subject matter is quite creative and good. I thought it was about an orphanage and was more about daily life, revolving around the orphanage. But it turned out that most of the stories were about the deeds of the world. The 13-year-old girl wrote something ambiguous. Anyway, of these children, I only like Daming the most. He is honest, honest, and has a cute temperament.

Very good. So far, there are no major flaws. Each character is well portrayed. I hope the author can create a better story. I will definitely give it five stars. The subsequent plot is too exaggerated, and it becomes a mindless novel.

Yes, I think the plots of Xiao Lian and Sun Sheng as well as the characters of Sun Sheng are quite good. The reason for missing one star is that the character of Daming was not well portrayed in my opinion. One: The appearance of the Ming Dynasty in the early period was too deliberate, resulting in the early plot being blunt. Two: So far, I feel that the development of Ming in the middle is pretty good, but the appearance of the princess character now makes the character of Ming feel as stiff as at the beginning. Except for the character Daming, I think this book is quite good.

So far, it seems that there are no poisonous points, and the plot is moving forward very quickly. There is no rambling of Luo Li. Each character is well-shaped and has a distinct personality. The protagonist's cheats are very good and powerful. He is the only one who bullies others, and no one else can bully him. I like this very much. The author's level is up to the mark, and there are no problems with the IQ and logic of the characters. Overall, it is a good book if it continues, and I highly recommend it! ! ! (There are many good novels that were ruined by a mentally retarded reviewer. They were revised here and there, and in the end they were completely unrecognizable and had no idea what they were called.)

Everything else is good, but I don't know if this book will be the kind of book that doesn't accept a female protagonist, but is ambiguous and wants readers with and without a female protagonist to read. Also, can our name not just be silly in every situation? If you watch it too much, you will really become allergic. Silly laughter also depends on the occasion, not to mention that he is very wise and foolish [eating melon]

It has been on the recommendation list for several days, but I still dare not click on this name. I feel very good after reading it. The narrative is clear and the content is well grasped and relaxed. The plot is also very interesting. Of course, the timeline of such a theme is very long, but if the relationship between the timeline and the story is not properly grasped, it will easily collapse. Moreover, there will be more characters, making it more difficult to grasp the characters and the relationships between the characters will be more complex. This is a big challenge for the author. But so far, I have a very good grasp. As long as it doesn't collapse, I will get out of the circle.

This book is very interesting, especially the description of Lu Bu fighting Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan. But Xue Baochai is indeed too strong. If it weren't for Noxian's outer ring + Noxian guillotine. This wave of M4's six times strafing will kill you, among other things. I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain. "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang" expresses Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot.

Preliminary review of Chapter 50 of Volume 4, an excellent work. Group portraits are the most difficult to write. In the past two years, there have been more and more group portrait articles in Tomato, but currently I think this is the only one that can be rated above nine points. The reason is simple. Most group portrait articles are written like Andersen's fairy tales, with dozens of characters and dozens of stories strung together, and the content of the expressions is scattered. Relatively speaking, the main line of this book is the clearest. The protagonist's connection with other characters is very tight. There is a grand story structure hidden in the hidden thread, and the world view is also very correct. Of course, there are also problems. The linkage between the stories in group portraits is weak. In order to increase the continuity of the stories, the ups and downs and endings of many stories lack highlights, and the development of foreshadowing also lacks a sense of surprise. I guess this may be the reason why the score does not exceed 9.5. In short, judging from the first four volumes, this book is definitely a masterpiece. If the big structure is developed well later, then this book is expected to become a god! Highly recommended! The second review of Chapter 90 of Volume 6 is a somewhat disappointing masterpiece. In fact, the writing style and story quality have matured a lot since the fifth volume, and the problems have become more obvious. First of all, regarding self-narration and flashbacks, it seems that since the success of "Ten Days", all group portrait articles have to include character self-narration or story flashbacks from time to time. But "Ten Days" is a closed-loop setting. The character's self-narration is to better highlight the closed-loop effect, and the flashbacks are to clarify the complex setting. Other group portrait articles will only imitate the expression method and look nondescript. You can pay attention to how long it took me to read this book. I skipped many chapters directly because it did not affect any plot or characterization at all. This is one of the disadvantages. The second shortcoming is the plot starting from the fifth volume. The better the writing and story setting, the better the sense of substitution in the story. What the substituted readers fear most is the procrastination of the story line. A good story should give readers enough room for imagination. When the author must write all the stories thoroughly, all the foreshadowing and hidden plots behind it will be exposed, and it will be boring. In summary, it is a good book with a good idea and structure, but it is a bit disappointing. I give it 8.9. Book friends, please make your own taste.

Okay, this book is really exciting! The rare fantasy Jianghu writing style is so wonderfully integrated, the system is not obtrusive, and the invincibility is just right. In short, there is only one sentence: "The author should not sleep, get up and write!"

The plot seems to be very smooth so far. I hope there will be more plots about orphans in the future. I feel that the description of rivers and lakes accounts for a large proportion. This kind of subject matter is still rare. I hope it can be maintained in the future. It would be better without a female protagonist (quietly)

It looks good, the subject matter is good, please don't finish it badly

It's a pretty good plot. I feel like it's as good as Guo Jing in the Snow. Although there are people fighting each other later, they all have different standpoints. I haven't seen the protagonists fighting each other yet. There are more than 100 chapters left to finish. There is a trap in Chapter 12 of Volume 8. There is a plot of killing the mother and leaving the son. If you can resist it, you can read it. It is not described.

I have been reading novels for more than ten years, but I haven't seen a good one for a long time. This one is quite good. If you like it, keep updating. Don't rest. Resting is disrespectful to life.

Write a paragraph carefully. At present, I can only say that it is very easy, quite easy. This is the best evaluation I can give. As a daily article about a group portrait, it should be like this. Everyone writes and no one writes. The main line is interspersed in the daily life. With the development bit by bit, the main line gradually emerges and is presented in front of you as completely as if the cocoon is peeled off. To put it bluntly, if a book can be read, we should read it. If we want, we can praise it and cheer for the author. If we can't stand it, we can express our displeasure. But I think people who feel that a book is not good after just reading a few words are not worthy of evaluation or not. Having said that, here are my personal views on the so-called poisonous points. Minor spoilers, please proceed with caution. The protagonist is gentle but decisive; Da Ming is honest but not pedantic; Xiao Lian kills people like crazy but it is her own choice; Xiao Fu may be a complete little devil, but I still think she is cute; Xiao Sheng yearns for love and justice in the world, so why not become a water bandit. Of course, if you ask why people are killing people, then I have to ask you to open your eyes and see what the title of the book says. So some people say that there are many poisonous points, which may be true, but they complement each other and the logic is quite harmonious. So in my opinion, it is not so much the poisonous points as it is the author's characterization and description of the characters. At least I quite like it. Let's start with this. After all, the author has only written less than a hundred chapters, and I have just read these chapters. I don't know if it will collapse in the future, and I don't care. I only know that at least so far it is a very relaxing daily book. I love so much. 24/4/25

It's quite good-looking, the subject matter is pretty good, and the characterization is quite real. I've always seen the two of them going outside the customs to look for the Thousand-Year Snow Lotus. I'd like to give some advice to the author. Personally, I think the appeal becomes less and less as it goes on, because it keeps talking about a lot of trivial things. There's actually no need to go on to write about each child's growth in such detail, because the growth of the first few children has already been written out, and the group portrait is Okay, but when you write like this, ten children have already been born. The subsequent child training makes people feel that it is very homogeneous, tasteless, and has always been a daily feeling. It is recommended to speed up the progress in the future, unify the group portraits, follow the main line of the world trend led by the protagonist, and then each child plays a role in it. I believe that most readers like me have not given up the book yet, and they are here for this. You talk too much about Little Five to Little Ten later on, which makes people feel that you have always been ignorant. Even if you have been racking your brains to write about each child well, there is really no need to tell readers everything about the growth of each child. I hope the author can consider my suggestions! It's a really good book. It shouldn't only have a score of 9.1. If the author works harder, I think it deserves a 9.5 [Learned]

Finished reading! Not enough! ! ! Hurry up and write